| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] |
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Reviewed By: yue no rei On: April 20, 2007 05:17 EDT
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Hahaha I noticed you updated on mm before ff.net so I decided to pop in again XD I really enjoyed how you brought up the problems that Kagome was having and her memories well nicely written. It looks like this fic is gonna become one of my crossover favourites. Keep up the awesome work ne?
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 22:33 EDT
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EEE!!! I loved it! Yet again, great detail in EVERYTHING you write! I just loved this new chapter! But, some how.... I think the next one will be even better!!! ^__^ I can't wait!! Hiei!
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Reviewed By: Alissa On: April 19, 2007 21:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so happy when I saw you updated and then I felt all loved when you commented on my comment! :D But I have to say that I loved the new chapter and the way you ended it was great and I cant wait till the next chapter! So please update fast and just keep writing!!!!
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Reviewed By: BrokenSouledPoetess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 20:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fic so far. Great story line and I love the tension between everyone. You write wonderfully and the chapter length is perfect, as is the characterization.
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Reviewed By: SmilingKitsune On: April 19, 2007 14:38 EDT
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Once again a fabulous chapter full of wonderful things happening and my favorite.. err combo Kurama and Youko. I like the new addition of Kag's old teacher. He seems like an eccentric one worth keeping around. Yay for eccentrities :D
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Reviewed By: Me Myself & I On: April 19, 2007 14:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading your story!! Now I wonder what Hiei is going to be doing to Kagome now that she is in hie cooling down spot! Hope they find out soon that she didn't kill her mates. I wonder who killed them though. I just bet that Ayame killed Kouga because he did'nt go with her, she always was a little freaky. Personally I think it would be better if it was just a Hiei/Kagome fic because they are TOTTAL opposites and well opposites attract. Kurama seems like too much of a good choice for her she needs a bad boy in her life not a good boy! Please update soon you just don't know A LOT of people really like your story so they want to know what happens next as soon as possible!! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 12:33 EDT
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No, you aren't too rushed. I just didn't want you to take my joke seriously. I love your story and check for updates frequently (like everyday). So you wont' hear me complain if you update often. I have seen some writers try and hurry a story to please the fans I don't want you to do that is all. Keep up the good work and can't wait until the next chapter!
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Title: Black Widow Miko
Reviewed By: BabyPhat_Chic69ner On: April 19, 2007 11:00 EDT
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This is awesome!!! OMG, is that Hiei that was looking/spying on Kagome when she's taking a bath? Oh my God. Please update a.s.a.p. Can't believe the Spirit Detectives suspect Kagome to be the suspect! Lol. Makes sense? Hehe.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 01:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i think this is extremely good and thanks for the reply. i love the way you write and please up date as soon as you can. ja ne!
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 00:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon...fantastic chapter, a way for words.. please update soon...
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Reviewed By: Thief Lava (not logged in) On: April 18, 2007 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your so EVIL!!!!!!! How could you just leave it like that??????? Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sardave [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 22:13 EDT
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Oooo, juicy tidbits! That was a good slice for the three; those dreams were a great touch. Now I'm ready to see what happens in the lake!
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Title: Ch. 4
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 22:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter! Yay for the tidbits of lemon! ^__^ Very nice, and w/ Hiei all hot and heavy for her! *squeal* Hehe super awesome! And thanx for answering me! That makes me feel so special, especially w/ the long answer! Youko is such a horn dog! ^_^ Makin such drastic moves on oru little miko! ... Oh! I think I know how Inu/Sess/Kouga died! Did Kikyou come and kill them? You know, b/c she hates Kagome and all? Or am i totally wrong, and am making a fool of myself for even thinking that? Can't wait for the next chapter to come out! Your such a wondeful authoress! ^__^ -Mee-chan
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 21:15 EDT
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Ahhh...*sigh of contentment* I feel so much more sane now! Thanks for that, I need my sanity! Thinking about your story had given me writers' block for my story! -lol- Anywho, wonderful chapter darling, as always! I am completely enthralled in this story, every word of it!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 21:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice he he there in the lake together hmmmmmm, I think the water might just heat up *S*.
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