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| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 › » ] | Title: wow
Reviewed By: monk-miko On: July 05, 2007 22:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope that you write another chapter soon cause I been waiting for this chapter to come. This story has gotten so good that I keep rereading it. Hope to see another chapter soon cause this is just to good to stop reading. Good luck with the next chapter. I know that it will be just as good as all the chapters you have written.
| Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 20:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is getting rather exciting. I do hope they escape. Thanks for the update, you rawk!
| Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 19:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
horray! Sounds like a good development! Please update soon~!!!
| Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 17:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, another great chapter. I was so pleased to see an update in my inbox. Can't wait for the next chapter, as you have me waiting on edge with this. Bravo, as always!!!
| Title: Aewsome
Reviewed By: demonlordlover On: July 05, 2007 16:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I'm so glad I got the update notice! Where to start? Kagome and Sesshoumaru have progressed so much in this story. It's not about lust (not that there's anything wrong with good, ol' lust) but something deeper. I'd read that the comraderie between those who have suffered together is something that can only be understood by those who have experienced it. In this story, you've crafted such a wonderful tale of survival where Kagome has become the safe harbor for Sesshoumaru to rest in. There are many ways to die, and as Sesshoumaru has revealed, his captor will torture him with them all until he is nothing. Kagome's spirit, however, has become the bulwark against that inevitability, however. I am looking forward to the escape, but merely because you have written of their angst and fear so well that I feel it. Not a happy feeling! But...the hope you've also weaved into the tale keeps me coming back for more. Rin and Shippo are a nice secondary story, and the inclusion of Kouga and Ayame, happy and now with a daughter, give me added hope that Kagome and Sesshoumaru will be given, at least, a slice of that happiness. I also read that this isn't yet 1/2 done way. I can see that. It is one thing to escape, but some chains cannot be broken so easily and can threaten to keep one imprisoned in your own mind. The tortured thoughts of Sesshoumaru show that Kagome's got some majoy healing to do, nto to mention his own personal thoughts on his masculinity and the deep shame that such violations as were forced upon him have fostered. Being out of control, having to submit-especially in such ways-could destroy a lesser male, let alone one with his pride. Sheesh, it could take fourty chapters just to reconcile himself with what happened, while restoring his faith in himself, both personally and as a male! Okay, I'm getting long winded. I just really enjoyed this chapter, and am captivated by the whole story. Until next time, hopefully not too long!
| Reviewed By: Inusbabe (nsi) On: June 21, 2007 09:16 PDT
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So he is starting to replace Asuza with Kagome while servicing her.
| Title: So says the dream
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 20:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What I'm about to say is real, last night I dreamed that this story was updated...it was a little weird to wake up and find out that it was... I can't wait for more, I just keep getting more and more into the story line, great job!
| Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 19:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh awesome as always. Enjoyed getting a double chapter. Can't wait to see how the next unfolds and hopefully they all can escape together. :D Po Sess though... but I like that he could blur her the bitch out with a good vision. :D ~Ang~
| Reviewed By: Shadesof Night114 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 15:08 PDT
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Yea!!! two chapters for the price of one. love this story keep up the great work.
| Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 12:47 PDT
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thanks for the double post
| Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 12:11 PDT
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Chapter Twelve: I really hope you have Chapter Thirteen out soon! This story is riveting and I can't wait to read the rest and find out what hapens.
| Title: Fantastic
Reviewed By: demonlordlover On: June 12, 2007 06:11 PDT
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I loved it. I had wondered if I would come across a story with the use of menses as a source of strength for youkai. I'm glad it was you, as I really like how you're doing it. The plot thickens! I am a little afraid of how the next chapter will go, as I am not looking forward to more noncon with Sesshoumaru, but like I said before, I know you'll make it all okay in the end.
| Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: Tiegrsi On: May 26, 2007 00:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do so enjoy your writing! I am so happy to have come here and found this story, as I normally only read things on A Single Spark. (Being obsessed with the Sess/Kag pairing makes it somewhat difficult to weed through other sites). But, here I am, and HURRAH! Here is a story from one of my favorite authors! I must say, although this story is very dark, and I feel badly for the characters, I also think it's an excellent plot. I really prefer the stories that put the characters in serious peril, because I enjoy the way the psychology of it makes them grow and change. I am bookmarking this story to come back to later. I will be looking forward to your next update! Thanks for writing! :) Hannah a.k.a. Tiegrsi
| Title: Violation of honor
Reviewed By: angel-fighter [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 12:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello Rin! long no see. I can tell by what I read that this is a wonderful fanfic and I can tell you that the plot is really interesting. I am glad that you have a beta, though I don't think that you need were in need of it. I mean, heck, your grammar and spelling was very very good (close to perfect one could say). I think that the the fanfictions you write are worth to win the in those categories they are nominated for and I don't think that there was a given reason for you to be kicked out. I think a good story with the ejoyment factor ten is worth everything even though the occassional little mistakes. I really like the story though that I do not like violance and suffering of those who are defenseless, but it has to happen sometimes. I really appreciate your portrayal of Kagome and Sesshoumaru and I do like the snow monkey as well. He is really a good character. For Rin and Shippou, yuppee, they are in as well. For Kagome, I never liked it when she was pictured like a little squeeky girl who would cry by every occassion. I see her as a brave girl and really like the way you let her act in the story. She is stronger than many would anticipate. Also, it's good that you mentioned the problem of rape among males. It's also a subject not discussed that often. It happens time and time again I would say, thought he rape of women is mentioned on every occassion, this one stays hidden in the shadows as if it does not exist at all. I feel pity for the victims and so I feel pity for Sesshoumaru, Kagome and Uchuu. I really hate when someone suffers, no matter if child, adult or an animal. I always wish that I could do something to take the pain away. Unfortunately, you cannot always help even though you wish it with all of your heart. I still think that it's a good story despite the darkness in it. I know that everything will come out good and that's the important thing. For Asuza- what a nasty bitch. I hope she will get her revard for all she has done. You know, in my country there is a saying: God's mills grind slowly but sure. That means that you will pay for your crimes and that justice will catch you one day. She is so ill tempered the woman, but I know you have a surprise in your sleeve. I am curious what is going to happen in the coming cahpters. If you wonder, I am printing the story so I can read it while traviling in train. I have been silent because I was sooo busy that I did not have time for anytthing. I was not reading, I was not working on my own story. I practically did not live the past few months. I appologize, because I promised tha I would read Madman and review, but I never came to it.I am catching up with all the things. I also promised to have the website about Vienna ready. Don't have to tell you that I did not make it, huh? Sorry that I did not keep my promise. I hope I will catch up with everything....I still enjoy your stories. Take care and until later. Angelfighter
| Reviewed By: Chaos and Serenity On: April 24, 2007 07:20 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was so thrilling! I'm literally on the edge of my seat anticipating the next installment! Shippou, the hero, saves the day - maybe - and Sesshoumaru, the valiant, makes his stand - uhhh...maybe...? Keep me guessing, hun, 'cause I love it! I'm undeniably hooked, as I've said before, but I can't say it enough. Stories like this one are few and far between and so I say thank you for writing this awesome, super-fantastic story just for my reading pleasure! That didn't sound self-absorbed... Seriously, thank you for taking the time and putting forth the effort to weave such a spellbinding tale of loss and hope. We really do have it better than we think. Thanks for reminding me of that.
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