| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] |
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 17:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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so the bitch ayame has finally show up and is kagome going to tell the truth about her three mates or not but plz continue
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Reviewed By: Youkos_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 15:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, I like. Hehe, excellent as usual, I loved the Hiei/Kagome scenes and Kagome's explanation certainly had Hiei surprised. Poor Yusuke, ...but I guess he deserved it. Could it be Ayame seeking revenge. I guess I'll just have to wait and see. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 14:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes it made sence why you chose him and why she was doing it. *S* very nice BTW... I think the person leader the charge against Kags is Ayami right?
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Reviewed By: Angelwings21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 12:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAHHHH LEMON LEMON LEMON ( hehe sorry had to much Coffee )OH I Loved this Chapter ^^ The Lemons are sooo hot ( UUH now I need a cold Shower )OHH you are so Evil to end the Chapter now. Please update ASAP. Can´t wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Sardave [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 10:23 EDT
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Oh, my. You really don't have to worry that you can't right a good lemon; that was one hell of a turn out! I loved the way Hiei was able to confront Yusuke about the bruising in a roundabout way. Nicely done. ^_^
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Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 09:54 EDT
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Well, loved the chapter. I about pulled my hair out at the cliff hanger! You are WAY too good at those cliff hangers. And it looks like my husband was right, we are having a girl. Now if she would just quit kicking me, I already apologized to her about thinking she was a boy!
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 07:41 EDT
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wowwww, i enjoyed this chapter - well i am a hentai, how couldn't i. i liked how you still kept a plot moving on to even with lemons sprinkling about. and i laughed with what the guys did to yusuke, lol. as for the cliffy ending nice...
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 07:07 EDT
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Yay! Splendid chapter, just splendid! I adored the prank pulled on Yusuke, had me in a little giggle fit, and it's just overall an amazing chapter! I am eagerly awaiting the next one, I can never tell just what you have in store.
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 12:52 EDT
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I just love the way you ended off chap 5. What a cliffy! So EVIL. Will Hiei say yes and what will the others think if he does, though knowing Hiei he doesn't care what people think and what about her sons. AAAArghhhhh I can't wait till your next chapter and what your evil mind will come up with.
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Reviewed By: Shadeless Night On: April 27, 2007 22:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is SO incredbile! Every chapter you come out with is amazing. I love the dreams Kagome has about her mates (very steamy ^^) and i love & hate the suspense your'e creating with the build up to the mystery of their deaths. I don't think i could have ever thought of such an ingenious plot as you have with this fic - so please continue on with your wicked talent, and i will wait on the edge of my seat for your next update! ^^
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 21:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i swear you are a natural author. you are just soo great at kepping your readers wanting more which i what i want very much and very soon please!! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 13:53 EDT
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:D The lake scene was very funny- not what i expected, you're right, but great to read!! OOooh, and that was totally unexpected!! I can only imagine how Hiei will react!! No wonder you can't wait to get started on the next chapter! I can't wait to read it!!! Loved the bit about Shippo offering to be Kag's mate, very sweet and so what i would expect of him!! ^.^ Waiting with mucho anticipation for the next chappy!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 10:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Crap. I was speachless for about half a minute then I started to crack up. That has got to be the best cliffy I've ever seen.
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Title: Alissa
Reviewed By: sexyvampire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 21:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY CRAP!!!!! All I could do was just look at the ending! I sat there for like 2 mins. but I have to say that was a good cliffy! Please update fast!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 20:46 EDT
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It fallowed up the last chapter great! I can't wait for the next one to come out! I was a little 'put out' when Hiei didn't ask her to be a mate too. But that I guess what Kagome did made up for it. I can't wait to find out what Hiei has to say about that! Maybe he just pushes her up against the wall and takes her...*cough* I mean... He says yes. Yeah! I can't wait!
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