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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2008 03:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok at the begining I could just feel how embarrassing for Kagome to be in that position (shudders) I almost skipped that part just because of it... But man, afterwords was just raw, so much emotion and doubt. And yet in the end they're together again. And I can understand why Kagome was pushing him so far, thanks to the ass Koga for that one. Well I hope you'll update and keep this story at full play. Plus, have a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. Peace...
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2008 19:11 PST
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What you don't like fluff? You want to hurl? Girl, come on! Fluff is the best! :-) Thank you so much for another wonderful chapter full of angst and a tiny amount of fluffy goodness. I enjoyed reading it. You definitely threw me for another loop. I thought she had run into Dinshu and it was actually Sesshy! I loved the way Sesshy reacted to Kagome and then to their eventual reconciliation. I'm happy that they made up, but I hope Inuyasha treats her better now. Please tell me that he's going to behave and that he's not going to screw up everything! Now what's going to happen next? Another hot lemon (please!) Will Inuyasha actually tell Kagome the truth about Koga? Will Kagome get kidnapped by Dinshu before that happens? Will Inuyasha finally realize that Dinshu is following Kagome around? Will someone save Sango from Dinshu? Ugh! Inquiring minds want to know! GRIN. Well have a Merry Christmas on the East Coast! (I'm a West Coast girl.)
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2008 18:55 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! Sessh is such an ice queen but I love it! And YES...I was right! *does a little dance* This chapter was amazing...the make-up was done very nicely what with all the raw emotion shining through but I see angst in their future. InuYasha said he'd tell Kagome everything he heard from Ginta, so I wonder how she'll react to that news (and the knowledge that he's known this for quite a while now)...damn, and they only just made-up. There's also the issue of Kikyou running around with InuYasha's credit card (and I'm guessing a bit more of their past) that needs to be resolved, the whole Sango/Miroku issue, and two very homicidal wolf-youkais to be taken care of. Hmmm...I can't wait to see what you hit us with next. This story has me hooked! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2008 18:40 PST
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You are evil. Pure evil. I'll have you know, I was late to work this morning because I decided to read your update before starting my day and the requisite shower! Okay, it's *my* lack of discipline...but can you blame me? Thank you for having Inu and Kag reconcile. Your use of descriptors (i.e.: Inu's expression and eyes) helps so much to portray the feelings just bubbling underneath the dialogue. I'm happy they're one step closer to understanding how they need one another. Yet again, you managed to make it believable - heartfelt without being cloying. You can't call *this* "lovey-dovey"! If that was the case, Inu would be reciting haikus about Kag's eyes and face. Hmm…but hentai haiku might not be so bad! You have a wonderful way with words - you say so much without overdoing it. I wish I could claim the same for my fanfics. And no, it wasn't too mushy. It was just right! Oh and having big (half) brother Sessho as the shoulder to cry on was priceless. I was half afraid it would be Kouga or his lackey. Would've been so icked out by that! But Sessho's reaction to her sniffling all over his jacket...so perfect! For now, you just leave me wanting more…
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2008 17:41 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT chapter. I know that you said you don't like fluff very much, but....you're VERY good at it. Although, I'm not sure that this chapter really fits that definiton. Although Inuyasha and Kagome have FINALLY reached some sort of understanding of what they are to each other, it still had a lot of angst. These two aren't easy people, and both of them are way too volatile to ever be truly peaceful. As Inuyasha said, they're both "flawed"....and that works for them. This is such a GREAT story. And Sesshoumaru was GOLD here by the way. He is such a diva(his reaction to getting cried on was priceless, lol)....but you can't help but love him to death. And I can't wait to read the next one.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader On: December 17, 2008 15:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really...all I wanted to say was thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you They really do deserve a chance. Though, there are still many many loose ends and (i'm sure) twists to come. This really is a great piece of writing. So, I eagerly await the new chapter, till then oh sadistic one *bows*
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: December 17, 2008 15:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! So worth the wait! I'm so glad they got through that. Can't wait to see what happens when he tells her everything though..
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Reviewed By: Caree On: December 17, 2008 14:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i flipping love this story....maybe next time i should think of something better to say then i love it though...like i don't know...something useful...but i think it's perfect the way it is!!!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2008 13:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww they're finaly together please update again ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: xyanblue On: December 17, 2008 13:23 PST
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i love love love this chapter. it's so cutee and i'm glad that they made up. I can't to read the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2008 12:55 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that Sesshoumaru has seen the guy and Inuyasha can start to think alittle better what is going to happen to Kouga and the guy that tried to kill Sango? And what about Miroku? Will Sango agree with him about what he told Kagome or will she make him apologize if for nothing esle how it was said?
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Reviewed By: johneotaku4life [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2008 10:43 PST
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That was sexy.Great work.
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2008 07:53 PST
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Ahhhhhh! XD I never in a million YEARS thought she had run into Sessh! LOLOLOL that is awesome. I thought it was going to be a bad guy. XD XDD You rock. I heart this story. :D
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Reviewed By: Bre'Auna Kemp On: December 17, 2008 05:22 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome story sorry that i havn't been reviewing, but me don't have internet anymore. sorry but keep up the good work
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: inufan987 On: December 17, 2008 01:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to say, this fanfic is in my top 5. everytime i read another chapter, my heart just leaps. you had me crying at the emotions between inu and kags. you're an amazing writer and i can't wait to read what you have in store for them.
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