| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] |
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 10:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
intresting. ~tba- hey! im suppossed 2 talk! ~sessh- and u never cease to.-sigh- ~tba-wats that suppossed to mean?!!!!!!! ~sessh-looks at her- dont ask. ~tba- pouts-i .hate.ur.guts. ~sessh-i have many enimies. though i never thought u would be one. ~tba-humph. ~sessh-still stubbon i see. ~tba- wat the hell's with u!!!!!!!! ~sessh- i am calm. as u are not. learn to control ur actions and.. ~tba- bastard. ~SESSH-GROWL-wat?! ~tba- do u want me to repeat it? ~sessh- if u wish to die. ~Tba- bastard! bastard,bastard,bastard! sesshomaru -sama is a bastard! he's a prince with ice up his ass! he's a fuckin damn idiot! bastard,and he has no emotions!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~sessh-takles tba- flexes claws- u shall pay! `kagome-pulls sessh off tba- ~sessh- u got lucky!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~tba- dusts off clothes- yea yea. wat ever. -waves-update soon! bye! ~sessh- comes running in-die!!!!!!!!!! ~tba-side steps- ~sessh-bumps into a tree-ugh... -little dogs run around his head- uh.......... ugh ~TBA~
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Title: Another Great Chapter
Reviewed By: Kagome357 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 01:42 PST
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One, I'm very sorry for you loss. Two, congrats on the Dokuga nods. Three, your story is so intricate and beautiful. It's one of the very best stories I've ever read. Out of respect for your loss, I'm going to keep my review short. Take care of yourself.
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Reviewed By: InuWhisperer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 16:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I normally do not review per chapter..I prefer to read a completed story and then review...however, I feel I must review, if for anything, to hopefully give you the extra motivation to update quickly. Your writing is excellent and only a few others can share this honor. I hope you don't get too oxygen deprived being that high up!! Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 23:12 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations on your three Dokuga nominations. You deserve accolades. I am sorry to hear about your family's loss. Thank you for taking the time to give your fans a new chapter. I see Uchuu was not swayed by Kagome's pleading to reveal the name of her cell mate. The next chapter should be quite an emotional one, even if it is expressed only in thought and not in actions. Just a hunch. Jean
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 21:52 PST
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Ya know it really did surprise me when Shippou rescued Shin. Now I understand why and I'm laughing my ass off about it. Poor Shin doesn't have a clue that he's already lost. As for Inuyasha, He's about to get a rough lesson in the intricacies of love, in more ways than one. This chapter was extremely well written. Thank you. DD
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 17:31 PST
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Wow, that was exciting! For a second, I catually thought it was going to be given away. I thought for SURE that Kagome was going to tell Uchuu whom she thought her youkai was, and he would act in a way that would give it away. And I actually feel bad for Uchuu - he knows now what lies ahead for both Kagome and Sesshoumaru and he can't help; he did his part. For once, I'm going to have to say that I absolutely cannot wait for the next one! My thoughts are with your family - I'm so sorry for your loss. One last thought before you go - maybe it's coincidence - maybe not, but Nobou and Nana? Could you possibly be a NANA fan? I almost cried when Nobou told Rin that Nana lives to cause him pain... Anywho, thank you so much for thinking of us fans even though you keep having to deal with so much in your life. And congradulations and goo luck with the nominations! -PB
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 17:16 PST
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oohh...i can't wait to read more. so, i wonder just exactly what inuyasha is going to do when he finds out this is a sess/kag story. lol. i feel sry for kags. i can stand all the darkness anyone can throw at me, i'll just go read one of my stories or a set of x-over oneshots for a happy pill, lol. but i can't stand a tragedy. so here's to hoping there's no tragedy. *downs a glass of something strong* ah... FL
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 16:29 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always love your updates. I'm glad that the meeting went as well as can be hoped for with Inuyasha in the picture. It would be nice if that Kagome's new friend (forgot her name just now) was there to distract Inuyasha from coming in between Sesshoumaru and Kagome, but that would probably go up like a lead balloon and probably make the girl think that Inuyasha wasn't all that interested or something... the thing where the little pervert dragon was watching Sango and Miroku was hilarious. I kind of doubt that it will make him think twice about flying into peoples windows uninvited. He's going to get caught one of these days(again) and it ain't going to be pretty. I live how Rin handled the prejudice youkai with the stinky wound. I like that she's smart and cheerful kind of like Kagome and really growing into it. I definitely look forward to the next chapter. I hope it is out soon!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 16:24 PST
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i love the pace of your story, it's not rushed, but moves along nicely. I can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: yabou-chan On: February 05, 2008 13:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just got caught up reading this (like 6 chapters!) I'm so glad that you're keeping it up. Wonderful job, and I can't wait to see what will happen next!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 18:48 PST
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Wow I can't believe how long I was avoiding my e-mail I got to read two new chapters....hehe *smiling embarassed like* Nice tuch with Kagomes dream I was wander how you where going to make her reolize that it was Sesshoumaru that he loved so much...hehe funny thought, No?......I was also wandering how Uchuu and Sesshoumaru's encounter would be I'm glad at how it turned out I was better that I could have hoped...ok maybe not they could have been all buddy buddy but one works with one has....such as a stuburn honor Torn TaiYouka.....yaaaaaaaaa....I wander how Kagome will react to her Lost friend Uchuu I wander if she will make him tell her how he knew where she was or make be tell her of the silent Youka....ooooooooooooohhhh...grrrrrrrrrrrrrr...update soon before I avoid my email again...sigh...to much junk mail...sigh...................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: CapriaStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 07:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so love this story and can't wait to see where you take us next. The way Sesshomaru is falling apart is very accurate especially for a victim who is trying to deny anything happened. I also like the way you made Kagome aware of the identity of her lover/cellmate. The budding romance between Shippo and Rin is a beautifully sweet aside that gives the story wonderful balance. You are a very talented writer.
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Title: I agree, don't rush this tale. Take your time!
Reviewed By: Doberbitch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 16:44 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a story! I am loving it and we here, at the university, are HAPPY that the story IS far from over! I do read all of your A/N, so I knew about chapter devoted to King Hyuuga and his wives. Great job, by the way. We talk about that chapter in depth. Girl, you had us almost shy about sex talk! I loved how you are not afraid to branch out and develop other characters and that's what made chapter 26 just awesome. You are very talented and I don't think I will get tired of letting you know it. A special greeting to Risa and a sincere wish for you to feel better. You work well with Rinsternalsoul and you are doing a wonderful job as her beta. Bye, for now and keep up the wonderful, exciting writing. Take care--the both of you! Doberbitch
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Reviewed By: Inuwhisperer On: January 22, 2008 10:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn good story and very well written. The reader can almost feel the pain and humiliation brought on the major character. I definitely am looking forward to more chapter updates.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 20:09 PST
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phooey, well, sooner or later i had to come to the end of what you had posted. i just hope that you update soon. *stretches neck* let's see now...i read all 26 chapters, excluding the yaoi, including the author notes in less than two days. wow, that's a personal record. *grins* your beta is awesome, so i send my compliments to her as well. great story line, and great plot. i want to know what inuyasha's gonna do. i certainly hope that he doesn't go after uchuu too much, although, knowing him, it's fight first ask questions later. let's hope kagome gets there quickly enough. well, i am sitting on edge waiting for the next update. congrats on all your awards. FL
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