| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 11:43 EDT
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That was a great chapter. Sad, but sweet. Please update soon!
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Title: *grin*
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 10:40 EDT
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Happy Happy Joy Joy. No, not to the contents of the chapter, but to the mere fact that you posted another one. :)
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 10:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sad and beautiful.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: FriskyPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 09:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think I can describe what these last chapter's have made me feel. So much as been discovered and so much has happened. I honestly cried for the pain that Cain felt after remebering his mother and father...and his lost little brother or sister. You are truely a great writer Sue. There's no question about it.
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Reviewed By: free_freeme_free [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 01:02 EDT
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That was more that beautiful. It was moving and so sweetly said. What more can I say....I bow to you. I have to go find a tissue and just cry now.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 00:38 EDT
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No matter the faults of the child, their parents still love unconditionally. Even though the proof and the reason behind it can be pushed away, the fact is still there, naked to the eye that searches for the truth. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the saddest chapters that I have ever read! What's even worse was that Cain's mom was pregnant. I feel so bad for him!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the amazing work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 23:02 EDT
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My nose is all runny and my eyes are still dripping. Oh that was a good cry!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 01:53 EDT
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Stubborn is a good word for it. I jsut hope that Izzie is able to talk to him again. Even if it does come down to the pathetic excuse of 'you still have my research'. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 18:18 EDT
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Awwww....I loved that Gin and Cain moment; those are the best!!! Yeah, Isabelle is a lot like Gin; you really start to see a lot of her now lol. Hmm...Isabelle, you better pull out that stubborn streak on your dad's side of the family and stick to it like white on rice! Lol.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 16:53 EDT
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oh boy it just keeps getting better and better...please update soon though as I am totally enthralled right now...ganbare!!!!
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Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 13:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I KNEW IT--this chapter was coming...i felt it...i'm glad i read Revolution before i got into this one...poor Ben and Cain. Wow, deep memories to touch on, for Ben. Hmmm, I wonder... Can demons have the ability to dredge up long-forgotten or suppressed memories? If so, that could be really angsty for Zelig-sensei. Well, i'll keep reading and see. Once again, GREAT chappie, Sue!
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 13:26 EDT
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Awww, poor Izzy, she has to figure out what to do to make Griffin see that is isn't all his fault. I have 110% faith in Izzy, and I hope Gin will be able to help Griffin to with her opptimistic additude^_^. Update soon and happy late M-day.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 11:29 EDT
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Great chapter! I'm glad that Isabelle is finding out more about Griffin, as well as us readers. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 11:11 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!!! I'm glad that Gin was able to make Cain feel better!! I love Ben...he's sooo cool!! (LOL) I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the awesome work!! ^_^
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