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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 19:16 EST
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Love This Fic!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: Elemental_dea (not logged in) On: November 03, 2006 18:33 EST
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i love the new chapter! very suspenful (is that even a word?) it had me on the edge of my seat! please update soon!!! i can't wait for the next chapter!!!! ^.^
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Title: Chapters 1-8
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 14:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good! I like the direction you've taken with this so far and how the Kagome/Kurama relationship is slowly developing. ^^ I wonder if Inuyasha will ever be honest with Kagome about his midnight "meetings." After all, he seems to love Kagome but perhaps not the way she wants him to. Then I read your notes at the bottom of chapter 8 and it seems Hiei will be attracted to Kagome as well. ;) Makes you wonder who she'll end up with, hehe. ^^ I liek the story so far and the chapter length is perfect. A little more description couldn't hurt in your chapters. Keep up the good work and I hope to read more in the future! Can't wait to find otu what happens with Jurama, Kagome, and Hiei, hehe.
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 14:33 EST
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Let's see. She feels relaxed on his most private territory (in his home) and she refused to tell his whereabouts to his supposed enemy even if her own life was in danger... Suuichi will be very pleased, of course, but she has no clue, how exactly Yoko's instincts will respond on such behavior...
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 14:24 EST
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*She didn't pay much attention, hmm? Probably due to her ankle. Oh, I don't think so…* Suuichi!! Which one of you is all-around experienced-Kami-knows-how-old-kitsune?! Listen to Yoko!^_^_^
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 14:18 EST
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*Will act differently to me because I kissed him? I mean, its not that big a deal, is it?* Well, considering he didn't fight her off with his Rose Whip, it probably wasn't...^_~
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 14:06 EST
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*Well obviously they're going to look, he's drop dead gorgeous… Especially today, Kagome couldn't help noticing. The intensity of his green eyes was amplified perfectly by his shirt, the sleeves of which he had rolled up.* Oh, Kagome... If you think he's gorgeous *NOW*, I wonder what are you going to say seing him naked...^_~
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 15:02 EDT
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Inu's jealousy... Well, considering how he treats Kagome it's bound to be ugly, very insulting and hurtful for her... On the other hand, the girl has the chance to stand up for herself and stop to curb her natural responces on things out of fear Inu Yasha would be displeased (her choise of friends included)
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 14:51 EDT
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*"Kagome?" he exclaimed, before following the girl's gaze to the stunned youkai slumped on the floor. "Hiei!"* Kurama: "What's going on?!!!!!" Kagome: "He was trying to kill me!!!" Kurama (relaxing): Oh, that's quite normal! Thanks kami, I was afraid he was doing something bad!^_~
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 14:47 EDT
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So, "just a friend" she is jealous of and want to grope, eh?^_~ Actually, it's pretty normal - she knows she loves Inu Yasha, she never considered the possibility of taking someboby else as a lover, thus, while she's aware of her reactions, her subconscious mind prevents he from realization, what exactly such reactions mean.
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 14:29 EDT
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*The door burst open to reveal an out-of-breath Kurama, who presently dropped his shopping to the floor.* And even the fic's NC-17 raiting are not enough to describe here the terrible fate of eggs he just bought...^_^_^_^
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 14:24 EDT
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*This must be an enemy of Kurama's! I'll have to keep him busy until he gets back- I don't want him storming the local supermarket!* Supermarket, huh? And here I was sure her reluctance to speak had something to do with Kurama's safety...^_~
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 16:04 EDT
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"Serves you right for visiting without flowers and a box of chocolate", - evilly thought Kurama looking to the stunned youkai slumped on the floor.
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 15:59 EDT
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Kagome: Oh! He pinned me to sofa, straddled my hips... Man this guy is fast! shoked Hiei, who was using his Jagan to read her mind: Hentai onna! I'm just trying tokill her! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 15:53 EDT
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*"I always thought you were ok with his cheating, Kagome-chan! It never really bothered you before!" "Yeah, well. Maybe it's starting to,"* And just about time! It seems like their meeting is helping both - Kagome and Kurama - to get rid of "too nice and understanding to his/her own good" problem!
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