| "Laying Down the Law: Abuna i Dansu" Reviews/Comments [ 300 ] |
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Reviewed By: EdenAGoGo On: September 25, 2009 01:19 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much, wish you would update soon.
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Title: WTFFFFF
Reviewed By: inuyashafan4ever On: July 20, 2009 00:46 EDT
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WAT DA HECK HAS HAPPENED TO U 6 MONTHS WITH OUT WRITING ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WAT HAPPENS NEXT SO PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE CUZ WE CANT TAKE IT ANYMORE!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! PLZZ AND THANKYOU!!!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (not signed in, whoops!) On: June 28, 2009 09:46 EDT
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Six months without an update! *prod prod* We want to know what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: kyokatz On: June 18, 2009 23:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update laying down the law 2
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Title: grrrrrrr
Reviewed By: inufan15 On: June 17, 2009 15:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhh i love this story its the best story ive ever read ive atleast read it 300 times now i dont want 2 pressure you but please update =]]]i check like every day just to see if you updated. ohh and it would be great if u did ohhh and i hope u get mizumi and bankotsu together dat would be amazing and i love ranbou and shitora and inuyasha and kagome favorite couples ever!!!!! well and ways please update!!! please and thank you!!!=]]]
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Reviewed By: snappyclappyboom [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2009 02:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is amazing. i go back and reread so often it's not even funny. i know you are busy but i beg you to please update. we are still waiting for the end. take your time but don't abandon us!!!
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Reviewed By: snappyclappyboom [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2009 02:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is amazing. i go back and reread so often it's not even funny. i know you are busy but i beg you to please update. we are still waiting for the end. take your time but don't abandon us!!!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2009 19:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'll be damned.... Haven't seen this in a loooooooooong time. But hell its good to see it still running fresh and making me laugh. Its kinda weird though, seeing that Lysander is uh homosexual.... Didn't see that coming >>. And seeing that him and Holloween is getting PRETTY friendly and all.... So is Ryuu and Shale, but I bet its not in THAT way or something... not sure but eh. So I hope you'll update and keep up the good work. Peace...
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Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever(not logged-in) On: February 01, 2009 02:00 EST
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i never got to ask this before, mostly because i always forgot, but did you think of Tsume from Wolf's Rain when you made Akago. they're a little similar and i only thought so since Akago's last name is Tsume and they both have white hair. but anyway, thank you for the update! so, is Lysander gay now? i could have read wrong, but it seems like it. and him and Halloween are gonna get together, right? i think that would be cool. they seemed good together in this chapter. i thought the picture Inuyasha took of Akago and Gan was so cute! i loved it! i can't wait for them to get together! i think they're my favorite couple of your whole story. but i also like the idea of Mizumi and Bankotsu getting together. that would be nice. sorry for rambling. please don't wait so long next time!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 10:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... they made it through a day at kagome's family home... interesting developments though... hope kagome & inuyasha open up to each other more though... looks like they've met all of kagome's family now... seems that they all needed to get away for a while... everyone was so strained... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: KittieCat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 02:47 EST
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Hun, no offense I love your writing style and all but you might want to break down the really really large paragraphs you have into smaller ones. And possibly put the "speech" bits in a way that its easier to read. It's all one big lump and really hard to get through. Just a thought though.
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Reviewed By: JTB On: January 13, 2009 01:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I LOVE your stroies. But I'm SOOOOO waiting for the next chapter. What's gonna happen next i need to know. I am hooked on your story. Please put up next chapter as soon as you can :)
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Reviewed By: hulagurl_55 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 05:47 EST
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i love it!! please update when you can!!! it's been months!!!..lol..im going crazy!!!...lol...wonderful wonderful wonderful
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Reviewed By: elsie01 On: December 15, 2008 06:39 EST
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okay, i love this story...its driving me mad coz i want to know what happens next!!!! i usually try to avoid saying this, but please update as soon as you can. i love this story!!! xoxo
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Reviewed By: Kaity On: December 09, 2008 12:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your stories, but, as a dancer myself, I take issue with a few things in this chapter during the dance audition. One: there is no time frame on being a good dancer. Some of the best I've seen have only danced for 3 or 4 years, and some people I know who've danced since they were 4 years old are just hopeless. Most dancers know this, so there's no reason for Mizumi to be surprised that Fenn is in the advanced class. Two: Ballet routines are typically the easiest to memorize, because the routines, especially in formal studio ballet, are simply a string of practiced movements. In something like hip-hop or jazz, movements are more open to interpretation, and have no formal names, and are frequently much harder to remember. Three: Even the professionals I know aren't able to memorize more than 2 or 3 eight-counts at a time, much less a 2-3 minute routine in one go. Unless the demons have super-human memories, in which case forget this one. Four: I don't care if Shitora's a demon with demon abilities, there is no way she could trip Mizumi while doing fuetes without someone noticing, especially the dance instructor. You need a lot of room between dancers so they do not hit each other, and shitora can't use her standing leg to trip someone if she's turning on it at the same time. It's not possible, even with demon speed. Ok, I didn't mean to come off like a bitch, because I love these two stories, and I only just figured out how to leave reviews (I'm sort of an idiot when it comes to technology!). But I'm also a dancer, and I notice when things don't quite add up. I'm very much enjoying this story, and I can't wait to read more!
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