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| "Not the Only One" Reviews/Comments [ 570 ] | | Pages (38): [ « ‹ 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 › » ] | Reviewed By: Hieisexymiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 22:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! This, is a pretty new side to Kags.... Well, loved it and can't wait to see what happens next!
| Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 19:43 EDT
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O mah GAWD! XD lol that was kinda funny, but hawt. XP
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 18:26 EDT
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*And if he was also able to develop the scentless petal plant, he must be a truly great kitsune.* Well, isn't our Yoko a modest fellow?^_~
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 18:15 EDT
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*I totally agree with The DemonMikoShadowKitsuneGodess comment- though you missed out transfer student and Yusuke's cousin!* Along with Hiei's adoptive mother from the past and Kuwabara's long lost twin siser? It seems like I did!^_^_^
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 18:04 EDT
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A favour? He did forget with whom he's speaking, didn't he? Who said he'd have a chance to use this opportunity before his future self?^_^ And poor Kagome! With Yoko, it could be something harmless - sex-related (^_^_^_^_^)... Did again, maybe not... But with Kurama, this favour could be about his work and her miko powers... And somehow, I highly doubt she would go back on her promise, no matter what...
| Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 17:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is without a doubt the best Kurama/Kagome/Youko pairing i have ever read ^_^ i want to thank you so much for writting this story, as i constantly look for updates. You are a very talented writter and hope you muse never leaves you (lol cuz mine kinda did) and i hope to see an update soon ^_^ arigato!
| Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 16:41 EDT
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Lol. Great work1 Keep it up and update soon! :P
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 15:52 EDT
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Oh, my! I was so eager to read the chapter I missed what you said about being unwell! Hope, you'll be better in notime!
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 15:24 EDT
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*I'm afraid Inuyasha is part of this pairing-hopefully you won't stop reading because of that! I promise you'll like him once I'm done!* Well, as long as Kurama (and Yoko) are allright with this...^_^ You see, there is a very good reason why I like Kurama/Kagome pairing more than Yoko/Kagome - I really don't know why, but the majority of authors are writting Yoko with the personality of Minamino Suuichi, without bothering to put a warning about OOC! I saw this anime, I read the manga and I hadn't found anything to contradict the fact, that canon Yoko is cruel, ruthless, cold and calculating demon, who has a certain fearsome reputation and this reputation is well-deserved! You, on the other hand, aren't trying to picture him as a sweet fluffy thing, but you aren't making an emphasis on him being all around son of bitch either. Instead, you are exploring his other personality traits, the same, which insured his survival - his intelligence, curiosity, his extreme open mindness (how he took Kagome's story, for example) and ability to hang up fiddle anywhere. That's great! And, sadly, *very* rare...V_V Well, and since you've managed to make them both, Yoko and Suuichi, so likeable, loveable and believable, I really don't want to see any of them with broken heart! I repeat, it's your own fault!^_^_^_^_^_^
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 19:10 EDT
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You know, I've decided there is a thing I hate even more than I hate finding stories that are just copies of each other! It's finding the stories that are just copies of each other where Kagome is turning into DemonMikoShadowkitsuneGodess or something like this!!!!!.... Suppose, it's not difficult to figure out I just stumbled upon a couple of such stories?...
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 18:33 EDT
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*He didn't like to think the miko might know another kitsune, whose powers could exceed his* EXCEED?!!! So, for now (or should I say "the past"?), Yoko isn't (wasn't) powerfull enough to develop a scentless petal plant? Such a blow to his pride!... But serves him right! He was being an asshole to Kagome, playing with her life like this!... On the other hand, can't say I blame him - the men (youkai or not) and their wounded prides are a VERY dangerous mix and she dared to outsmart him in his own game! Honestly, one may think she has a death wish!!!! (Re-reading the begining of the chapter) On the other hand, it's just Kagome being Kagome... And Yoko being himself as well...^_^_^_^
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 18:18 EDT
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*"Or," Kagome said with secret smile, "It could have been you. 500 years in the future"* Something tells me Yoko is not planning to depart with Shikon no Tama anytime soon anymore... And believe me, I have an amazing intuition!^_^_^_^_^_^
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 17:56 EDT
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Kitsune promise! Kitsune promise, ne?^_~ I'm so-o-o not going to remember what exactly dear Suuichi was telling about kitsune's promises and the absences of tails!^_^_^_^ Hi again! After discovering only your AN on the place of the newest chapter, I'd decided to run far, far away, where I wouldn't be traumatized beyond repair by evil deeds of evil authors!!!^_^_^_^_^ OK, it was rather a planned trip and I was quite pissed off knowing I wouldn't have an internet access, but agree, the first version sounds far more dramatic! You are an author, you should appreciate this!^_^
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Reviewed By: Silent Miko Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 21:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH I WOULD LOVE TO SEE YOKO'S FACE!!!!! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Kagome4Hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 20:58 EDT
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Awesome chapter. Update soon!
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