| "Laying Down the Law: Abuna i Dansu" Reviews/Comments [ 300 ] |
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Reviewed By: horsechick [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 21:39 EST
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um...wow the gap between chapter 5 and chapter 6 is the longest i have ever seen, come on please update please please please PLEASE!!!! update!!! two monthes thats a really long time. well whenever ur ready and dont forget to added on fanfiction 2 thanx so much :D
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Reviewed By: blah. On: November 20, 2007 20:31 EST
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= ( dude where are you?
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Reviewed By: jc On: November 17, 2007 21:42 EST
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*sniffle* Why? Why KOLU? It's been TWO MONTHS, where are you?!! I know that you have an insanely hectic schedule, but please update soon, I'm dying to know whats coming next.
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Reviewed By: Machiavellian_Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 19:07 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello. you amaze me. you're writing is clear, articulate, and just plain awesome! you use punctuation and some words that i had in my vocabulary list...plus no lemons, but (the shameful pervert i am ^____~) i like them. add some! most cute.I also LOVE how you dont just focus on kagome and inu. THANK GOD. i absolutely love the side smooching. koga and ayumi, rin and shess, bou and shitori! (loooove this) you're character analysis(es?) are bloody fawesome. they're clever and quite in depth. i must confess. i found your first "laying down the law" story and stayed up all night reading it. i LITERALLY could not put it down. i've never done that before. you've done amazingly. *applause* i must say i wasnt going to be a pest about this but PLEEEEAAASSEEE..can we have the next chapter? pwease? ^^ i totally understand if you've had a family crisis or school's been like hell, cuz trust me i've been there. i even understand if you've died. i cant exactly relate...seeing that im still alive, but yeah. but (and this is me begging) it's almost been two months...chapter six? pwease? thanks. i love ya! e mail me sometime, please? thank you, oh illistrus Author...
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Reviewed By: jc On: October 25, 2007 20:04 EDT
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PLEASE UPDATE! I know that you are very busy, but it is frustrating to wait so long for a chapter.
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 15:19 EDT
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Well, I tried shoving a $20 thru the floppy drive for your compensation, but it was too wrinkled & got spit out, so how about a few words? First, thanks for the update. It's a bitch when real life intrudes but do what you can when you can 'cause it's all good! So much in 1 chapter. I knew Kags would end up at the Vixen's 'cause she's Kags. I hate bra shopping too so that would piss me off more than the injury! Surprised the Nakama reacted so positively, for the most part. It's hard to accept an authority figure you have little knowledge of so it's understandable what some of them did. Interesting way to meet the neighbors...through the wall! Much luck with you overly full plate of late!
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Reviewed By: horsechick [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 18:44 EDT
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what happened u were throwin out chapters within 2 weeks apart and then u just stopped what happened please please please update or we here on mediaminer are going to bug the crap out of u u did it to urself by writing such great stories update please. :)
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 11:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the Story, but my character sounds so lame and boring likes she's not there,but i know your gonna make the story hot as hell so keep up the good work cuz i'm standing on my toes to figure out wats going to happen next. I know u got some big ass surprise out there so i'll wait and be patient take your time and do your best......and you know the drill Blu3Bre
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Title: one month reminder
Reviewed By: jc On: October 17, 2007 18:08 EDT
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I've been patient and quiet for a month now, but please update! I'm having freaking Laying down the Law withdrawls, next chapter soon?! PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Bubblez-of-doom [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 12:00 EDT
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aya its almost been a fuckin month since u updated its a fucking good storie plz fucking update. Your loyal and obidient servent, Mad Max
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Reviewed By: horsechick [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 20:07 EDT
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please please please update soon im like dying from anticipation hurry
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 07:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, that was a long ass chapter... I love it. I know how Kagome feels when she twist the wrong way like that, makes me wince just thinking about it... Well I'm glad she 'finally' gotten her group to respect her or like her, which ever one. Nice twist by the way... Hopefully you'll update and keep it up, K.C. Peace....
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 06:18 EDT
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wow. 22 pages, thats a new record. this was an excellent chapter. kagome's nakama finally got together, as a family. i'm happy. i know school's a bitch right, i mean i've got three APs, the newspaper, volleyball and clubs and i'm just barely scraping up time. hang in there.
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Reviewed By: future author On: September 19, 2007 03:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm glad kag finally made some progress with her group because they were getting to out of hand. I can't wait to see what happens next. I love this second story just as much as the first. I wonder what Kag is going to do to kagura if she decide to get a little payback. Until the next update, good luck!!
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Reviewed By: jc On: September 18, 2007 16:41 EDT
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I'm so glad that you updated, thanks so much! I was getting worried that you forgot about your devoted "Laying Down the Law" fans, but this great chapter reassured me that you luv us ;)
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