| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shadeless Night On: May 06, 2007 01:11 EDT
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Well you definately succeeded in not disapponiting! That chapter was awesome, and I'm starting to think you're the master of cliff hangers. ^^ Once again I must compliment you on your wicked plot development - it is ever-amazing and never a let down in any way! Can't wait for the next chapter, especially the confrontation with the wolves - keep it up!! ^^
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Title: blkwolf1@earthlink.net
Reviewed By: blkwolf1 On: May 05, 2007 19:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!!! ITOTALLY LOVE YOUR STORY SO FAR!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. HIEIxKAG PAIRINGS ROCK!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! ja ne
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 09:39 EDT
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Aiii! Sugoi!!! XD That lil' prank was hilarious...and i totally love the Hiei and Kagome yuminess!!! Seems our lil fire youkai is getting a closer to Kagome than he realises, neh?? How kawaii! I wonder how long their arrangement will be kept under wraps? I have a feeling Hiei isn't going to be so quick to condemn Kagome of those murders now! hehe, can't wait for next update!!
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Reviewed By: ness On: May 05, 2007 07:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! No black hole for madmiko... im so glad to see... its a shame that not many (with the exception of you) updates their stories and just leave poor girls like me hanging... Oh and I'm loving the relationship kags and hiei are having...Great sex with no strings attached (yet??) I'm slightly jealous... ok so im very jealous... i cant wait to see how its gonna play out... also to find out who is leading the wolves.. if they know kags is back then other people know as well... are they (kags and the crew) gonna have to relocate?? or make a stand and stay where they are (incase others show up)... I cant wait to read what happens next... See ya at the next update.. later
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 22:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this new chapter
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 22:36 EDT
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woah hiei agreed to becoming her lover interesting... hmm hiei seems to really care about kagome even though he doens't even know it right now do u plan on this being a hiei/kagome?
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 22:19 EDT
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*stares at computer* I just found this a day ago and you already have me hooked!!! Such mystery! Well develped characterization, interesting plot, and it's keeping me in and interested. To be honest, I can't wait for you to update. Excellent work so far, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: yue no rei On: May 04, 2007 07:16 EDT
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yep I'm back again. Awesome two chapters since I've been reading. Have I ever told you how much I adore the length of your chapters? Well they are absolutely awesome =D I love how Kagome thinks in this fic. Straight and logical. Keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 05:23 EDT
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Hiei said yes! It's not my fault that everyone else has such bad hearing. ;p Undress! Too late Hiei! ;p I loved this chapter! Kagome and Hiei got together. Hiei showed that he's starting to like her more then a fuck buddy. Even if his mind needs to cetch up to his body to realize it... And what's that whole thing with the wolfs!?!? Ayame????? What is THAT bitch doing here!?!?! God! She's sooooo annoying! Oh well! I still love you! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: May 04, 2007 03:25 EDT
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Will Yemon arrive to help Kagome? Please update ASAP
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 22:40 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR THE WONDERFUL LEMONS!!! YAY!!! THINGS ARE REALLY HEATING UP!!! WHAT HAPPENED TO HER MATES?! NOT KNOWING IS KILLING ME I DONT THINK SHE DID IT THOUGH. LOVED THE PRANK TOO!!! YUSUKE'S I FOR IT LATER FROM KEIKO HUH? ANYWAY THANKS FOR THE REPLY AND DON'T STOP WRITING YOUR FABULOUS STORY!!! JA NE!
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Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 22:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job and the grammar (i.e. - missing words) are greatly improved. Wonderful job. I love the scenes of Hiei, Kagome, and the Lake. The two of them being in their birthday suits, as she clung to him in fear of her life, and determined to try to take him with her, was priceless. So was the scene of him just coming out of the lake, only to see Kurama jump in fully clothed, and then him turning around to jump back in again. He might not be courting her, but damn...if the two of them keep meeting like that, they might as well go for the courting thing. Beat the rush, skip the courting, and go right for the end result. Those scenes are totally priceless. Sincerely, Vyncent
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 22:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear MadMiko, ღღღღღღღღღღư 6; As Always I loved the chapter you wrote, your imagination on such topics is brilliant (although I am unexperienced due to the fact I will be waiting for marriage) And sometimes I feel a little jealous, I've read such wonderful stories and the best one I have ever written is still in progress on Fanfiction.net... Twins Curse.... I know this because its been the most reviewed out of all my stories.... Well carrying on... I guess that the person at the end of that chapter was Ayame...I wouldn't be surprised if Kikyo, Kagura, and Ayame teamed up to kill Kagome... But I can't wait till you update, your stories are soooo good and keep people asking for more... I sent some of these to my older friends who enjoy reading stuff like this as much as I do.... They love your stories... I wonder though will Kagome be running into Hojo(I hate him by the way) on golden week?... OMG I just realized this but HOW THE HELL DID AYAME FIND KAGOME? ...... I guess I'll have to wait for a while.. Please update soon... With yummy Hiei goodness on top...LOL Sincerely one of your biggest fans, loveinuyasha911(aka MuppyPuppy) P.s This must be even longer then the last review I wrote....ღ
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 21:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! totally love this chappie. it was a perfect reaction, and i believe hiei and kagomes relationship is growing nicely, not too fast, but not too slow either. i love the joke they played on yuusuke...kinda surprised hiei layed there in bed with him, lol..but i see why he did it, it was an awesome joke...so i guess lord yeoman did tell about kagome comming back? damm that sucks...i guess this is sassouta's fight for his lands now? and is the female voice ayame? this next chappie is gonna be crazy...i can tell already. and dont apoligize for not updating yesterday...it was totally worth the wait!!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 18:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No not too brazen just right.. *S* I look forward to your next chapter.
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