| "Laying Down the Law: Abuna i Dansu" Reviews/Comments [ 300 ] |
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Reviewed By: fallenangeldai666 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 20:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude, that was a realy really sad chapter. IT made me cry and i haven't cried in like a year or so. not since my pup died. That really hit home wit me. pleaz continue, ur so frickin' amazing, to bad these aren't your own characters or you could publish it as a book, that's how good your stories are.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 19:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
go head girl....story is awsome...and i would like to see more of my character, gan, akago, fennella, her bro and the other core member that has silver hair like mine.
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Reviewed By: jc On: November 27, 2007 22:59 EST
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YOU UPDATED, YAAAAAYYY! Seeing a new chapter totally made my day. I can see why this chapter took so long, its full of intense stuff. Your writing is amazing, Laying Down the Law is my favorite fan fic. I'd love to see more of Gan and Akago, thier relationship is by far my favorite. Thank you for updating!
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Reviewed By: sweetheart91 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 22:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story and so do all my friends, the last chapter was very emotional and I thought the way you handled the emotions are awsome. And as for the couple I would like to see more of it would have to be Gan and Akago I really like there personalities and style and they would make a great couple. But all my friends want to see more of Ranbou and Shitora/
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Reviewed By: blah. On: November 27, 2007 19:29 EST
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nice stuff..which couple would i like to see more?mmmmhhh.. i guess it would be Akoga and Gan.. i love the scenes when it just the two of them..well i'll be waiting for the next chapter..= )
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 18:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This whole thing is the shit..... Reading this chapter reminded me of the tragity 6 years ago... now theres even more and its not just in the U.S. Glad that you updated, hope for more and keep it up. Peace K.C.....
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Reviewed By: musiclvr On: November 27, 2007 17:29 EST
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omg. so good. lol. i personlly like the kag/inu, i'd like to see more of that. and also ran/shitora. lol. your story is so good. i've been like checking up every day to see whether you have another chap. up lol. and your other one. shades of gray. phenomalel. lol i spell that right? ah well. peace
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Reviewed By: musiclvr On: November 27, 2007 17:28 EST
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omg. so good. lol. i personlly like the kag/inu, i'd like to see more of that. and also ran/shitora. lol. your story is so good. i've been like checking up every day to see whether you have another chap. up lol. and your other one. the curse of the dragon was phenomanol. did i spell that right? lol ah well peace
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Reviewed By: Machiavellian_Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 01:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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*hugs KOLU around ankles* THAAANK YOUUU!! yay! that absolutely made. my. day. arigato. no, i ADORETH your added characters, mizumi's cute, shale's a DOLL (
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Reviewed By: Machiavellian_Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 01:46 EST
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*hugs KOLU around ankles* THAAANK YOUUU!! yay! that absolutely made. my. day. arigato. no, i ADORETH your added characters, mizumi's cute, shale's a DOLL (
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Reviewed By: future author On: November 27, 2007 01:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad that you were finally able to update the story. I've been waiting forever for a new chapter, going just a little bit insane waiting. Just shows how excellent your story is. Hmmm! as far as a couple I would like to see more of, I'd say Inu/Kag. It seem like they don't get much spot light. There isn't any couple or person i want to see less because I enjoy all your characters. I love your two new characters two. Plus I'm starting to like Ryuu eventhough he's basically our favorite gang enemy, I still think he's a cool character. Like an even colder version of Sess! LOL. Thanks for the update, can't wait to see what happens next. I since things will change drastically. Until the next update, good luck.
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Title: laying down the law 2
Reviewed By: kyokatz On: November 26, 2007 21:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FANFIC!!!!! the couple I want to see more of is kagome and inuyasha. I also want to now about.....everything else too.....so PLEASE keep writing!!!!I LOVE YOU SO MUCH( not the creepy way though) hope to hear from you soon!
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 16:09 EST
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Yes! The well anticipated update! I loved it, well apart from the sadness, it was very well written, but you know, sadness is my thing to write about and read about so, what the hell, I loved it! This new conflict is really bearing on my mind because it seems so close to home. I mean there have been incidents where devastation, firearms, and the like have been involved at my school, at jobs, everywhere, this is crazy and definitely broadcasted on the news like this, so I feel for this chapter and the characters. As for the pairings, well you know I've got to have my hearty dose of InuYasha/Kagome and I love, love, love Akago/Gan! I never really noticed how much I would love to see them together, but I really do want them togather, I love Gan and her personality so much, her in contrast to Akago's cool demeanor is so off the chain. As for other pairings, I'm looking at those two right now a little more closely, but if you really focused on them a little more in depth, I'd be hype, like for real. But keep cranking out these huge chapters like this, it's enough to tide us over until you can muster up the next one for us!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 15:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... glad that kagome is fine after the encounter with the vixens... as for the pair i like inuyasha/kagome... but you could add in the others too like sesshoumaru/rin; miroku/sango; ranbou/shitora; kouga/ayame... and see how akago & gan develop... another problem for them... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kristen E. K. On: November 26, 2007 13:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful- ilove it! as for the couples, i wanna see more of Kagome and inuyasha, but i also wanna see gan and akago get together and u only mentioned Miroku and Sango once...sry that was more then 1 couple, any ways...keep at it plz!!!
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