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Reviewed By: Hawaiianhoney2030 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 20:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! you HAVE to update soon!!!! i love this fic as much as i loved the other ones! ahhh! she wants Hiei to be her lover! i love the little action between them at the lake ^_^ pleeeeease update soon!
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Reviewed By: Who Am I? On: April 26, 2007 17:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Hiei is going to be her lover? Well that is an interesting twist. So thats how they become close to eachother. The way that Yomen asked her to be his mate, as another person wrote he is only looking at her as if she is a "baby making machine". Kagome sees right threw that and also with Kurama and Yusuke well they are just a joke Kagome wouldn't like them to be like that. I love how you have Hiei in this story, he seems like the rought but protective type and I just love that. It will be interesting to see how Kagome and Hiei's relationship grows into something more. Keep up the good work. I fully enjoy reading this.
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 17:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HE SAYS....I was thinking this would happen at some point...You my favorite author are a pure genius, I would have never thought to write such ideas..but then again we have diffrent brains and imaginations....Please update soon...I just can't wait to see what brilliant ideas you have coming in the next chapter, I wonder if Hiei will say yes or maybe he will just show Kagome how he feels... I have a question... This has been bugging me for awhile.. I have a couple ideas on how Kagome's mate's soul's disapeared... I think That Kikyo might have stolen them, or maybe they were inprisoned in a artifact or the Shikon No Tama, Maybe a pease of clouthing or something, its just been bugging me to try and figure out what happened... Also this is the longest Review I have ever writen....Please update soon... Sincerely, loveinuyasha911(Aka MuppyPuppy)
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Reviewed By: Nobodies Perfect - Not Even You On: April 26, 2007 17:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have got that 100% right Hojo will be well Hojo. Well I don't even think I have read a story as good as this one. You keep everyone on their toes waiting to see what fast nall you throw at them next. I really dont like Lord Yomen he just looks at Kagome like she is a "baby making machine", not as if she is a real person. So Hiei is going to be her lover? Hmm I wonder what his reaction is going to be to that. He's probably going to look at her as if she is crazy and raise one eyebrow. Anyways Kurama and Yoko seem to be real asses Yoko only wants her because he thinks she will be good in bed and Kurama is all set to either kill her of put her in prison and throw away the key. Kuwabara is the only one really thinking clearly and that is different because people seem to make him as if he's an idiot but I don't think he is he just sees things in life threw different eyes, the eyes of someone with a pure heart. Well my speculation of the murders of Kagome's mate is that Kikyo killed Inuyasha for not going to hell with her. Then when Kagura found out that Kagome mated with Sesshomaru she got mad and made a deal with Kikyo to help her kill him to get back at Kagome. But when Kouga mated with Kagome this got Ayame mad thus adding her to the trio making them all with reasons to kill all three of Kagome's mates...Well am I close?!?!
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Reviewed By: Me Myself & I On: April 26, 2007 16:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really think this is the best fic I have read in awhile!! Also, if you find someone attracted and you and them are alone in a lake naked what do you think is going to happen?! I was really shocked to see Kagome having so many suitors! Let me see there is Kurama, Yusuke, Yomen, and Shippo. Having Shippo seems wrong but I know he is there more for support and to help her keep peace of mind. Also, to find out in the end that she wants Hiei to be her lover is so weird I thaught the relationship would come later on after they have some time alone together but this is an interesting twist indeed. Keep up your good work I truly am a faithful reader to you.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 16:53 EDT
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LOL!!! That was an awsome chapter, and I can't wait for the next one. I need to know how Hiei reacts to her asking him to be her lover, although I understand why she did it. If she takes him as a lover then she will be able to focas on training again, not only that but she can get away from both Yusuke and Kurama as well, they would have no reason to keep going after her... perhaps there will be a lemon in the next chapter? *hopeful eyes* Will you maybe soon explain how it is that Inuyasha, Sesshomaru and Kouga died? I've been thinking and I think that maybe it could've been Kikyo that killed Inuyasha, and possibly Sesshomaru as well for revenge when Kagome wouldn't give up her soul. I'm not sure about Kouga though because his body was left so it's hard to tell who it was that killed him, though I know that Kagome would never kill anyone if she didn't have to. I hope to see the next chapter soon as I will be thinking about the possibilities until it does come out. Thank you for writting this story and also I want to thank you for allowing the readers to understand how much Shippo loves Kagome, he really would do anything for her. With love, ~Mari-chan~
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Reviewed By: Marie-Laure On: April 26, 2007 16:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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plz continue
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Reviewed By: Youkos_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 15:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter! I'm interested about where Kagome is going to take the lover situation with Hiei and also who killed her mates if she's innocent. Really can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 13:04 EDT
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I must say that the end of this chapter threw me for a bit of a loop. I was defenatly not expecting Kagome to ask him to be her lover. I am fortunately over my morning sickness and on May 2 I get to find out if I'm having a boy or a girl. However with how active this baby is I think it might be a boy!
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Reviewed By: ness On: April 26, 2007 09:18 EDT
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Hey glad to see youre still writing... For a moment i thought you fell into the mediaminer hole... in which people start a good story and dont finish...LOL... Im glad kags decided to take a lover even more happy that its hiei... i swear if he was a real person... but oh well thats another fantasy for another day... see you at the next update... later
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 06:59 EDT
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Hmm...do I sense a nice hot lemon coming up in the next chapter??? I think so! XD This is SO murder-mystery and I love a good puzzle...I'm practically suspecting everyone, should a bug be mentioned buzzing around, I'll probably think that it's the killer! -lol- I absolutely adore every aspect of this story and I don't think that I can tell you that enough! You're one on those writers that can always keep me on my toes when usually I can see what's coming a mile away! Keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: April 26, 2007 02:03 EDT
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Very interesting. Why did she ask if he swims every night and then asked him to be her lover? What is she up to? Does Kagome and her sons know what happened to her mates? This would be interesting Kagome/Hiei/Kurama. Please update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 01:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol lol OH YES IT WAS NICE LOL oH i LOVE THIS STORY SERIOUSLY THOUGH kAGS IS A LITTLE BRAZEN HUH *s* i KNOW i WOULD CHOOSE HEI TOO i THINK... *s* i WAS SHOCKED WITH SHIPPO THOUGH BUT i UNDERSTAND WHY HE DID IT. i AM GLAD YOU HAD yOKO sTOP WHEN HE DID WELL DONE. i LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER. oH i THINK hEI WILL BE SHOCKED BUT i DON'T KNOW IF HE WILL GO FOR IT AT FIRST. BTU YOU NEVER KNOW HE DOSE LOVE DANGER DOSEN'T HE...*s*
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Title: Ch. 5
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 01:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF?????!!!!!!! Omg! Kagome-chan asked Hiei-kun to be her LOVER?! Holy crap! And u had Shippou-chan ask her 2 court him? Omg! U know how to throw some good curve balls there! I'm now lost, kinda, not really, but in a small way... hehe... Anyhoo, this is a great story, once again! i hope u update, lyk, soon b/c now i'm waiting in suspense! dang you, you dumb cliffhanger! >,< but it is a wonderful story! it's sooo awesome! -Mee-chan
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG what a cliffie!!! i cant wait to see hiei's reaction! i love the way yusuke just threw in his courtship offer...kinda like an afterthought...and shippo's SO sweet. awesome update, again!
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