| "Suffer The Fray" Reviews/Comments [ 210 ] |
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Reviewed By: Alukina On: September 05, 2007 13:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read dozens of InuYasha fanfics and all of them were crap... and that's putting it nicely. I stopped reading them for months because most authors end up degrading the wonderful story Rumiko Takahashi created (which is why I never wrote a review until today). If there is one thing I can't stand its when fanfic writers make the story outrageously unrealistic. However, yours caught my eye though and I was taken by surprise. Compared to the actual anime/manga this is actually a very believable continuation of the plot, thus making it more interesting and enjoyable for readers. Please keep the chapters coming, I look forward to the latest installment. (;
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: September 04, 2007 21:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So now we have Kohaku, Kagura, and Kikyo in the mixture. (For some reason, I want to say the words, "Shaken, not stirred," in that James Bond tone of voice. The three of them are fiery hot on the inside, and ice and frost on the outside. A collaboration of the unpredictable three could turn out to be most interesting, or most deadly. I enjoyed the chapter, though I am still wondering about the InuYasha/Kagome cliffhanger. Thank you for sharing, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 17:32 EDT
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Nice change of pace for the last couple of chapters, it keeps the reader focused on the story as a whole and not just Inu/Kag. Ties the story-line in and makes you think about what's going on with the group AND the situation. I'm not sure exactly what Kagome's thinking of doing about this latest developement, but it's nice to see that Inu's at least trying to make her face the new reality. Honestly can't wait to see where you're going with this and I'll try to be better for reviews. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: Sassa, too lazy to log in On: September 04, 2007 04:23 EDT
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I really like the connection between Kagura and Kohaku and the way you point out her protectiveness of him. Kikyo seems... quite out of it, but on the other hand, she is. She's of the walking dead, that ought to qualify her to the "out of it"-bunch. I am madly looking forward to see how the Inu/Kag situations' going to hold up - either Inuyasha made a brilliant move or he has misred and misunderstood everything about Kagome and their connection will be damaged. Do tell...
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 00:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! it was such a well written chapter(as always) and I cant wait for the next chapter! update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Sassa, too lazy to log in On: August 29, 2007 17:06 EDT
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I...don't know what to say about this chapter. It was amazing as always, but those intense emotions - those raw feelings...by the goddess, that was intense but still so human, so easily recognized, so common - that brutally basic pain of fear, confusion, anger and desire, all mixed and spiced with the ideas of how one ought to be, who one wants to be and who one really is. Inuyasha has clearly found out and accepted who he is and what he wants. Kagome has merely accepted her assignement and barely so. She has much to learn about desire, regret and handing being an adult. By Johve, intense!
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Reviewed By: wlp0604 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 08:02 EDT
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Inuyasha, forget Kagome! You can growl in my ear any time you want!!! ;)
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Reviewed By: sufferingkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 21:43 EDT
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crying
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: August 26, 2007 21:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I am speechless. That chapter had a real kickkk at the end. You keep suprising me with this story. Are you sure, that you have not written much, before this story? I can not wait to read what happens next. This story is on fire! I would not tell you, that I thought you were good, if it was not justly deserved. I only comment on meaningful stories. And Thank You for sharing your story with us. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 16:41 EDT
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Aw, Kagome cried. But I love the drama! Super job! Please update soon. :D
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Title: Yay=)
Reviewed By: Novemberkid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 15:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it´s a great story ^^D i like it! but i dont like kagomes "new" personality. It´s so not like her. But keep up with the good work! Because it´s a great story^^
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 05:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nicely written im glad u updated i love this chapter it had a bit of minor fluff heh update soon plz
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 04:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 04:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ouch... well, I'm afraid to say she deserved every breath of that. You're doing a great job of underlining the emotions that are passing through everybody without having them in the reader's face. Your subtility is great! Well done, and I definately look forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 03:00 EDT
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I love how well you always descibe the scenes. And you're using a lot of good words. I feel like my vocabulary will get so much better because of you. :) I liked that you made a chapter entirely about Sesshomaru. I feel Sesshomaru and Rin have a more father/daughter relationship but I like the way you're going with the Sess/Rin pairing. I'm quite curious as to how InuYasha and the others are doing...
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