| "Laying Down the Law: Abuna i Dansu" Reviews/Comments [ 300 ] |
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Reviewed By: ahhhhhhhhh On: November 30, 2008 15:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omgomgomgomg please please update you havent updated in like 3 months. i cant waitttttttttttttttt. to knwo what happens next please please update? :)
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Title: laying down the law 2
Reviewed By: katz33 On: November 29, 2008 11:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update I just reread your first one and am going to start on the secound....so plz update soon
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Title: laying down the law 2
Reviewed By: katz33 On: November 19, 2008 23:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update...I have been reading this story since the first one came out and am dying to know what happens....so pretty please with suger and candy and whatever you want on top....plz update! I really love your story (in case you can't tell XD )
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 16:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
InuYasha & Kagome really don't talk, do they? The conflict between her Kyoto roots & Tokyo family, and his way of dealing with, well, everything. They have alot the overcome if they are going to stay together. Which they will, right? So glad you could break the block. Loved the ending treat very much. Gan and Akago go well together! As do everyone else *smirk*! Looking forward to your next installment!!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 06:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its good to see this update... Funny as hell in some parts and serious in others... Just how I like my stories... And I see that Akago and Gan are almost to a breaking point but not quite there yet, Im thinking it would be soon though... (laughs) That was just too funny with the whole batman theme song and the "master piece" of a van.... And other parts were funny also. Well, hope you update again and keep it up. Peace...
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Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever(not logged in) On: August 10, 2008 03:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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when you said Kagome was a gymnast i developed a whole new respect for her. i loved her even more. i'm so glad you updated. it was so great. i can't wait for the next one and i hope its soon. please let it be soon. i liked the Sharkmobile. most Akago/Gan scenes i liked. do more of those. please let the next update be soon. sooner.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 02:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... they finally made it to kagome's home... interesting introductions... seems that there is some issues between inuyasha & kagome... gan & akago - sweet... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (not signed in) On: August 09, 2008 11:04 EDT
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I was thrilled, thrilled, thrilled to see an update today, but talk about angsty! :( Poor Kagome, it's just one thing after another, isn't it? Update again soon, I'm begging you!!
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Title: This story is Da Shit!!!!!! Fuck Awsome its Magnificent!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 06:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
K.C. you delivered beautifully with what i have read so far...... And congradulations on getting into a top college.......James when i read about about him i think of james bond for some odd reason..... there is alot in your pot that's brewing for your readers to eat up happy and satisfied. Man i was shocked when i found out that Akago had to do the Homcoming, but he'll pull through..... Awsome work hope to hear from you soon. Much.Luv!!!!!! Bre
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 04:17 EDT
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This is really good, I can't wait for more (and I usually steer clear of AU fics, so that's saying something!). I'm wondering if there's going to be any Kag/Kik/Inu issues in the story? In the first story, before they kissed, InuYasha reflected how he still was clinging to Kikyou... so is he now? Or did the sight of Kagome strung up on a cross kind of get him focused completely on her? What does Kagome want to be when she graduates? It seems strange that she'd dodge the question like that... I'm really looking forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: caitlinjane [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 03:51 EDT
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Yo this is my first time writing you a review. i just wanted to say this: I REALLY want more to the story. please please PLEASE, write more soon! I want to know if one of the demons get sick, if Halloween gets a boyfriend, if one of them gets killed in a riot, and (most importently) what will happen to akago and gan's relation ship??????? PLEASE write more soon!!!
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 10:33 EDT
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I'm really late again, but I've got a funny feeling about General Tice. Is there a mutiny afoot? Will he screw the demons of Japan over? I've got my suspicions HEAVILY thought out, but only because I'm ready for some serious DRAMA! I live for it. Great chapter, the suspense has been killing me.
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Reviewed By: bad sango On: July 02, 2008 14:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
jakilove did a fanart on Katia well she do them on all of kagome Nakama. if she does i relly went to see what Lea, Knight, Enju, Morioka, Nana, Seila, Mae'ora and Sasha look like. i hope she does. mybe u shound ask her 2.
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Reviewed By: bad sango On: July 01, 2008 21:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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is helloween going to get a boyfriend if is who
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Reviewed By: bad sango On: July 01, 2008 21:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it plaz update soon
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