| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 18:36 PST
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asdfghjkl;' INUYASHA GO BACK NOW!!!!!!!!!!!! DXXX or one of the bat youkai is going to save her x:
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 16:33 PST
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omg... the suspense is killing me! =]
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 14:53 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I REALLY hope that inuyasha gets back in time!
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 13:35 PST
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Ah no! Help! Well, I'm guessing that if Inuyasha doesn't get to her in time that the bat demons will. And that Dinshu is going to be wolf-sushi by the end of the next chapter (at least I hope he will be). The dream sequence was well done and capturd the ambiguity and the horror of a nightmare. I loved that you used Inuyasha's line against himself. Hee hee... Well, we all know what the demon and the dream meant. Now only if Inuyasha can figure it out. Not looking forward to Kikyo showing up! Well, thanks for writing, as always I enjoyed it. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Matthew30 On: February 08, 2009 11:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story and am looking forward to what is going to happen next. Kagome shouldn't be raped by Dinshu because she been through enough with Kouga, and Sango being attacked because of her, and the the whole hiding from Kouga and finally just being groped by him and kidnapped in her house. So please update soon the suspense is killing me thanks.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 11:39 PST
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omg omg omg ...please update like right now..I cant wait for the next chapter so please do it soon please please please
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Reviewed By: Genie666 On: February 07, 2009 20:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... you've got me hooked!! This story is hype! Kikyo wants to get back in the picture to stealmore of Inuyasha's story.. plz update soon this story is CRAZY!! You have got talent my friend... plz indulge us readers who can't wait to see what happens next =)
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Reviewed By: Genie666 On: February 07, 2009 20:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... you've got me hooked!! This story is hype! Kikyo wants to get back in the picture to stealmore of Inuyasha's story.. plz update soon this story is CRAZY!! You have got talent my friend... plz indulge us readers who can't wait to see what happens next =)
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2009 03:14 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kikyo is back >.> Kagome is sticking up for Koga... omg back hand them both!! lol
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 07:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This certainly was a serious change of events! Kikyou is back in the picture... but not badder than ever because she still has feelings for our beloved hanyou. Onigumo.... why is that he has been described to look just like InuYasha and Sesshoumaru? Or was she just imagining that her husband looked like InuYasha? Great chapter... I am eager to read the next!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 13:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, Im sorry I didn't get my ass up and read your story and respond to the WONDERFUL plot that you have sprouted upon us... And damn I was very glad that you have updated yet another chapter, and so quickly too! Now as for the story, I hope Sango and Miroku will get through the problem they are having and that Miroku gets to kick the ass of the person that has dare to touch and rid of Sango's "innocents". Im kinda peeved that Kikyo is coming back in the picture, and yet glad that she's coming in. It'll make the story more and more interesting, plus it'll be juicy to see how Kagome reacts. Well hope you update (which you will because you're having more fun than ever) and keep up the work. Peace... P.S. The reason why i haven't been early on commenting is.... Well lets just say blame life and a brand new mp3 player (grins)
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 03:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sheesh... didn't know Din was such a smart and "waiting" person... Plus he's thinking and using that head of his. His plan might work, but I doubt Inuyasha and Sesshomaru would give him the chance. Well Im happy that you updated again and that you kept this story in tiptop shape. Peace...
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Title: WOW WAT A SURPRISE!!!!!
Reviewed By: Lilsweetpea011 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 14:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bringin Kikyo into the story is really a shocker....plz dnt let my fav couple break apart!!! But cool story cnt wait for the nxt chapter!!!!!!!
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Title: NO! not the bitch
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 22:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha better not fall for it, and Kagome better not fall for that other stuff eaither... AH!! I can feel the angst comin on. I'm going to hide in the shed.
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Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 16:44 PST
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Wow... I just read the whole fanfic, and it's really good. It's been a while since I've seen such good charictor development! Please update soon!
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