| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sardave [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 15:06 EDT
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I feel so horrible; taking so long between my chapters while you keep pelting out the home runs! ^_^ I love the subtle evolvement of their relationship and the way you're easing into his change of heart over her guilt. (And don't worry; I've started on one of those you asked for...going slowly, though...)
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 14:28 EDT
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im starting to feel like kikyou, kagura, and ayame all worked together in their deaths...but i cant see any of them being able to kill sesshoumaru...kouga seems to get distrated easily, and inu was human, so...theyre deaths is understandable...but im also thinking its someone else, and the 3 are just to sidetrack us...i love how hiei and kagomes relationship is evolving! now what was kagura doing there? and what kind of talk do they have to have??? good cliffie you left us with! very nice long chappie, it was deff worth the wait! Happy mothers day to you too!
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Reviewed By: Youkos_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 14:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its interesting to watch Hiei and Kagome's relationship evolve and the information regarding Inuyasha's death is certainly intriguing. Could Kagura be there to cause trouble? Hehe, can't wait for the next chapter, excellent as usual. Ja.
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 12:50 EDT
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I sure will continue to enjoy it if you keep up with the excellent writing!!!!!! This is just getting so good . . . the pieces of evidence aren't that good in my mind though, to convict her, but that might be because I have my own ideas . . . And what a cliffie! Excellent . . . Hoping for more ASAP. But take your time and make it good.
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 07:08 EDT
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Yay! It's Kagura! I was beginning to wonder about her whereabouts...XD I really enjoyed this chapter, most especially the Cha-no-yu, which you really brought to life for me with your words. It was amazing, really! Thank you for a wonderful chapter and I eagerly await the next one!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-Keke-Chan(NLI) On: May 15, 2007 06:29 EDT
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Squee! A lovely long chapter! Ooh, the plot thickens! I am right in thinking Kurama was the one who saw Hiei and Kagome, what with his little 'ashes' comment?? Poor Hiei, not being able to get any when they go to the hotel! Can't wait to see what Kagura has to say!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 05:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty cool I can't wait to see what they "Talk About"
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 05:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To say the least I was quite surprised but Now Im wondering whats gonna happen next, I wonder if any one will notice the wind demoness, But I can see how well you are bringing Hiei and Kagome together, I cant wait to see what happens next, Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Angelwings21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 01:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter as always ^^ But Why does Kagome not tell her side of the Story? I mean she knows why Hiei and Co are there, so why doesen´t she tell them her side?And Whats that ? Another evil Cliffie ? From now on your Name will bie Evil-Cliffie-Chan ^^
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: May 15, 2007 01:25 EDT
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Wonder if it's Kign Enam? Hmmm. Wonder what Kagura has to say? How sad, only Kuwbara seems to believe with a doubt Kagome's innocent. Wonder if he knows something? Hmm. Will Jin, Toya, Chu, and Rinku make an appearance? Wonder if they would know anything? Hmm. How will Hiei deal with few days without getting some with Kagome? How long before someone figures out about Hiei and Kagome's nightly visits? Hiei/Kogome/Kurama Please update ASAP
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Reviewed By: SKnFS (formerly SmilingKitsune) On: May 15, 2007 01:12 EDT
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You are such a pleasant read. I really love the way you write and how you incorporate Japanese culture into the story and allow the reader to experience it and share in on it. As always I love your interactions with Kurama and Youko, he really is mean to Hiei lol always provoking him. I'm also looking forward to the confrontation betweeen Kagura and Kagome next time. Finally one of the other "women" Keep up the great work and I look forward to the next chapter. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 23:43 EDT
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hiei and kagome just keep getting closer and closer even though they don't really seem to notice. hmm now we get more clues about the deaths... and wut is kagura doing looking for kagome? ill be looking forward to the next chappy!
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Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 13:19 EDT
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i heart your story :) i wright fullmetal alchemist fanfics but a yu yu hakusho will come soon! if you get the chance, can you read it?
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Reviewed By: SKnFS (formerly smilingkitsune) On: May 07, 2007 00:47 EDT
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That was awesome. once again you brought a fabulous chapter which is much appreciated. I was really left hanging after that last one when she suddenly asked Hiei to be her lover. Thank you :D
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Title: Ch. 6
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 22:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! That was freakin AWESOME! I luved it! And... YAY! ANother lemon! And now i understand it! YAY! And, omg! The joke they played on Yuusuke! AHAHAHAAA! That was pure gold! They even got Hiei into it! *nearly dies laughing* I laughed so hard, i cried! Hehe, anyhoo, i hope u update this wonderful fanfiction soon! I luv it so much!
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