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| "Not the Only One" Reviews/Comments [ 570 ] | | Pages (38): [ « ‹ 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 › » ] | Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 15:50 EDT
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So, "Yoko's curiosity of his `future self'"? I wonder, just how Kagome is going to explain the Biochemistry to him... Oh, and have you ever seen the Japanese Art? I mean the Old Art, from 16th-19th centuries? I think, their landscape paintings and drawings in ink are amazing, but their portraits, on the other hand... Well, to be polite, I just say, that it looks like such a thing as a resemblance to original clearly wasn't master's main concern! And now, consider all this and imagine Yoko's reaction to a photograph, especially, a photograph of himself. ^_^_^_^
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 15:32 EDT
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*She had never appreciated men's arms before, as she was usually surrounded by the bulging biceps of certain youkai and hanyou at some time or the other.* Well, first of all, his upper arms are still covered, so Kagome, who squashed her urge to get her little paws uder his shirt (how could she?!!!)^_~ can't say anything qualified about his biceps, second - all pictures of shirtless Kurama are showing he has nothing to be ashamed of, and his body, however slender it is, has its very respectable amount of muscles, and, lastly, while comparing Yoko and Kurama (one is tall, strong, muscular, other - slender and delicate), people usually are tending to forget, that Yoko is a full grown man/youkai, but Kurama is still in the middle of his teen years, and he has at least 10, maybe 12 years to catch up with Yoko, and I suppose, the difference between Yoko's current and 30 years old Kurama's height and build would be almost unnoticeable.
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 15:00 EDT
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Hi! I'm back a day earlier!^_^_^ Well, I was pretty surprised to read the message of one of your readers - about Kurama having only 4 tails, because all manga scans and screenshorts of Kurama in his fox form I have are picturing him with 5 tales... But I admit, that I could somehow (I just wonder, HOW?!?!) miss it... So, if you know, where exactly I could find a picture of Kurama with 4 tales (and you mentioned you bought YYH manga, right?), please, tell me - I really want to have in in my collection!^_^ P. S. Not like the number of his tales during YYH is important to your story - for all we know, since that time he could grow several extra tales!^_^_^
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 14:41 EDT
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A-a-a-a!!! The new chapter! And I haven't time to read it! But I'll be back a day after tomorrow and, of course, you could expect a lot of reviews!^_^
| Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: Lelbet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 14:14 EDT
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Update ASAP!!!! This is an awesome fic. I love it! anyway....... UPDATE!
| Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 23:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! I can imagine hiei flying across the room with a 'wtf' look on his face!! LOL! Uh-oh!!!!!
| Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARRRGGGHH. I hate cliffies!! I wouldn't mind a kurame/Youko/hiei/Kagome grouping. . . Get back to work right now :-) I really liked Kagome smacking Hiei sideways.
| Reviewed By: Kagome4Hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 21:11 EDT
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This story is awesomely awesome! That's why I love it. Update soon and then it will be even more awesomely awesome.
| Reviewed By: Hieisexymiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 20:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, I didn't rate everything this time as I just went through hell to try and review cause first I wasn'ty logged in so it wouldn't let me, and then- Okay I'm stopping this rant right here! Well as I'm starting to expect from you, an excellent chapter that leaves me more eager than ever! Loved it, and can't help but wonder; any future Hiei/Kagpossibilities?
| Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 18:00 EDT
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It really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
| Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 08:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah kags kicks ass, great way to meet Hiei
| Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 05:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO damit I hate cliffies please update soon!!!!!! I love this story
| Reviewed By: XxhellzgurlxX [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 00:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG love it all!! lol n i kno wat u mean skoo is a bitch i have some unfinished storys that i want to put up here but i kinda have to finish them cuz if i dont i wont update tell the next year n its all skools fault, but hey got 2 get some where in life rite
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 21:27 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Another chapter! Shuuichi...rude to a fangirl? Yes! It's about time. Love the way he is so stuck on Kagome. He needs to show her, though, remember she's met the outspoken and demonstrative Youko, so she might think Kurama simply isn't interested. Not to mention the whole Inu situation. Great meeting with Hiei -- he's not going to be happy when he wakes up, is he? Hope you're not going to pair him off with someone else -- if he's not with Kagome, he's best as the sidekick/friend with no lovelife mentioned. (Just my personal preference -- everybody goes better with Kagome!) Will Inu face off with Kurama in the present and youko in the past? Ha! Love that scenario. The real question is: will Youko or Kurama get the girl first? Ah, the sweet anticipation. Thanks for the latest -- hope you add more again SOON!
| Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 19:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs* adorable. lol, truly funny seeing Hiei splat aginst the wall. I liked this chapter and the Kag/Kurama parts were cute as well. Her friends are just so annoying tho. -_- i don't know why she doesn't just get new ones, but the sub characters were interesting as well. are they going to have a bigger role as the story goes on? or were they a for the moment character? But i think it would be really cool though to have Kagome learn to take care of herself. Like have Youko or something get ofed up with the half ass way Inuyasha is taking care of her and have her learn enough to at least fend off youkai enough untill help can come. But i love these chapters and i LOVE your story and i wait excitedly for you to produce another chapter...which is something i need to do as well -_- but i hope your writting comes along great and that you never loose your muse ^_^ hehe ja ne!
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