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Reviewed By: Fookie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 20:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My lord. I started reading this last night - for lack of anything else to do - but I wasn't able to get to the last chapter before I had to go to bed. I wanted to read more, I had a dream about it! My god, when I got home, I just had to finish reading and now that I finished, I need you to continue writing and post up the next chapter. I love how things aren't going smoothy between Kagome and Inuyasha. Most people tend to have them make up almost instantly. I like the fight. When he jumped out from behind the tree, I nearly fell out of my chair. What is she going to say? "You?" Ahh! I also love the Sesshomaru and Rin! Poor little her, being left behind. Anyway, I can't wait for the next update! =]
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 12:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job so far! I'm really into it! Update soon please :)
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: September 17, 2007 21:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ravenreux, I too, am touched by your lovely words. Gracious authors do not grow on trees. It just adds to your already wonderful talents. I haunt this story, holding my breath for updates, because it is a great. I thought the way the chapter started out with Kagome and her self recriminations, so true to form (canon.) When InuYasha popped out from behind that tree during Kagome's come clean conversation, it caught me by surprise. I about flipped out of my chair for some reason. Now, I am on the edge of my chair. Cliffy after cliffy. I would take one story like this over a hundred of the "flash in the pan" ones. Thank you ever so much, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: hikari suzume On: September 17, 2007 19:20 EDT
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I love this story so much, every time a new chapter comes out I nearly jump for joy. This is the first time I have reveiwed but I've been reading since the beginning. The intricacy of the story is amazing, and it's quite beautiful. I am, as always, looking forward to the next post. Thank you for writing such an amazing story :)
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Reviewed By: musicmuse18 On: September 17, 2007 16:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story! Love the cliffhangers!
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 06:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEEP GOOOOIIINNNNNG
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 05:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems the players of the story are making their entrance... and adding more drama from where you left off with kagome & inuyasha and the gang... still some questions that need answers... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Sassa, too lazy to log in On: September 17, 2007 03:23 EDT
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Oh my dear... We in our time can understand a band-aid-date or even a comfort relationship, but can Inuyasha do that? He, who has always went for serious relationships... straight from planning a shared life to a promise of being together forever. This can't be good... But by the Goddess, the two of them love each other silly! I really wish they could just... just... agree that the past was not as they would've wanted it, but that they could shape a better future! Loooove it!
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Title: EEEKKKK!!!!!
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 02:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEKKK IT STOPPED!!! Im so glad you updated but...but...but why? Oh goodness I need to read more.....I hate cliffies (even if I am guilty of doing em myslef hehe) but I understand they make the readers addicted which I SURELY am!!! I loved the cliffy even though I just NEED to find out what happens next! Is Kagome married to hojo!? Please update soon Im confused and the wheels in my head are spinning!!! UPDATE SOON PLZ PLZ PLZ!!! This was such a great chapter another well done chapter for this beautifull written fanfic plz update as soon as you can! Your fan, blackr0s3
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 02:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOOOVED it! Gah why did you have to cut it off there? Just when it was getting good too! Well I sincerely hope there is a speedy update coming. This is a fantastic fic and I'm dying to know what happens next. Happy writing :) -Langus
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting story so far, I really like it. I kinda enjoyed the rough Yash though. He was kinda exciting...lol! Keep up the good work, thank you for writing it!!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: September 12, 2007 21:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Oh No! Akago!" . . . I know, sick humor. Back to seriousness. Another cliffhanger! I am not going to make it to the next chapter. I am still dying to know what happened with Kagome and InuYasha. Now, I have to worry about Rin getting saved in time. This story is really getting some twists and turns (where's my riding helmet.) Hmmmm, I just had another thought; a grown Rin. Sesshoumaru is sure to have some interesting reactions, not to mention being pissed off at Auntie Wicked Witch and her best buddy, Akago. We love the characters, we love the story, bring it on R. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 20:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! We get to see the gang next chapter! Please update as soon as you can. :D
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 17:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... thinsgs are getting interesting and complicated... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: Again&Again
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 16:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, very well written! It was a great chapter! I can't wait for your next update!!! You're such a good writer! I'm glad you don't have writer's block anymore!!! Update soon please! ^_^
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