| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Title: Great!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 23:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the type of AU fic that I have been searching months for!!!! Im on my way to the second chapter. I love it so far. ^_^
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 20:39 PST
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Absolutely one of the coolest first dates. Without knowing it they're letting there guards down and maybe getting closer to healing old wounds. Can't wait for the next one, read ya soon.
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 16:40 PST
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Oh dear, well if that was a date it was pretty okay except for the fact that we didnt talk at all. Yet sometimes talking isnt necessary. lol though I know when I got home Ill be like ' Gah why didnt I say something?!' haha Well this chapter was great, though Im not looking forward to the confrontation with Kouga, and Ihope Kikyou wont pop in to..or because Kagome might lose.
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 10:27 PST
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This chapter made me go "aww" with a smile. ^^ I really liked it. Good to see they're starting to know more about each other and grow ever so slightly closer. I loved the line Inuyasha said about how Kagome understanding him. Aww. ^.^ (See? Lol) Keep up the awesome job and thankyou for the update! ^_^
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 04:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At last, they're learning more from each other. And for a second there I forgot that this is in Japan and not America.... well with the whole hotdog thing. Anyway, hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
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Reviewed By: fudge On: February 03, 2008 20:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They compliment each other so well and yet they don't know it...loving it! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 19:35 PST
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Thank you very much for the wonderful update. The date at the park was so heartfelt. I can see them growing closer together..... Keep up the terrific work. Good Luck with the computer issues. YOU ROCK!
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Title: WOW HEAVY CHAPTER
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 18:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow heavy chapter ,really a lot of insight in to both of them!!!! Even if Kagome was doing most of the talking right at the end .... I also liked the location of there first, undate or none date DATE!!!! Some times getting to know someone in an informal or casual setting is much less stressful on both party's,,,, Yashas opening up about his mom shows just how relaxed he is around her even if he doesn't know it yet,,,, And Kagomes little speech at the end almost screams look I think I could really get to like you but I've been hurt very badly so please go slow.... Or maybe I'm reading to much into it... But the fact that she told him speaks for its self!!!! But alass only time and more UPDATES WILL TELL,,, SORRY BUT HERE COMES THE BAD PUN "WRITE ON" I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: February 03, 2008 16:47 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*lol @ 'Miss Piggy'* That was very funny. Awww to their first date too. I can't wait to see more. :)
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Reviewed By: xyanblue On: February 03, 2008 14:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!!!!!!!!! they finally went on a date i hope they go on another one soon please update
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 14:07 PST
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GAH!!! it ended way too fast!!! but it was great nonetheless. i'm totally excited to read your next chapters! you definitely are a hard worker! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 13:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon it's great that their getting to know each other well!!!
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 12:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bittersweet... I love so much your stories and this one in particular!! The jokes, the fights and the stories behind the story. The pieces they let the other know, their inner turmoil. The want to and the denial, the fear of love and been loved, the scars and all the dancing around each other, avoiding but wanting to reach. Really beautiful, so natural, so true LOL. Excellent job!!! ::hugs:: I'm sorry to hear that you still have "technical" problems, but it's okay as long as you are fine, the computer will come so don't worry... just keep writing your ideas on paper, you are not allow to lose any of those amazing creations you have!! Hopefully, everything will be okay!!! Thank you very much for this great chapter, to add to your final words... sometimes what you need is just round the corner! Hopefully they wont get to the part of "You know what you have when you lose it"... Although, with you plotting... don't know, just don't know... LOL Great job!!! Thanks for sharing!!!
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Reviewed By: SummerNightsxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 12:31 PST
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Amazing as usual. Sorry to hear about you technical difficulties and hope that they can be sorted out soon cause I love this fic! XD
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 11:28 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter.....but, MAN, those two are stubborn. They are already sprung....but fighting it like hell. Obviously, they need more time; they are just too gun shy to fall easily. But, I am enjoying this story so much.....no complaints here!
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