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| "Not the Only One" Reviews/Comments [ 570 ] | | Pages (38): [ « ‹ 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 › » ] | Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 16:06 EST
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Nice chapter! You're right: no matter what, you've always got to love it when Inu realizes how much he cares for her. (If he could only REMEMBER it all the time, he wouldn't have to worry about losing her to a kitsune, ne?) Hmmm. Yoko's having a special necklace made for her so he'll know what's going on with her? Love him going to Totosai for it. (And the thoughts about never needing female help/advice from him or he wouldn't be a kitsune -- perfect!) So, now she's going to push Yoko away? Because of Inu? In that case, Inu needs to declare himself -- he still hasn't said anything that would make her think he thinks she's the one for him, right? I mean, WE know how upset and desperate he was feeling, but SHE doesn't. And we all know how stupid Inu can be about letting her know these things. SO, I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter!! Her relationships with Inu and Yoko just got more complicated, but what about Kurama? He's got an appeal all his own, and offers a totally different kind of relationship. (At least I see it that way. Cause I love him. And I want Kagome to.) Thanks for the present! Maybe you'll help us all celebrate the New Year with a New Chapter? Yay!! Please!
| Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel(NSI) On: December 26, 2006 14:42 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh i like. yes Inuyasha and kag fluffs are fun but the Youko/kag ones are a lot more entertaining lol because youko is so naughty ^_^ well i love that i get another chapter and i can't waint for you to give me more! lol yes yes a chain for your muse does seem like a good idea...now i just have to find mine *sigh* oh well ill find it soon. love the chappy and hope to see an update soon! ^_^ Ja!
| Reviewed By: Elemental_dea (not logged in) On: December 26, 2006 14:36 EST
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nooooo! damnit! you stopped at a good part! please update soon! i'll be waiting till then. ^.^
| Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 23:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahh i have been away for far too long! I love this and i like how your are developing youre characters...although i was hopeing for more of Hiei...:\ but maybe i'll see him later in the story ^_^ i like how Inuyasha is flustered in this chapter. and also how Youko has desided to give Kagome all she needs. She definatly is a lucky one she is and i hope y ou update soon :) thank you for updating and also i hope you never loose your writting muse...ja ne!
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 01:12 EST
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Had to read the latest chapter again -- just love it! (Also loving Renata-sama's comments -- I need a fic from that woman!) Just wondering how Miroku and Sango are seeing the Yoko situation? As a man, Miroku might need to sit down and have a talk with sweet little Kagome about the dangers of hanging out with a full-grown male kitsune. ;) You know, I've been an awfully good girl this year. (No, really!) So, I was wondering if there might be another chapter for me? You know, for Christmas? Only sooner? Gotta have my Kurama/Kagome fix, and you do it so well!
| Reviewed By: Snow_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 20:24 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I luv this when is the next chapter coming out?? is Kogome going to be with Yoko I want her to be so plz make her with yoko. Thank ya!!!
| Reviewed By: Kiellle On: December 17, 2006 00:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Your story is so incrediably awesome! I can NOT wait until the next chapter comes out - I love your plot and the way you portray each character - its simply perfect. I'm completely in love with your plot and I love how you brought in Hiei - much like you I'm a huge fan of the shorty ^^ - Any way srry if that major fangirlism there but I meant every word - please update soon!
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 16:17 EST
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*I was just saying goodbye to a friend. No, you haven't met her. Aa, mother, it was a girl. Her name's Kagome. She said hello"* Her?! As in female?! On the other end of line, Shiori blinked away the tears of happiness. Between her son's pretty look, his love for the flowers, his lack of a girlfriend and his preference for the rose scented cologne (not like she's ever caught him using the stuff, but it's kinda difficult not to notice he's always smelled like a rose garden!) she was really afraid being raised without a father damaged Suuichi, and her chances to become a grandmother were close to zero. ^_^
| Reviewed By: LonelyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 00:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The best Kurama/Kagome fanfic that I have EVER read! Can't wait for the next chapters!!!!
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 18:02 EST
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(aforermentioned TBC ^_^) It's so much simplier with Yoko! His child with Kagome will be either: 1) kitsune hanyuo 2) full-blood kitsune youkai (thanks to Kagome's powers) 3) and the possibility the fandom really dislikes (can't say I'm thrilled myself, but why pretend it's not possible?) - the same powers could simply cancel youkai's blood and a child will be a normal human.
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 18:00 EST
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Just read madmiko's review about Kurama and Kagome's future children (I admit, I really like the idea of them having children - after the Quest is over and they are older. In 5-7 years, perhaps?). Well, I don't think the "hanyou's issue" is something they should be concerned about - after all, despite Yoko's inbreak into the human embryo (which, admittedly, helped Suuichi with being hot ^_^ and enabled his body to contain and to use Yoko's youki), his base DNA is still the same he recieved from his very human parents - Shiori and her late husband, thus, any child of his from a human woman will be a human. Well, in the case of Kagome, a child could inherit her holy powers. Or not. But if a child would be conceived by Kurama in his youkai form (yes, it's very unlikely, but who said he wouldn't be able to recreate the potion or that the sex with Kagome (with her being a miko and everything) wouldn't affect him like this? (BTW, the fact it *will* affect them both somehow is given - you simply can't clash two so different energies without reprecussions), then I honestly don't know, *what* exactly they are going to bring in this world... TBC
| Reviewed By: Raeko On: December 12, 2006 06:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying your story so far--I love the idea of Yoko's memories being created in the present as Kagome makes them in the past--but I just had to leave you a note to tell you that I know you keep saying that there are more (and more complicated) pairings to come, but...if Kurama and Kagome don't end up together, I may cry. You don't want me to cry, now do you?? *sniffle* Keep up the awesome work!
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 17:04 EST
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*"No…I want Inuyasha to know who I've been with,"* Go, girl! Yoko isn't some little dirty secret to hide him, he's a big silver Kitsune. With a great hair!^_^_^_^
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 17:00 EST
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*"Kagome!" the familiar whine of Shippo reminded Kagome how long she'd really been away.* *Shippo immediately tensed. The whole reason he'd been slinking around the well the last few days was in the hope of Kagome's return* Well... I'm not sure I understand where did this "few days" come from? Let's see - she returned home at the morning, went to the school with Kurama, visited him after the school, blasted Hiei, met Hoji on her way back home, called Kurama, made poor dear to explain her everything she should learn during the year, let him kiss her, went to sleep. It's the first day, right? Next morning she aced the test, learned about the fight, returned to the past. All in all, she was away a little over a day.
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 16:47 EST
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Considering she came to the past right after the school and left all her supplies at home, Kagome needs to return soon, anyway.
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