| "Laying Down the Law: Abuna i Dansu" Reviews/Comments [ 300 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 01:31 EDT
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great chapter update... thank you for using Seila's profile and making her cool... can't wait for the upcoming chapters... hope you will update soon... please and thank you again!
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 18:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kewl love it
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Reviewed By: bad sango On: June 28, 2007 03:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whan are you going to update love it so far need k/i m/s k/a r/s want happen to them are you going to put the profile i made up i hope you do love it your the best Author ever
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Reviewed By: unknownpancakes On: June 27, 2007 20:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes! finally the sequal! i've been waiting for this like none other. The first was exellent, so i'm thinkin that this will be just as good. don'e lemme down!
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: snappyclappyboom [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 00:31 EDT
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ahhhh i've been waiting sooo long!!! im so happy u made a sequel!!! im such a big fan of ur story!! thanx and i'll be looking 4 an update!!!
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Reviewed By: blah. On: June 22, 2007 22:32 EDT
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WOOHOO!! SEQUEL!!! : ) can't wait for the first chapter : P
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 00:41 EDT
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OMG! i am so glad that you put the sequel up! i wasn't expecting it this soon! it's probably going to be awesome like the original i can bet. please put the first chapter up soon.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 02:03 EDT
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yo good start so Ryuu has a little sis is she going to have a love interest.
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Reviewed By: bad sango On: June 20, 2007 19:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it are you going to put the charter i made up
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Reviewed By: kyorocks On: June 19, 2007 20:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what does "Abuna i Dansu" mean? oh and I LOVE that you are going on with the story, I can't wait!!!!
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 18:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a good beggining.keep it up.
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Title: cactusflower
Reviewed By: Cactusflower [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 17:08 EDT
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I read and really liked the first story to this one. I hop that it is just as good, keep at it. Update when you can no Hurry.
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 15:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE it can't wait till the next chapters keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: horsechick [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 15:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as usual, wonderful but maybe in this story you could add a little more sex detail hmm...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 14:11 EDT
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it's good you're starting to get the story going... new people coming in... hope you update soon... please and thank you!
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