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Title: Wonderful Dialogue!
Reviewed By: ookamikasumi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 13:31 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Your dialogue is absolutely brilliant! The description is a little thin, so it's a bit tough to tell what they're doing and where, but your humor is spot on. I love your characterizations. I'm guessing that you'll have to make a decision sometime soon about who Kagome chooses. I don't envy you writing that angst scene one bit. (Eat LOTS of chocolate before you tackle it and keep plenty more next to the keyboard. I speak from experience.) Keep up the good work ~ please! I'm counting on you!
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Reviewed By: Xx-eww_noo-xX [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 17:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it! err i hate that kikyou! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: kizuna4me [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 14:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more please!!! I can't wait to find out what happens between the two!!
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 14:21 EST
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Eh... Suppose, I don't need to explain the difference between me criticizing the fic itself or just the one of the main characters' behavior?^_^
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Title: Somebody is ba-a-ack!!!^_^_^
Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 15:15 EST
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It took a lot longer than planned, but I'm here again!!!^_^_^_^ And I'm royally pissed off at Kagome! What does the girl think she's doing?! She treats Yoko in front of Inu Yasha as something insignificant, someone she needs only to pick flowers for her friend! And even worse, if SHE didn't want to have a fight with Inu Yasha, who gave her rights to make Yoko, very proud creature and a full-blood youkai, to tolerate insults from a piteous (well, for Yoko he is!) half-blood just because it's for the best for Inu Yasha and herself? And what about Yoko's male pride? If a man allows his chosen woman to be called names in his presence without defending her, how could he respect himself after such a thing? You know, I like Kagome, but for this stunt she really deserved "A selfish bitch" award! If her understanding (should I add - "unhealthy"?) makes her to let Inu Yasha to treat her as a doormat - OK, but she hasn't rights to demand the same understanding from Yoko! After all, "Inu Yasha isn't a friend of his", right?
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Reviewed By: DragonKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 14:02 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!! update soon and the hotel thing sounds promising, ne? *snickers evily*
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: February 20, 2007 01:59 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh! Kitsune seducation...(sigh)...I wish I was so lucky. And the ending to that last chapter,BEAUTIFUL!!!!! Kikyo's no friend of mine so next time I'll act as I see fit! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Most people have him just bitch her, never showin her bitchy side, but you did and I love you for it!!! Great work! UPDATE SOON>>>ER!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Kagome4Hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 23:21 EST
Comment/Review:
Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 00:42 EST
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man i cant wait till the next update. i was wondering when you where going to update i was waiting and waiting..but it was well wourth the wait! as usual it was a great chapter! i love all the fluff thats going aroung to! haha that was funny when yusuke was going to pop up in here lol and BANg there he was! i wonder what kind of party kagome is going to go to.maybe some guy will try to hit on her at the party so many posibilities well i hope that you update asap. this story is like a drug i cant get enough of it! Youko has such a sad past! i love this pairing to bad it couldnt be more complicated with hiei in it. but i cant be to picky its fine the way it is i hope you keep it up!..by the way how many comments do you get for each chapter? ...i wouldnt doubt it if it was a lot judging by all the comment you have!do you know japanese because you seem to know bits of phrases!
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 20:11 EST
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Yay! Go KAGOME!! Give Kikyo what she TRULY deserves! DEATH!!! Go Kagome! Update a.s.a.p, ok? Don't take soooooooo long this time. :)
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Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 02:24 EST
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OOOOUWWWAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was amazeing!!!!!!! What party will she go to??? I must knoow!!!! And that is a very sad child hood!!!! Poor Yoko!!!Thank u for answering my question!!!!! I hope it's a Yoko/kag story!!!!
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi) On: February 18, 2007 00:20 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter! I love your whole story. Please update soon! I really can't wait to see what happens next, and what happens when Kagome meets the yu yu gang. And what will Inuyasha do if Kagome goes with Kurama, that's longer then a day. I really want to read more. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 19:45 EST
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Yay! Double Kagome and Youko time. Loved the Chapters. why does Inuyasha show up during the best times???!!! and Kikyo too! *pouts* CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 19:36 EST
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I'm glad that Kagome stood up for Yoko. All in all it was a good chapter. Good luck as you continue!
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Reviewed By: Kagome093 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 19:16 EST
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i cant believe that yusuke actually thought he was gay i mean seriously but i have to say i might actually have to believe it if he was i mean he is just too perfect to be true HE HAS TO HAVE A FLAW!!! somewhere somewhere and mark my words someday i will find it he is too good there has to be something wrong it probably in his personality because god knows ill never find anything wrong with his body but then again his personality is part of what makes him so hot the fact that he knows it only makes him all the sexier THERE HAS TO BE SOMETHING WRONG WITH HIM SOMETHING ANYTHING *starts sobbing
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