| "Laying Down the Law: Abuna i Dansu" Reviews/Comments [ 300 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 17:15 EST
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love it the story is wonderful
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Reviewed By: Cherity On: January 17, 2008 20:33 EST
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Whatever! Your just lucky Ashton (or Tink2Kagome whatever her name is when she reviews) likes your story! And for the record....she hits hard! Ow! I didn't really mean those things....I just had a bad day....seriously though..I'm sorry. I guess you could say i'm jelous of your creativity. So...Are we cool....and no that was not intened with the Rabo thing....i just couldn't come up with anything better...and Ashton is hitting me at the moment. So are we sorta okay? i'll keep reading this and BE NICE! But i do like Ranbo and Shitora....please bring them back....
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Tink2Kagome On: January 17, 2008 20:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did Cherity say those mean things?!?! i already know the answer! i want to say that i am really sorry for her INAPPROPRIATE BEHAVIOR!! She WILL APOLOGIZE! That was rude and uncalled for. She WILL NOT GET AWAY WITH THIS!! Yet again i'm sorry. She's insane! Sometimes i even wonder why we're friends!
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Reviewed By: future author On: January 11, 2008 23:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update. I was so happy to find out you updated, especially since you updated on my birthday. I've been waiting for a new chapter. I'm guessing since the next chapter will mostly be about sess, we might get a little more insight into what's wrong with him. I can't wait to see what happens next. Until the next update, good luck.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 23:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... a lot of tension and a little bit of new crushes goin' around. Well thats what we expect when a big time crisis comes... Anyways, hope you update and keep it up. Peace... KC
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Reviewed By: jc On: January 10, 2008 21:28 EST
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I can tell that you worked hard to give each couple their own part in this chapter, and that was fun to read. Poor Rin, tensions are so high already, Sesshomaru is a skeleton, all she wants is to balance a pencil on her nose, and then she falls back in her chair and cracks her head. It seems like nobody can catch a break in this story! Good luck to Mizumi and Bankotsu, but my heart belongs to Gan/Akago, I just love them. Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 20:42 EST
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Well. Some of the reviews you have gotten are...interesting; which I'm sure you know what I mean. Some people just aren't swayed by great writing; I think that's what makes me come back and read this; that and the concept, but I absolutely love Kagome in this chapter and I can just feel the little prickles of anticipation if--that is if--you decide to write a little citrus flavor for my favorite couple. I mean InuYasha defnitely said he felt...horny right...? And of course her family coming to visit. Chaos anyone? Well other than that, don't let the haters get to you because they're just jealous that you came up with this before them. Tell all them haters to fall back; and as if this review hasn't dragged on too long already; update, love updates.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 15:43 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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good update... very emotional... lots of things going on at the same time... too much tension going around the gang... hope everything will work out fine... seems the key players still have some issues to settle... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 14:51 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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good updates... would like to see more of inuyasha/kagome, sesshoumaru/rin, ran/shitora please... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: Mae'Ora
Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 11:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it sorry i havn't been revieewing late my bad, but i tried to call u and all. but yea so how is your school year going.
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Reviewed By: elle-cee On: January 04, 2008 08:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic, the first one was great but this one is on a whole different level. i am hanging on every word. i get so excited whenever i find out there is a new chapter for this story, i love it. as for the poll, i love shitora and ranbou, and as originals go, sesshie and rin. would love to see more on them!! Good writing, will be waiting (impatiently) for the next update! xoxo
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Title: La la la la la la la
Reviewed By: Weeeeeeeeee! On: January 02, 2008 11:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
INUYASHA ANDS KAGOME! INUYASHA ANDS KAGOME! DOWN WITH RABO AND SHITTY!
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Title: ........
Reviewed By: Tink2Kagome On: January 02, 2008 11:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like Kagome and InuYasha.........but Shitora and Ranbo.........I like them, just not so much......srry.......KAGOME & INUYASHA 4EVA!
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Title: one month reminder
Reviewed By: jc On: December 26, 2007 21:56 EST
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Its been a month now, please review soon! luv ya.
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Title: All I want for Christmas
Reviewed By: jc On: December 15, 2007 20:49 EST
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I know that it hasn't been a month since your last update, so I really shouldn't bug you, but I would like to ask you for something. I've been a very good girl this year, so can you update soon, as your Christmas present to all of your dedicated fans like me? Thanks for the great story so far, and Happy Holidays!
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