| "Laying Down the Law: Abuna i Dansu" Reviews/Comments [ 300 ] |
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Title: help
Reviewed By: bloody fox On: July 01, 2008 21:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love laying down the law my friend told me about it i had to read this one 2 its graet. i just don't get one person in here that Lea. what did Lea mean when she siad "I don't follow fledglings...but I don't follow cowards either. We'll see just how much of a veteran you are, Kijo." does she not like kagome or something? i don't get her? when she stade up for kagome and Morioka when Chichi f***ing with them then ran off in ch 3 why does she do that? what she 2 Morioka anyways? i wish u tell more about her. i just don't get why she does the thing she does. i ask my friend she doesn't know she wasn't any help
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Reviewed By: Elle-cee On: June 11, 2008 19:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Im so happy you updated! i have been checking every day! i love this fiction! Great work!!!
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Reviewed By: hannahs100 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 16:28 EDT
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that was a great new chapter. i was thinking that you were not gonna write anymore. i'm super happy that your back :] cant wait to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 06:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girl its good to hear/read from you again.... Pretty much miss this story and since its the summer had all the time in the world to finish it. Hopefully you'll update again, which you already explained that to us.... Anyway, I always thought that he was gay but didn't know he really IS goin to be gay... Man, thats a twist. And glad that Ran and Shitora made up, and so easy too... wow. Well keep up the good work and CONGRATS ON THE WHOLE MUSIC THING KID. Peace..... K.C.
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 23:07 EDT
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holy crap! when halloween acted kinda strange i suspected him of being gay... i bet that other guy is too.
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 23:07 EDT
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holy crap! when halloween acted kinda strange i suspected him of being gay... i bet that other guy is too.
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 01:33 EDT
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great chapter as always i can't wait to kno wat happens in kyoto
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Reviewed By: KittieCat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 19:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I loved the one before it too. You are an amazing writer, please keep up the good work and update sooner. I've been holding my breath for the new chapters. So please update.
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Title: Awesome Update
Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 15:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay! you updated. i'm so happy. love you story. i was happy Tora and Ran got back together. i like that Akago and Gan are going to homecoming together. and it really threw me when i found out Halloween was gay. i was like, "OH MY GOD!!!" but in a good way. please don't wait that long again. i miss your story too much. it's really REALLY good. i LOVE it. can't wait for the next update. hope it's soon. keep it up.
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Reviewed By: yashkags4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 23:15 EDT
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When are you going to update? I really miss reading this story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: hannahs100 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 20:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story. its one of the only one's that i keep coming back to. please update soon :] i cant wait
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Reviewed By: xandee On: May 17, 2008 15:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
D: I'm pulling my hair out waiting for you to update this! XD I love your writing, and I can't wait to see where you take this story!
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Title: I lurv it
Reviewed By: TheAdorableNeko On: May 12, 2008 21:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story and even thought I probably didn't comment on the first one I loved it to. No seriously you have talent. But one bad thing though is you keep people waiting for a long time. Sometimes that's good and bad. See some people, like me, will wait but other people will just say forget it and move on. But yeah thats all I wanted to say. ^___^ Hurry and update please please! Thank you. Much lurvith, TheAdorableNeko
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 18:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good. I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kanna Mizuo Megami On: March 19, 2008 00:59 EDT
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Well first off I'd like to say that I loved your first story, Laying Down the Law, and I'm loving this story so far as well. My favorite couple is Akago and Gan. I love how they're romance already has the base of their tight friendship… Even if they can't see that they love each other. At first the story was really confusing only because so many new characters were introduced one after another so quickly but now that the story's rolling I seem to have a good idea where everyone is and what they're role is. This is something I just have to say… I LOVE AKAGO AND HIS VIOLIN!!! Although I am completely oblivious as to why, I seem to have a weakness for hot men that can play the violin. An additional thing I found amusing and just all around entertaining is how the teachers are all ex-gang members and still cool teacher… for anyone that isn't taught by them… *cough* FRENCH TEACHER *cough* and I like French too. I know this was more of a rant of facts then a real review but I just wanted to let you know that I love this series/story.
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