| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] |
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Title: In love
Reviewed By: InDecent [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 18:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've fallen in love with your story. I hope that you will continue this story and will finish it. You're a very good author. But great authors always finish their story, I have a feeling you will be a great author.
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Title: Ch. 2
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 17:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter! I lurv ur stories! It's so awesome! :D I hope 2 read more of your story soon! It's so wonderful, and ur idea's are some of the best EVA!!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 17:00 EDT
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Yay! Another great chappy! Totally love all Kagome's sons!! ^.^ and Hiei was brill in this chappy too- i really liked- And you're just dying to find out, aren't you?" "That's exactly what may happen, too," Hiei reminded them. Hehe! Perfect! Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 15:38 EDT
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hehe thats one heck of an ending! she just wakes up and someone wants her for a mate already!
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 15:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great plz update i love it
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Reviewed By: Thief Lava (2 lazy 2 login) On: April 08, 2007 15:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Dawn Illusion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 14:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! I really enjoyed reading about the sons of Inuyasha, Seshomaru, and Koga. I want more! So, is Hiei going to be the heirs' sensei now? Do we get to meet Kagome's new suitor next chapter? Oh keep writing please!! Keep up the good work.
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Title: Great Story!
Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 14:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story and well thought out. I look forward to seeing it updated, hopefully soon. Just a note: The shrine that Kagome lives at, is not the Goshinboku Shrine. It is called the Sunset Shrine or the Higarashi Shrine. A rough translation of Higarashi is 'sunset', although it is not accurate. Sincerely, Vyncent
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Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 13:04 EDT
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Yay! Nice long chapter. Thanks, I really needed it. Hope to see another chapter soon, I am really interested in how this is going to end up!
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Reviewed By: Sardave [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 12:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goodness I envy your ability to write those long chapters. Again, incredibly well done! I'm biting my nails! (again)>.
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 12:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The detail and the research you've gone into for each chap is pretty good. adds more to the story and makes it more intriguing to read. loved the 2nd chap anyways.
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 11:24 EDT
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Another wonderful chapter, keep up the magnificent work my dear!
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 09:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally wow is all i can say. i kneel in awe of your literary talents and also (sobbb) in jealousy. intoducing the descendants of the taijiya(sp?) is interesting as well. So she has three mates already, lucky kags.
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Title: Ch. 1
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 07:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter! I hope 2 read more for your wonderful story! I lurved it!
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Reviewed By: Dawn Illusion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 23:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please update soon. This is another great story that I'm sure I will not want to stop reading. It's all so very mysterious... Keep writing please.
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