| "Laying Down the Law: Abuna i Dansu" Reviews/Comments [ 300 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 18:49 EDT
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First of all, i want to tell you how much of a dork I am. I had to go back and read the first story and write down which gangs everyone belonged to and then read all of the story and not skip around like i did the first time. My fav couple of all time is Kags & Inu. They are the best, when are they going to get some action. Secondly, i love Gan & Akago. At the end of your last chapter James said that they could never be together. How come? Is it because they are 2nd and leader respectively? I just love their interaction. As for Ran & Tora, i love them. I don't know if you did this purposely or not but i think that the two characters are so much alike that the breakup was bound to happen, i just hope that you make them come back together. I also love the Jackrabbits, they are great. Keep them around a bit longer. Please!!! Also I hope that Kina & Kotone makeup with their dad. I know that it wont be a big " I Forgive you" but hopefully they can work something out. Keep up the good work. This is one of my fav stories. I listen to a bunch of music when i read, Story of the Year, Three Days Grace, New Found Glory are just to name a few. Anyways, keep up the good work again and i can't wait until you update.
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 21:12 EDT
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okay, i'm trying to be pretty on top of this this time, i was hella late on my last review. first of all; GREAT CHAPTER! you got the meat and length, that's what we all like (or at least i do), second of all; DOUBLE LEMON! or at leat back to back...INUYASHA/KAGOME & AKAGO/GAN! freaking adorable if you ask me...but preferably inuyasha/kagome first :] thanks, kiss on both cheeks!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 04:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... lots of things going on... lots of issues the characters are facing... seems that things are still in chaos... wonder how everyone will bounce back... lots of drama and emotions flying around too... update when you can... please and thank you... i usually listen to Cascada or D.H.T. or Ballentine songs...
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Reviewed By: shadowbaby_4ever On: March 10, 2008 01:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i love this story! keeps getting better and better! my fav couple is ranbo and shitora! i love them! i cant wait till they get back together
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 21:53 EST
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okay, i'm totally late, but still loved this chapter! oh, the drama and angst! yes! loving it. sesshoumaru finally is getting to be some semblance of normal, i'm used to the POWERHOUSE he was and now will be again! woot. something HAS to be done about shitora's claws, just kidding. but when will mizumi fight back? all will be revealed in the next chapter?
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 23:19 EST
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I love the story, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: yashkags4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 17:08 EST
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im really glad you told us wat was up with sesshy...cud gan and akago please just finally admit their feelings for each other!!! I almost cried during tora and ran's fight...i love this story so much!! update soon
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 22:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... For a tough girl she's really soft on the inside. Glad that you've updated and for telling us readers whats up with Sess. Kinda got tired of his sickness as he did, for a wise guy he sure did something ignorant. And for Akago, he may have the smarts, but he's stupid. Hopefully he'll learn by watching like Kagome said. Well hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
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Reviewed By: future author On: February 05, 2008 23:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad that you were finally able to update. I'm glad we know why Sess was making himself sick and he knows not to do it again. I wonder what's going to happen next. I'm also glad that they found out what she's been doing to Ryuu's sister. Great chapter. Until the next udpate, good luck.
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Reviewed By: me again... On: February 05, 2008 22:05 EST
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oh my god, i was so happy when i saw you updated again. regukar updates are very much appreciatec:] thanks for your awesome-ness aha
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Reviewed By: Mikogirl13 On: February 05, 2008 19:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more please this is really really good! I love it! I'm waiting so update soon real soon please.
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: BratneyBre On: February 05, 2008 13:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i love this story (and the 1st one) i almost cried when those two where fighting at the very end. i diffently know that feeling she had, been there done that. but neway great job update soon
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 13:06 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... well seems that the group is falling apart... with everyone having and dealing with their own problems... the south is vulnerable to any attack i think... they just seem all scattered... will everything go back to how it was before... who will step up and pull everyone back together... what about the couples... and who is the new enemy... lots of drama... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: that one girl... On: February 03, 2008 21:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is by far my favorite fanfic. your amazingly creative and ive been waiing a long time for you to continue the story. please dont ever stop :] i cant wait to see what else you come with. sometimes when im bored i read your first laying down the law. its just perfect, i cant get enough :] ok, enough of my nonsense thanks
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Reviewed By: mase On: January 28, 2008 04:00 EST
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(sorry if this is late) anyway, cant wait for the next chapter! Its very interesting!, although i've been meaning to ask, inuyasha and the others are demons right, does kagome have any miko powers what so ever? it just suddenly popped into my mind that the others are pretty much the same (kinda) but i was wondering about kagome.....and now maybe miroku.....but not as much as kagome... anyway sorry about the rambling and the question. Great story!!! LOVING IT TO THE EXTREME!!!!!!!!! (\/) (..)
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