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| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] | | Pages (60): [ « ‹ 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 › » ] | Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 17:30 EDT
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thanks for updating...i liked the format of this chapter but I cant wait for the bad gys to show up...update soon
| Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 15:33 EDT
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My God, I HAVE gotten behind, haven't I? I think I've missed the last 5 or so chapters. Whoo. Well...I don't have the time to talk/review each cahpter I missed, but I will say that I am getting more and more increasingly addicted to this piece of writing. The last chapter was...saddening! Tissues galore, I tell ya. But anywho, keep up the most wonderful writing, Sue! :)
| Title: SCORE1 for Bitty Belle and -0 for Gunnar!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 12:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gawd, i LOURVED me some Gunnar in Purity 5...but, he is such a "donkey", this time around! i'm so glad BB (Bitty Belle) kicked his tail left to right for me (cuz, i SO wanted to do it)! I'm listening to 'Strawberry Chips Tanaka Chigai Mix' and it SO goes with the fight scene **clenches fist like Shigure Sohma**!!!! Again, another GREAT Chappie! And I just want to say thanks for always updating so regularly--even when you're not feeling so great or have other things on your plate, you're still looking out for your fans! I only hope i have maybe HALF of your consistency when i start my fics (i'm so nervous)! chiao 4 now! P.S. with all the crap and guilt that Griffy-poo had to endure, for centuries, I REALLY hope there's no near-death experience for the shakey duo to come. **gulp**
| Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 09:55 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Gooo Bitty, kick Gunnar's ass!! (LOL) I can't wait till they meet up again, so update soon please!! Keep up the amazing work!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 07:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting a little depressing. I'm almost feeling like there is no hope for these two. They don't really act like mates and well, I don't know,it's just said that Griffin Marin has to be so stubborn. And what the hell is this more? Does he understand that we all have a past, damn it, get over it.
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 01:01 EDT
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Wonderful kick there Isabelle! Griffin just needs to march up to Isabelle or he's going to die of not having her and then vice versa.
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 22:28 EDT
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Was he thinking of his sister or Izzie? Either way, to a point he has sarted to think of what the similarities between the two are in his mind. He loves her, but he doesn't want anything to happen like last time, thus he doesn't. To quote the youkai spirit 'this limbo-thingy sucks.' Keep up the good work, dark
| Title: ummmm...just an overall comment on Purity 7...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 14:26 EDT
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To me, rereading some chaps, i c that Izzy is a LOT like Gin AND Kagome; inasmuch as she REALLY wants to help, is REALLY drawn to Griffin, FEELS his emotions (so he doesn't have to say a word and she "gets it"), is very self-sacrificing, and is willing to do whatever it takes to make Griffin happy. Now that i think on it, lots of the men in your fics are more physical than verbal in expressing emotions, with confliction statements and mannerisms that hide/cover (or, so the guys THINK they do), their REAL thoughts--saying that, Griffin reminds me of InuYasha (longing, stubborness, WANT to connect/REconnect, loneliness, frustration); Gavin (inadequacy issues, shyness, denial); Bas (inexperience/fear of interaction with women, insecurities, self-image issues, split loyalties--up till a certain point in the fic, neway); Cain (guilt, recrimination, the need to protect and shelter vs. fear of any tyoe of dishonor, feeling stuck); Gunnar (generally untrusting, but rather loyal to those he holds dear, hides behind a stony facade to protect himself)...it all makes for an interesting ride, every fic. i see a recurring trend in most of your fics that NEVER get old and stodgy. You're ability to breathe life and versatility and emotion and humor and depth od character keeps me coming back! GAWD, i can't wait till i get my PC! GEEZ, i HATE using the Library PCs! i look forward to your next installment! OH, quick question...were u ever planning on touching on what happened with Hank and Chelsea and a little insight into the lovelife of our beloved Ben? OHMIGAWD, Sue...puh-LEASE! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ! i'll airmail you some Pocky and even try to draw you some fanart and i'll even wash your entire household's clothes for a MONTH and a HALF! so, whaddaya say?
| Title: chapter 20
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 13:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww, leave the kitty alone, Griff! lol@butt-ugly cat!
| Title: ah hell...*sniff*...HOLD ME!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 10:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Sue, i'm a professed tomboy, in a public library, recalling every Super Bowl I've ever seen in an effort to not cry like a Kitten whose tail has been squashed by a rocking chair...I need a hug, gosh darnit! Cain, poor baby...i just wanna glomp him (and Bas, a little)...flashbacks of 'Revolution', the tears as Zelig (Cain) cried for his Papa when he left him with Sess and Kagura...*sniffle*! I wanna glomp Ben, Griffin, Izzy, and Jillian! Even though I GET his concern, I STILL kinda wanna plucK Gunnar upside his temple a couple dozen times! Ai Dios Mio! Once again, angst-nation, Sue...angst-nation! Hyuu hyuu!
| Title: :'[
Reviewed By: tinners [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the first time i have EVER cried while reading a fanfiction.
| Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 21:41 EDT
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so glad I stocked up on the tissues before I read Ch 46 *sniffs* I had read Revolution but completely forgot Daniella was pregnant *sobs* you can feel the pain & sorrow rolling off Cain in huge waves - well done Sue!
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 21:40 EDT
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This was sad. Update soon!
| Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 16:09 EDT
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oh boy that was a nice letter...it was nice to have that resolution and thank you for updating so fast...u rock cant wait for the next chapter
| Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 13:29 EDT
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OMG.. I mea, i've read Revolution before, and it's always made me cry, but i never really realized about Griffin... and i never realized that Cain knew about his mother, and... well, reading over Keijizn's letter, i just wanted to cry again, because i could really imagine Cain's face. That's one reason i love your fanfic. The old characters never go OOC (well, except for that April Fool's oneshot... snigger.), and the new ones are so wonderfully characterized, i could really feel Cain's pain as well. Keep it up... PS, are you going to explain the Kyoshi/Griffin thing soon? Because i'm certain that's who he is, after the Kumiko statue.
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