| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 10:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, nice. I like how Ben is getting involved in helping out Griffin. On that note, I'm a little intrigued by Ben, are you going to do a fic on him, or at least a short-short?
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Title: Keep it up
Reviewed By: Kilahatra [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 20:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love your stories, I've read all of them I believe, keep up the good work! Kila
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 15:40 EDT
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Wow, I was right... goes to show that I've been reading your stories too long, right? I've started to get into your mind! ...Or I'm just really tired. Things like that tend to click when I'm tired. I just hope that Izzie and Grif will be able to understand that they do love each other before it's too late. I'm also concerned that Griff will take Zelig's response to the situation the wrong way also. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 11:22 EDT
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That was a great chapter, sorry I haven't been reading in the last couple of weeks. I've been studying for exams, and after school had let up, my family and I went to the Florida for a week. So now I'm back and I can dedicate my whole summer into reading 'Purity 7: Avouchments.' I never thought Griffin to be a killer, and I'm glad that he is not, I hope that Izzy can get Dr. G to see that what he did for Cain was good, and Gunner can finally lay off since Dr. G wasn't a murderer
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 22:41 EDT
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that was a great chappy!! now that the truth is out there i hope gunnar backs off of griffin and griffin gets isabella back! ok update soon : )
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 22:38 EDT
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Ah, so, Cain finally remembers it all! Poor Griffin; I feel so bad for him, he shouldn't have to carry all that guilt with him. I wonder how he felt when he was being thanked for saving Cain's life. Hmm.....wonder if we'll find out next chapter. :D Thanks for the early update, Sue :
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 14:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! So, we finally know the story behind the scars!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the amazing work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 12:44 EDT
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LOL! i'm STILL LMFBO A Jezebel, by the way!
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Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 12:41 EDT
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chap 44...yeah...(i am LOSING it here! OH, how the plot thickens!!!) Shippou really may have some deep, necessary memories to talk about, soon, right? and i would love to hear lots on sango and miroku from Griffy-poo. well, i'll see, won't i? great chap, as usual!
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Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 12:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff*
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 11:44 EDT
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Great three chapters! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: free_freeme_free [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 01:26 EDT
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Another great chapter. I had a feeling that somehow Griffin was involved with Cain's father's death. This was such a great twist. I am now going to have to re-read revolutions. Thank you for the commentary regarding your story lines. I certainly would have asked how you thought to tie the two stories together. I may have to join your form now. I'm so into these stories that I hope the purity series will go on forever or at least until the rapture comes, which ever is longer. I JUST LOVE YOU!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 01:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!! All this time I knew it I knew it I knew it. HAHAHAHAHA you are a GENIOUS!!!!!! ROFL
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 00:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely freaking love you!! That was great and how you drag along for 40 chapters throwing in hints of this and that, it was fabulous!! I loved it, I'm so glad that it wasn't a really bad thing, I just hope that now the Ben, Cain, and Bas had forgiven him. Maybe Griffin can find some peace. Maybe,,,maybe he can forgive himself. I wonder how gunnar feels about this, he was digging around looking for something bad when Griffin saved Cains life. Don't get me wrong, I understand that he shouldn't have gone there with those guys, but hey, he saved Cains life. Gosh I love the way you write, I'm still trying to be like you!!
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Reviewed By: Sephrenia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 14:14 EDT
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Ohh! That was a very nice cliff there. I kept hearing dramatic music in my head while reading the end. I assume that you have these stories planned out before writing them, but how much? And how much changes when you type up the chapters?
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