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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 10:31 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. It seems so unjust that Kagome has to pay the price for waht Kouga did. But, at the same time, you can definitely understand Kagome's employers point-of-view. That jerk Kouga needs to pay in SO many ways. As for Inuyasha, he is being a bit of an abrupt jerk right now. But...he's confused about and fighting falling in love with Kagome. Someone should tell him that it's already too late. Man, men are bratty babies when it come to emotion, lol. I just hope that he and Kagome are ready for the trials that are coming.
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Reviewed By: MadMistress65 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 05:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This thing with the credit cards and Kikyo has me intrigued. I'm wracking my brain trying to figure out how you are going to play this out. I can't help but wonder if there's an indirect connection, although unknown, between Kikyo and Koga somehow, but that's probably stretching it. I'm happy that Kagome didn't go running off but went to InuYasha with this. And I'm wondering how long it's going to take Inu to release that it's his demon blood speaking to him. At any rate, I know I have to wait to find out but I can't help but come up with my own variations. LOL Great update! Can't wait for the next. Hang in there, Sango. Poor gal. I hope she pulls through all this.
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 03:49 PST
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I am just so sad after reading this chapter. But damn I wish I had Inu to hold me when my world was crumbling around me. I wonder how she will react when she finds out it is Kouga? Great chapter... wanted more.. want to know how Sango is. Sorry to hear about all personal issues and hope that things do get better. Thanks again for sharing your story.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader On: November 02, 2008 01:54 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh you sadist. You absolutely brillant, unfair sadist. How could you leave it there? Can't wait to see what happens next. Excellent as per. I await the next chapter eagerly *bows*
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: November 02, 2008 01:16 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't ask why I'm up 4:00 in the morning on a weekend...lol. But the good news is that I just saved alot of money by switching to geico...lmao. No, seriously...I'm glad I was up to catch your update. Don't worry about the wait, real life does happen and when it does you can't control it. I hope everything will be ok. And nice job on the chapter too. I hope Sango will be ok and I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 01:52 PDT
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I love this story, it's one of about 5 that I get update emails for. But one thing did bother me about this chapter. Why are they only suspecting someone from her past, would they not cover other avenues? She is an attorney, my first assumption would be that it had to do with one of the cases she was working on (that is if I didn't already know it was kouga) I just think that they would at least bring that up. BUt besides that little detail, I have no other issues with the story, & I do enjoy it, so keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 00:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you're wonderfull story! As for koga inuyasha had better hand him his ass on a platter! I hope for a very happy ending for our favorite characters. What role will sesh play in this story? I hope he helps Inuyasha rip koga apart. I hope they cut his manhood off!!!
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 22:09 PDT
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God, I love it! Thanks for another wonderful chapter. I'm also pleasantly surprised to see a fanfict story where the cops are actually on top of the situation. Maybe they will be using Kagome to land the head of the Kyoto Yakuza? Not that they know that Koga was involved right now, but maybe in the future. And this is great. Koga's come to get Kagome, but she'll end up shacking up with Inuyasha. So in effect Koga helps the two of them get closer together. I love it. And will Inuyasha tell Kagome that Koga is after her? I doubt it. But who knows, you might surprise me (again). And I'm still chomping at the bit for a nice confrontation between Koga and Inuyasha. I'm just waiting for Koga to say those immortal words, "Get your hands off my woman!" Snicker! Eagerly awaiting your next installment.
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 21:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW i wonder when she's going 2 realize that person that's looking 4 her is koga UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: xyanblue On: November 01, 2008 19:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this was such a good chapter so much emtion i can't for the next chapter pleaseeeee update soon
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 18:44 PDT
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You are awesome. :D Keep up the great work, hon!!!
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 18:39 PDT
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poor inuyasha he's so confused. poor kagome
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Reviewed By: nicc85 On: October 29, 2008 20:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. Poor Sango. I'm glad he didn't get the chance to do even more harm.
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Title: well this is a first...
Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 17:09 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry.. i can find no words for this chapter... maybe next time (enjoyment factors a nine because of the stress caused by sango's situation, not because of anything wrong with the chapter itself)
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Title: AAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGG
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 21:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOO THY FOUL AND EVIL WRITER!!!! POOR SANGO!!!! IT'S GOOD THAT NOTHING MORE HAPPENED ALTHO WHAT YOU PUT HER THROUGH WAS TRAUMATIC AND DEVASTATING TO HER !!!! AT LEAST MIROKU WILL BE THERE FOR HER.... KAGS AND YASHA PERFECTION PERSONIFIED THERE RELATIONSHIP IS LIKE A WILD ROLLER COASTER RID WITH BOTH TRYING TO HIDE FROM THERE OWN HEART SO HARD IT HURTS!!!! NOW WITH THEM REALIZING THERE NEED FOR EACH OTHER!!!! .LOVED THE I'M NOT GOING TO CHASE YOU!!! AND DOING JUST THAT.... AND HER WHY CAN'T I LEAVE YOU!!!! WHEN THE ANSWER IS SO EASY FOR EVERYONE TO SEE BUT THEM.... AS FOR DINSHU IT BETTER BE SLOW AND PAINFUL AND I HOPE SANGO IS THE ONE TO DO IT!!!! WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS^-^
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