| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 12:09 EDT
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Ah, i see! ^.^ What another amazing chapter!!! It had everything! I was laughing out loud so much!! My favs were Hiei wanting to 'dunk Kurama in three times and bring him up twice' and Hiei wondering how cold Tokyo Bay was! Classic!! And of course getting to see the YYH girls was great too- and I'm totally loving Kagome's jealously of Hiei and Yukina- i can't wait to see how see finds out the truth! Hehe, what a great way to end the chapter. I dying to find out about Kagura and Sesshomaru's so called son...as always, update when you can!!!
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 09:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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so is lord yemon a bad guy from chapter 7 he seen to keep a secret or something but anyway plz continue
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Title: urm...update...plz??
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 16:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello! My YuYu Hakusho fic is up and i would so like you to read it!! Um and please dont take this for a flame (cuz its not!) but... HOW COULD YOU END A CHAPTER LIKE THAT?!?!?!? AGHJKHSOGIHweigJLKDGSGKJ (translation: becky+cliffies= unhappy ducky) but it was a good chapter. okay...so im guessing Kagura is good (like way way way WAY deep inside) but kikyo isnt. MAYBE KIKYO purified them?!?!?!? or maybe they were working together?? plz update so that i dont kill myself with the anticipation!!! (oh by the way, i didnt say this when i first read your fic, but i support Sesshoumaru/Kagome ALL THE WAY!!)
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 20:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mea culpa. You so deserve reviews and I'm a terribly lax reviewer. Please, please. .. . its the 21st. Its been a week. Personally, I'm surprised more reviewers haven't commented on the "tall dark" individual who witnessed kagome and hiei. I'm having trouble deciding who that is, but my inclination is towards Zang. I can't wait for them to kiss. Clearly, you are saving that up as a demonstration of affection between the two, but I did think it was odd that Kagome wants to screw w/o kissing. I guess I just can't see separating the two. Hiei is already quite possessive, and doesn't want Kurama to see her naked.
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Title: Ch. 7
Reviewed By: HalfBlackWolfDemon (nli) On: May 20, 2007 22:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! i luved it! and i think i know who killed Kagome-chan's mates! XD its kikyou! it has 2 be, all three of then had their souls purified, inuyasha was stuck to a tree as a human... but how did kagome get sessoumaru-kuns blood and stuff underneath her nails? i am still figuring that out. lol, i luved it so much! and my favorite part in there was uhm... hm... so many, but i also wonder who was it that saw Kagome and Hiei gettin it on... i think maybe it was Shippou-chan, but im dont know... *ponders* anyhoo, i hope update this wonderful fiction! Mee-chan
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Reviewed By: Hawaiianhoney2030 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 01:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW COULD YOU DO THAT?!?!?! how can you end a chapter like that?!?! omg, that was a great chapter! the SD's found so much information out! and it's kikyou isn't it? shes the one who killed her mates? and she's still alive and has like absorbed their souls! AWWWW!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! THE SUSPENCE IS KILLING ME!!!!! and Hiei and Kagome are getting pretty cloes...^_^ thats cute..he's falling for her! oh and for the overall rating, if there was one, i would give you an 11!
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Title: Hola from BD!!
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 16:20 EDT
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The yuyu hakusho story is up!! pairings are (but not final): Keiko/Yusuke Hiei/Botan Kurama/OC Koenma/OC Kuwabara...i'll get to that any suggestions?? by the way...update soon!! :) hehe
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Reviewed By: Who Am I? On: May 17, 2007 00:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love It...So Now That They Know About Kikyo Excuse Me Lady Kikyo They Think That Kagome Stole Another Persons Mate Well 3 Others...I Wonder When They're Going To Get Thw Full Story Of The Great Quest...There Is Still So Much They Don't Know...You Have To Love Kuwabara Always Believing In The Good Of People...It Seems That Hiei Is Starting To Think Of Kagome More Than Just A Lover And The Same Goes For Kagome...I Have An Idea Who The Man Was That Spread The Ashes Was But Im Not Going To Say Anything Just Yet...Now That Kagura Shows Up How Will The Relationship Between The 2 Of Them Be?? I Mean Kagura Felt That Sesshomaru Should've Been Hers But He Wanted Kagome...Is She Going To TRY And Kill Kagome...I Have A Guess On How Her Mates Died...First It Was Kikyo Mad At Inuyasha For Not Going To Hell With Her And Going With Kagome...Then When Kags Got Wit Sesshomaru Kagura And Kikyo Teamed Up To Kill Him...Lastly With Kouga All Three Females Banned Together...Now They Just Live To Make Kagomes Life A Living Hell..Well Am I Right?? Keep Up The Good Work You Are A VERY Talented Writer!! Cannot Wait Till The Next Chapter Is Posted...Dont Keep Us Waiting For Long!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadeless Night On: May 16, 2007 18:20 EDT
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Well what can i say - except that you were once again able to come out with an incredible chapter! - leaving me convinced that you are indeed the "master of cliffhangers" (hehe). But i dont mind - keeps me coming back for every update that much sooner ^^ I love how no one even considers Hiei as a threat for winnign Kagome - although i understand why - but the irony is just so much fun read!! Can't wait for your next update!!^^
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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you are sooo cool!!!!! thanx for the lemons!
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Reviewed By: Icywolfflame [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 19:22 EDT
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I love your disclaimer!......is Kikyo still alive? OH OH OH!!!!!!!KAGURA.....oi...I'm over here panicing!ahhh oohhhh oofff!!!OH I KNOW!!!! Naraku is actally aliv e and Kikyo helped him kill the others along with Ayame but Kagura is there to warn kagome andandandand...i dont know.....eh...See you in your next WONDERFUL CHAPTER!!!!!! WHOO HOOOO!
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Reviewed By: dadada [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 19:04 EDT
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Update soon!!! I love it so far!
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Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 18:18 EDT
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I think all little girls are spoiled! I've already recieved several packages from my grandmother and a friend of mine and my sister is already shopping. I loved the chapter, and I think this cliff hanger was worse! They know about Kikiyo, but they don't know she is a Miko and now Kagura shows up! The length was great, and I found when the guys found out about jilted lover number three rather amusing. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 17:47 EDT
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AH! You should be ashamed of yourself! Oh well! Kagura is here! Oh no! GAHHHH!!! She's not goingt to kill Kagome is she? She owes Kagome her life!
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 16:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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plz continue
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