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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 13:15 EDT
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Always love to see a new chapter of this story! Gee, I hate for her to say goodbye to Kurama, though. *sigh* I was thinking, I really hate it that she's so worried and upset that Kikyou might tell Inuyasha she saw her with Youko. I understand it, but why should she feel guilty? How long has Inuyasha been stringing her along? And just because he seems to have finally decided on her, well, ... he shouldn't expect her to have waited. It serves him right to have some REAL competition, (not like Kouga). And she was completely right -- she came back and he yelled at her, but when she yelled back, he acts all hurt -- talk about a double standard. (And yet, what is it about him that keeps us secretly hoping they find their way to each other? It's dang frustrating!) Loved Youko's thoughts about not falling in love. LOL!! And the thought that Kagome won't grow dull. Does Inuyasha ever think about things like that? Instead of getting all mad and hurt over Youko, Inuyasha needs to decide if he's serious about Kagome or not. Youko is "going for it." Maybe Inuyasha needs to try some of those tactics. Heh heh! I liked the way Youko popped in in place of Shippou to face the snake -- that was cute. Hmmm. How many chapters are we into this and I still like all three possible beaus? (Though I have to point out, Kurama is the only one who isn't pushing her or making her feel guilty.) I have no idea how in the world the poor girl is going to eventually make a choice. I would hate to see Inu dumb up again, but in a way he already has. He stayed to talk to Kikyou and look where Kagome is. LOL!! If he wants her, he'd better get on the ball, ne? Can't wait for more!!!
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Title: forgetful me
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 15:10 EDT
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oh yeah. can u update soon? hehehe... :)
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Title: I LUV UR STORY!!!
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 15:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your fanfic... At first, I was never into the whole crossover thing, but you really changed my mind. If you have the time, could you look at my fanfics? They are fullmetal alchemist fics but...I'm working on a yu yu hakusho one at the moment. Ja Ne! Beckyducky
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Title: I love it!!!
Reviewed By: animebook fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 12:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It just love it! It is so funny at times and yet it can be so serious at others. Keep up the great work! Please update asap!!!
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Title: I love it!!!
Reviewed By: animebook fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 12:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It just love it! It is so funny at times and yet it can be so serious at others. Keep up the great work! Please update asap!!!
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Reviewed By: Sprinda [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 01:34 EDT
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please update please.................................
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Title: Not the Only One
Reviewed By: lovedatmiko On: April 14, 2007 12:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Soo LOVE ThiS PLEASE!!!! you cant leave it like thiS it'S TORTURE!!!! I juSt have to know what happenS next!!!
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Title: Shrimpo
Reviewed By: shrimpo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 23:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I love this story! I wish you good luck with this story! I hope you update soon! ~ A big fan, Fiona
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 08:33 EDT
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i have to say this story grew on me...like what you did so far...cant wait to see the reaction...on both sides of the well...maybe kagome will finally see her strength...and the hanyo see his mistake..ha ha
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Kagome093 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 20:12 EDT
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oh my GOD!!! that is soo sweeeeet (in a completly posesive sort of way) seriously for him to literally CLAIM her (without her consent) is pretty ballsy i gotta say but of course concidering that it is THE Youko Kurama its not like ANYONE would complain i do gotta say though i (personally) never really cared for kurama/youko thing cause theyre like 2 completly different people so to me they dont really go together very well thats why i perfer ur kag/youko scenes cause hes just sooo hott (the spelling was edited to 2 't's JUST for him) and its awesome watching inu go green
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 16:15 EDT
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Just a billion alerts for the revised chapters, so I thought I'd just go ahead and read the whole thing over. Still love the hook -- excellent beginning. It takes me back and reminds me again of why Inuyasha doesn't deserve Kagome. Go Kurama!
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Title: Not the Only One
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner *Offline* On: April 04, 2007 11:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lolz. Property of Youko ... haha. Funny. Update a.s.a.p. When is Kikyo doing to DIE and stay that way?
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Reviewed By: ness On: April 03, 2007 08:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant believe you left it at that... damn cliffy... I cant wait to see kags reaction... I think it will be pure hilarious... will inuyasha ever see the kanji on the back of kag's pendant... oh well see you at the next update...
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 16:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh that was so hot hehe please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lelbet [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 15:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh oh, Youko's going to be in a lot of trouble! Lol, I can't wait! Hurry up and update, please!!!!
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