| "Laying Down the Law: Abuna i Dansu" Reviews/Comments [ 300 ] |
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Reviewed By: blah. On: July 18, 2007 16:07 EDT
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woah... dude is bankotsu gonna end up with mizumi? cause i kinda want them too..anyway shitora was pissing me off in this chapter.. never knew she could be such a bitch.. well i'll be waiting for the next chappie..great stuff = )
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 00:06 EDT
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that chapter was especially long. just how i like them. i like how you packed so much action all into one chapter. it was great. bring on the misery and woe. i am so ready.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 14:58 EDT
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great chapter update... really liked it... things are starting to heat up... who are the new pairings?... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: bad sango On: July 17, 2007 13:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can u and some more of kagome & her nakama when u update thanks for useing the profile i made up. update soon realy soon
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Reviewed By: eck_lover On: July 14, 2007 17:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cannot belive this!! the sequel!! you have no idea how anxious i was for you to get started! i loved your first fanfic and i know for a fact that whatver you write will be brilliant! cant wait to see what you come up with next!!
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Reviewed By: horsechick [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 10:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lovely as always can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Beautifulyrael On: July 03, 2007 01:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write MMMMMMOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 05:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice start, it was better than I hope it would have been. And the whole "Kagome vs Enju" was amazing, plus she didn't have to use physical contact with the wolf,the mind is truely power. And love how you put in a little sister for Ryuu, that cool. Well hopefully you'll update and keep it up. Peace...
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 10:54 EDT
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that was good, hey did u put me in the story kc.i like how kagome got enju, that was funny as hell. and i like the tiger girl awsome, u said that ryuu's little sister's love interest is some one we know is it ship
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 12:18 EDT
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DAMN! Kags really ramped it up heavy! Nice way to say 'don't fuck with me'. :D Great start! Looking forward to your next chappie!!
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Reviewed By: @___@ On: June 30, 2007 08:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kags was so f-ing awesome there! She was so cool, like she has been a gang leader her whole life. She's a natural, just after one meeting and poof. Most of he nakama is already respecting her. WICKED!!! I can't wait until your next update.
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 04:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the chapter came out good.please update soon.
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 18:47 EDT
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yes! i love this chapter. kagome was so bad ass and her nakama has such cool people in it. were the ones featured the only ones in the whole story or are there more to come becuase i'm pretty curious about that. anyway great chapter and update really soon.
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Reviewed By: bad sango On: June 29, 2007 14:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can u tell who profile's u are going to use? are u going to make a sequel to the sequel? is kagome going to beat the s**** out of Enju? who going to make the dance team? is gan the gun and akago going to date? update soon
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Reviewed By: bad sango On: June 29, 2007 06:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kagome playing Russian roulette with a gun with Enju was wild gan. Gan the Gun going up there was carzy. who's in kagome's Nakama love it update soon
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