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| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] | | Pages (77): [ « ‹ 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 › » ] | Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 07:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kouga and Dinshu piss me off so f'n much it's ridiculous! >_
| Reviewed By: MadMistress65 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 02:14 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome update! Can't wait for the next.
| Title: Peeping wolf
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 01:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
someone else needs a beating and he's sitting on the roof being naughty. someone else needs to poligize too, I hope THAT doesn't take a beating to happen...Inuyasha Kickin butt I just can't get enough
| Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 00:12 PST
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Ahh, I love Kagome's ironic line, "it's not like Kouga is some big bad crime boss". Oh boy, and of course I still love Inuyasha's old comments many chapters back when he tells Kagome's date that he's with the Yakuza and that Kagome is the daughter of a crime boss. They're just skirting around the truth, aren't they? Well, as usual I loved the chapter. It would have been even better if there was some hot make-up sex. But I guess it shows that Inuaysha is in this for the long haul when he did what was right, rather than what he wanted. So maybe some hot make-up sex in the next chapter? Pretty please!!? Sorry, I can be a hentai sometimes... I must say that I am secretly glad you a didn't have Kagome become a drama queen when Inuyasha told her the truth. I am so tired of fan ficts that make her out to be an airhead drama queen. I'm glad to see that your 'lawyer' Kagome actually has her wits about her. And I am really glad that things are going right with Inu/Kags relationship for once. Yeah! Thanks and keep writing!
| Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 22:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't wait to see what happens when they finally see koga. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
| Title: Another One!
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 21:30 PST
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Another amazing chapter - I could definitely feel Kagome's logical side keeping her together throughout. Freaked out, but always thinking about the important questions: Why? Why? Why? I do wonder if Miroku will ever come around, but it seems Sango would forgive Kagome and not completely and totally blame her - after all, she did see Kouga, and she did get that badass vibe from him. And then Ashton...haha little Ashton...I will probably end up rereading the last few chapters, but without a doubt, it's coming along beautifully!
| Title: Awwwww....that was sweet. ^_^
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 22:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I kind of like lovey dovey...that was a nice chapter. I still want to rip kogas manhood off.
| Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2008 22:32 PST
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omg i finally have caught up and i cant wait for the next chapter...so make your beta hurry or I gonna cry cause i need more please thanks so much
| Title: Thank you!!
Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2008 04:22 PST
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I love how you wrote the chapter.. I love lovey dovey ... you do it quite well, with alot of angst. But I am curious as to the wolf demon... assuming it is not kouga but his buddy, was he watching all of this .. does Kagome recognize him? I am so glad they resolved this little issue before that stuff happens...but i guess there will be more angsty stuff when/if inu tells her about what he knows. ARGHH!!!! I really look forward to reading your next chapter. Thank you again for sharing.
| Title: AAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGG
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 16:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGG M M MUST BE OUT TO GET ME!!!! I THOUGHT EVERYBODY WAS SHOPPING OR CELEBRATING BECAUSE ALL MY UPDATE NOTIFIERS STOPPED COMING IN.... BUT IT SEEMS THEY DELETED ALL MY FAVORITES LIST NOW I HAVE TO PLAY CATCH UP!!!! ISN'T LIFE WONDERFUL???? ANYWAY GREAT CHAPTERS ,,, THEY FINALLY ADMITTED WHAT THEY BOTH FOUGHT SO HARD TO DENY!!!!!! WITH WOLFSHIT AND KIKBITCH LURKING IN THE BACKGROUND THINGS CAN ONLY GET HARDER FOR THEM!!!! NOW HERES MY CHRISTMAS LIST!!!!! 1 NEW CHAPTER PLEASE!!!! I'VE BEEN REALLY GOOOOD;D I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS^-^
| Reviewed By: MadMistress65 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2008 08:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A generous portion of angst sprinkled with a pinch of lovey-dovey here and there, makes for a delicious slice of fiction pie, and this confection is absolutely addicting. :D As always, great update. Happy Holidays to you and yours!
| Reviewed By: nicc85 On: December 18, 2008 21:36 PST
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lol... mushy it may be, but i think it was unavoidable. : ) And Sessh had me laughing at the beginning.
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2008 19:14 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm... that must be a large amount of lovely dovely we had in this story.. but it was sooo cute!! but wait... would that mean see that Sesshy saw Inuyasha and Kagome, that the wolf demon... Koga saw that aswell?? EEP!!!! *starts to panick*
| Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2008 15:30 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahah. you're so silly. that was a little too lovey dovey, but it was great anyways! LOL! thanks!
| Title: Oh Em Gee
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2008 13:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Straight tens for the absolute MOST entertaining and spell-binding fic I've read in god knows how long! I pulled an all-nighter for this one, and I'd gladly do it again - chapter 41 damn near made me spill a tear! I'm eager as hell to keep reading, and I'll be checking my e-mail everyday in hopes that you have mercy on us poor readers and shoot another update our way...in any case, brava! Me encanto! I loved it! I love it still! I require more pages to read! The author's notes at the beginning of the chapter made me smile, made me sigh, made me 'tsk', made me want to hug you - a small emotional ride of their own. I adore the style in which it's written, and absolutely love the OOC-ness, so fuck what any flamers have to say. I haven't read any of the other comments but I'm sure they all pretty much say that you're about the most fucking awesome person ever, both you and your betas, and that this story is off the hook. I'm pretty sure I'm lucky that I don't have to drive an hour to university anymore (Winter Break from UConn, w00t!!) because otherwise I would have not made it. I started reading this around 3 in the morning thinking, "Oh what the hell, I'll fall asleep reading it and if I feel like it I'll finish it tomorrow...maybe..." - HELL no! Each chapter had me saying, "Ok, just one more and I'll sleep, I can't read all 42 tonight." "No no, just one more I have to know what happens." "Oh my gosh just one more he didn't just do that!" Ah! And Ginta and Hakkaku ... poor Ginta!! His brother's a douche for putting Kouga ahead of family! But then that's the nature of syndicates, ain't it? Hehe ... I love that you didn't bulldoze the meeting; most fics nowadays have them immediately liking each other, but yours is so realistic and I loved it! I wanted to fight alongside Inuyasha and Kagome, take my turn yelling at them both! And Rin and Inuyasha's relationship made me smile - it's something I could totally picture, especially with Rin being such a sweetheart. And yay pups!! They look like their uncle - that must piss Sesshoumaru off hahahaha!! No, kidding, there's brotherly love (of SOME sort) there after all. And Kouga! Oh my god he's such a psycho! But I mean...if he was exaggerated from the way he is in the series...yeah I could see him being a psycho stalker type jerk with his floor flunkies stuck doing all the work and having to deal with his masochism. And Ayame, really? Really, she's that dense? Then again Kouga's a slick one...in any case, I hope you've got something good in store for him - good meaning something absolutely horrendous and painful and which will leave him maimed permanently. The best of luck to Ginta and his recovery!! And Nya is the shiz, I wonder what she would have done had Kouga tried to interrogate her about anything, ever - she'd probably whomp his ass with her heels! LoL she's definitely an awesome character! And Totosai...clueless as ever, and yet still useful when he wants to be. The red eyes, the red eyes!! I keep waiting for Inuyasha to make the connection to the voices with what Totosai told him!! Silly Inu!
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