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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2008 14:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I understand Miroku's pain, but dang he was kind of harsh. Can he imagine what Sango's would be like had it been the other way around? Or what if something like this happens to her and then what would he say? Yes Inu messed up big time, but I think Rin will beat him up better than anyone else. Once they have a heart to heart talk. For some reason it seems like she is the only that can talk some sense into him. Who's the mystery man??? Sorry for just now reviewing. Got a little busy before I finished the first chapter and just now catching. Keep going!
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Reviewed By: bigfanofiykag [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2008 14:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't usually give ratings when I write reviews, but I could not help it this time. This story has me in stitches. I really do love this story. I love the song that Kagome was listening to after she left InuYasha in his bed alone. I had not heard that song "Silly of Me" in a long time and it fits perfectly into the way Kagome felt after InuYasha practically told her that she was not good enough. The crazy fool doesn't know a good thing until he's about to lose it. And poor Kagome, taking Miroku's abusive language because of what some creep did to Sango. And then poor Sango, she might not be able to have kids, and then poor Miroku, feeling like hell because of what happened to Sango. Poor everybody except old stupid baka, InuYasha, but then, you can't help but feel sorry for him because he's scared to make that commitment because of Kikyo. Poor Everybody!!! Update as soon as you possible can. I'm waiting patiently. Well, as patient as one can when reading a very, very good story. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: EarthSong [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2008 13:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing! I love your style. You absolutely keep me guessing, and waiting for more! Keep'em coming girl!
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 22:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Skittles!!!!! This is so... so... *sob* you just left me hanging! It's such a great story and I love the way everything is coming along. The way you have the two diffrent POV's intersecting one another is really nice. There only a few writers that I have come across that can do that flawlessly and you are one of them. Inuyasha is a baka, you know... and for that matter so is Kagome... for the both of them thinking along the lines that they are. Irony is a terrible, terrible thing. The stranger... Gosh I hope it's not Kouga or that ass-monkey Dinshu. How bout we all keep our fingers crossed hope that it's a doctor. As for Sango and Miroku... I really feel sorry for them. I believe there was another fic somewhere else... where Sango and Miroku could not have chilren.. hmm?... I'm going to have to look that up...though your take on this situation is totally diffrent than the other writers... if I remember correctly, nothing at all to do with attempted rape. Anyways, I love this new twist in the fic and I am must proudly yet sadly say that it has me on the edge of my seat. Oh and even though I was not able to review on the last chapter I have been reading your fic faithfully. It's just that sometimes... well actually MOST of the time I am reading most fics from my cell phone and I am unable to review from that because the small screen will not allow me to type in the spam filter required to okay the review. I hope to see an update soon! Maybe before Christmas? Or how about a bday present for me huh? *grin* Which is on the 14th by the way! *hint, hint* TTFN ~Tusuke Kounami
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 20:32 PST
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It was driving me crazy not reading the chapters as they came out but I really had alot of homework ... but I did finally break down and read the last few that I missed... I needed a pleasant break from the papers and tests. I just absolutely love you story. I am frustrated that he is messing things up ... and that she is jumping to conclusions and all of that stuff... but that does add to the angst. I do so hope that Inu does not kill that person that she is clinging to unless it happens to be the aweful Dinshu guy or Kauga. Maybe it is Sesshy ... hhhmmmm???? Thanks again for sharing this wonderful story and congratulations on your award.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 17:04 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha....I bet the guy she's leaning on is Sesshomaru. He must've had so many wierd moments with Kagome already. She flashes him her boobs, ogles him...he sooooooo should push for a restraining order. ;P But anyway, Holy friggin' craaack! Both of them kinda(and Kagome did) realized their feelings for each other! Shweet! But now Kagome has to go ruin it by crying all over the Sesshiles-mystery person -___- Can't really blame her, though Miroku was rightly pissed, too. I like how it wasn't Sango to tear into her either, because Miroku isn't one you'd expect. And the ENDING...whats InuYasha gonna do??? Gah! You're stringing me along here woman...s-t-r-i-n-g-i-n-g ME ALONG! Lol...(Kinda crazyish right now..blame lack of sleep). Update when you next get a chance! I absolutely looooved the chapter. Can you tell??? ~Amber >.
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Title: WHO WAS TAHT PERSON KAGOME WAS CRYING ON?
Reviewed By: Lilsweetpea On: December 03, 2008 15:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MadMistress65 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 10:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations on your win! You deserve it. This is an awesome fic. Poor Sango. Poor Miroku. Poor InuYasha. Poor Kagome. *sniffles* Waiting on bated breath for the next update.
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Title: Damn
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 22:04 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I guess I could understand Miroku blowin steam that way but I hope he feels like bad for it afterword. and if that mofo holding Kagome is Kouga I hope Inuyasha over reactes...yea yea beat up kouga that sounds nice, real nice
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 21:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I woldn't say Inuyasha put his foot in his mouth...he put his whole leg in his mouth! If I was sango I'd beat the ever loving crap out of him for saying what he said to kagome! Nobody should wish that on someone else. As for koga...Oh how I hate you're koga! I love you're story so much!
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Reviewed By: nicc85 On: December 02, 2008 21:48 PST
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i definitely agree that the "sesshoumaru's loins" line was so funny, and i guess i'm not the only person whose wondering if kagome ran into a random guy or if it's kouga. there's so much suspense... lol. it has me wondering if inuyasha is going to go full demon right there in the hospital. great chapter! : )
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Title: Amazing...
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 18:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I second everything InuGoddess715 just said, and would also like to add that I am officially on pins and needles to see what happens next. On a side note, I'd like to complement you on your choice and use of the song included. A full-fledged song-fic moment was not truly needed, so I think you included just the right amount of lyrics, and although I haven't actually heard that song in what seems like forever, I am familiar with it, and found myself "feeling" it just how Kagome must have. Nicely done.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 16:59 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL chapter. You did a terrific job with the angst here, particularly in the scene with Kagome and Miroku. Miroku is a kind man.....but what must it to do him to realize (as a gynecologist) that he and his wife will likely never be able to have children even though they both wanted a big family? And not only that but that Sango was raped for trying to protect, not herself but her friend Kagome....a friend who had not returned any of his wife's calls or come to see her until today. I don't care how kind a man he is...you can definitely understand why he would be BITTER about all that. None of this was Kagome's fault; the victims of stalkers are never to blame for what psychos do. But anyone with a heart could understand the pain and anger he must be feeling. His kind heart will torture him for the things he said in anger...but I doubt that anyone will really blame him for it. Except for maybe Inuyasha...later. And speaking of Inuyasha...you did a great job with the angst from that situation as well. Kagome's torment and Inuyasha's was on full display here. And the silver lining of all this is that Inuyasha is no longer blind or in denial about his feelings for Kagome. He KNOWS he loves her. But he has a lot of work cut out for him to fix things. I just hope that he will get the chance soon...and that Kagome isn't already in trouble. I REALLY hope that guy she's crying on is not an enemy. I can't wait to find out. This is probably my favorite chapter so far. It was TERRIFIC.
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Reviewed By: xyanblue On: December 02, 2008 16:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that chapter was amazing but i cant belive miroku he was so mean to kagome and it eeally wasnt her fault i cant wait for the next chapter to see what inuyasha will do please update soon
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: December 02, 2008 15:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reeeeeaaaally wasn't expecting one so soon! But I'm not complaining :) And I wonder who is that guy that's about to have his ass handed to him! lol.
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