| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] |
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 00:31 EDT
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woah that was a surprise... asking hiei to be her lover. hmm i think things are gunna get even more complicated
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Reviewed By: BrokenSouledPoetess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 23:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give credit where credit is do my dear. One thing that is just nagging the shit out of me though...Kikyou seems to have slipped underneath everyone's thinking processes. I mean, she was a priestess with strong powers of purification who had always wanted to take Inuyasha to hell anyway and seemed to have a penchant for giving Kagome heartache. It would make sense for her to kill off Inuyasha and then her other mates just to make her suffer. Aside from that, Kurama is really being kind of a dense ass. He's usually so perceptive and whatnot that seeing him so close-minded is kind of startling. I would think he'd be the first to see the situation from every available angle. I don't think I've ever seen him so obtuse.
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Reviewed By: Sardave [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You lie! Your work ethic is just fine; so much research evident in this chapter! Oh, to be in that lake... Keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: Angelwings21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH God now she had dropped the Bomb !!! What the hell is Kagome thinking asking Hiei to be her Lover ? UUUHH I can´t wait for the update.Please update ASAP !!! ^^
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Reviewed By: MarsStarlight [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 03:57 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that your fanfic has left me very intrigued and has drawn me in. Keep up the good work and I hope you come out with another chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: moosegirl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 21:23 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant chapter... in fact, brilliant story! I love it! Please, please update soon! Wow, simply amazing. Keep up the fantastic work, peep! ~moose
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Reviewed By: ness On: April 22, 2007 13:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this fic and i must say LOVE IT... I cant wait for the update... when will we find out who killed kag's mates... I'm just itching to know... oh well see you at the next update
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Reviewed By: Who Am I? On: April 22, 2007 11:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha Ha Ha...ooooooo its going to get a little hot in that lake...lol...i dont think i have every enjoyed reading a story as much as i do yours...i love all of the flashbacks with her mates but i absolutely love all of the paintings...i think you gave into all three of her mates different personalities in each one...i am starting to wonder who killed each of her mates..did kikyo kill inuyasha because she was jealous? did ayame kill kouga because she was pissed that she lost him to kagome even though she never had him? i cant really think of only one person that would want sesshomaru dead but i wonder if he was promised to someone else and broke it off to be with kagome....PLEASE i BEG you to give us more hints as to who killed her three mates!!!! i dont think that kagome should fall for kuramas charmes at all that she be cautious of him instead...i wonder if her sons are going to do something about him...i also wonder when hiei will get that stick out of his ass to not always think she is guilty...i wonder how everyone mostly the sons and hiei to seeing lord yomen proclaim that he wants kagome as his mate...i think that the sons should flip because if you think about it lord yomen is ruling in what would be rightfully sessouta 's land...PLEASE I WOULD BE ETERNALLY GREATFUL IF YOU ~*UPDATED SOON*~!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 09:23 EDT
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well once again you have outdone yourself and my expectations of your recent chapter. there was so much to enjoy from this chapter, from kagome's teacher to her flashbacks with her three mates. also the paintings in each of her kids room was a nice touch too. and i really like how ruthless you have youko/kurama in this fic as not many people use that side of the kitsune avatar except maybe when he fights. i had to read this chpater twice just to make i took every thing in, as there was so much detail in it again. wowwwww
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Reviewed By: Angelwings21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 18:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update ^^ I can´t wait to finally know who killed Kagomes Mates.The Chapters are getting better and better so please update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: Nobodies Perfect - Not Even You On: April 21, 2007 14:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading this story. Unlike other stories I have read this one deals with Kagome having three mates. Usually people decide on her only having one mate out of Inuyasha, Sesshomaru and Kouga. But you chose to have all three, that make for a very interesting twist. I don't understand how the Spirit Detectives could not notice that she feels that it is her fault that her mates died. I mean if you got married three times and your hudbands were each killed wouldn't you think that there was something wrong with you!?!? I know that Kagome is innocent she wouldn't have the heart to kill anyone that she loves. I highly recommend this story to anyone that is looking for something that is highly differen't than all the other stories that they have read. Great job, please continue the good work. Update soon. I just can not wait to see what happend next in the lake with Hiei. I mean he has been going to that lake to take care of his little "problem" for a while now, so I wonder how he feels to see her doing the same. Also, why is Hojo such a prick, well he isn't really it's he gets me so frustrated by being all stupid and happy go lucky. How could anyone be so dense not to notice that the person that they are after doesn't want anything to do with them. It you keep on buying a person gifts and try going on dates with them only to be turned down, or when you did go on dates that the person was ALWAYS running out on you, I mean damn can't you take a hint. I mean that is just bad.
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 14:30 EDT
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I've been studying so much that i haven't been able to get near this! Now i've got the chance, and I'm grinning ear to ear! I totally loved Kagome's dreams of Inuyasha, Sesshomaru, Kouga-kun! You did each one really well, and it was great to see how Kagome was with each mate! The pictures sounded lovely too...as ever, your decription is spot on!! Oooh, Kurama's getting stuck in there!! But thats nothing compared to the juicy lil cliffhanger you've left us on with Hiei and Kagome! Thank you!! Lol can't wait to see how that plays out!!!
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 02:15 EDT
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ahh very interesting i wanna noe wut happened to kagome's mates ahh keep on writing plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 01:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok I just reread this and thought what the heck why not right another review...I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter and I think it'll have some hiei fun in it...Oh I love that character, I don't know why but I always the the cold types, such as Sesshomaru and Hiei..I just love um.. Well Please update soon...So that I can write you another review...And I think I just rhyme?...
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Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 17:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is getting steadily better. It seems a bit slow at times, however, that is integral to the plot, which seems well planned. There are the occasional spots where there are missing words, but overall, this is a very captivating fic. I loved the imagery you painted with the paintings of Kagome and each of her mates. It was extremely well done. Each of them seem well suited to the Taiyoukai it was meant for. The one of Kouga was priceless, and is just...so...Kouga. No wonder Hiei is having issues and getting extremely well acquainted with the lake. Sincerely, Vyncent
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