| "Laying Down the Law: Abuna i Dansu" Reviews/Comments [ 300 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 01:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... amazing how kagome handled the trap and then her group... she made a good impression... hope enju doesn't cause kagome trouble any more or any one else in her group... there may be some fights or disagreements but that's how some families are... with kagome's injury seems like she's sick... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: jc On: September 03, 2007 20:37 EDT
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*sigh* I was really hoping you'd update over labor day weekend. Oh well, I'll keep checking to see if you update anytime soon, thanks for such a great story so far!
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Reviewed By: jc On: August 26, 2007 16:29 EDT
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in the 1st laying down the law, Ryuukoytsusei's last name was Gekido (ch 4), but in this one its Tousen. it doesn't really matter, i still love your story and eagerly await your next chapter. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: kuokidd On: August 25, 2007 16:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heyy you gonna continue this?
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 12:56 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lovely job and thanks for putting me in there i hope that me and your character are best friends , and hey ima email u ok ....... but i love it and sorry that i havn't updated in a while no internet at my house so i'm at school ima sophmore!!!!!
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Reviewed By: m On: August 17, 2007 19:47 EDT
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update
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 06:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Kagome kicked ass without using her fists or gun, either though she mentioned it... but still. Love the chapter, great job by the way, and hope you update. Peace... P.S. that was too funny with the french comments, laughed the whole time.
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Reviewed By: Redi Hebi On: August 07, 2007 15:13 EDT
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Your writing is very good im looking foreward to the rest of your stories.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 05:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great chapter update... things are getting heated with kagome's group... does or will kagome have any other powers or skills... also not sure but does the gang leaders know about kagome's background other than being rin's cousin... don't know if it was mentioned... like how she's so good with guns and very smart... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 21:01 EDT
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Great chapter! I loved how complicated it was, especially with all the new Wildcats in the mix. The big confrontation was awesome and I hope Kagome can earn the trust of her slice of the Wildcats because they all can't be corrupted by Enju and Lea. Until next time.
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Reviewed By: jc On: July 27, 2007 00:45 EDT
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Yay, the sequel! I luv how Akago got jelous when that guy was flirting with Gan. So, Sesshomaru is anorexic, Inuyasha is an awful teammate, and Shitora is an evil jelous dancer? Hmm, thier family might need counciling, lol. I love your writing, its fun and interesting, please keep it coming.
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Reviewed By: horsechick [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 18:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was really really good. pleaz update soon
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Reviewed By: Bubblez-of-doom [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 03:41 EDT
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i always love ur stories and i think u are doing great -Mad Max
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Reviewed By: black_roses [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 16:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories, this is just the first time i am reviewing. i can't believe you made Sukini into a bad guy though. Keep writing pleeease! I am on the edge of my seat. Are Ban and M going to be a couple?
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 01:51 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the chapter and how interesting you've made the first day for the characters, nice. Hope you update and keep it up KC. Peace...
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