| "Suffer The Fray" Reviews/Comments [ 210 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: July 15, 2007 09:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying your story. It seems very engaging. Thank you for sharing. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 09:11 EDT
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I'm dying to know what's going to happen! There are so many interesting aspects I don't know where to begin, but this is marvellous! I really like the added horsebackriding; that way Kagome will be able to travel about without Inuyasha's help or a bike. And the dog is a perculiar one, isn't he? Do continue! Do continue!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 20:55 EDT
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ACK!!! So much has happened in five years!! As I knew it woukd ^_^! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: leeluu On: July 10, 2007 02:22 EDT
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He can call up his demon side! We are so missing what's been going on here.It looks like it's going to be a very juicy story.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 22:52 EDT
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Very good. Like the tone and feel. The first chapter was especially beautiful. The flow of the words, the feelings.... Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 15:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has the promise of a VERY good story. I'm looking forward to the progress of this timeline because it really does have so much potential for both angst and a very good plot. Thank you for sharing it, and keep working on it!
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Reviewed By: sufferingkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 02:31 EDT
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write more plz i want to know what going to be in the next chaper!!!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 15:29 EDT
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I have a little crush on this story so far;) I like your writing style, first off. It's mature sounding and seems very thoughtful. Good dialogue too. I am a big fan of the Kagome-takes-action character because too often she is written as quite passive. I am interested to see what is coming with her going back and get to see what Inuyasha has been doing/thinking/stewing about. Great work so far and I look forward to updates. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: youkai fetish On: July 03, 2007 00:02 EDT
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I love that Kagome inadvertedly trained for when she returns to the fuedal era.
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: July 01, 2007 23:05 EDT
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You made me spill my drink when I read that Souta is the new Hojo. That was just to funny to picture. Can you imagine a teenage Souta going up to a girl and giving her medicinal gifts for her health?
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 22:59 EDT
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Well, your first two chapters have me hooked...some interesting character growth with Kags.
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Reviewed By: crystal strawberry On: June 26, 2007 23:51 EDT
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I am so riveted by that prologue. I need more chapters. This is going to be a great story.
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: June 26, 2007 21:40 EDT
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What was the question, what answer did Inuyasha give? You have totally hooked. I just have to know what happened.
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: June 26, 2007 20:38 EDT
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Well, you've grabbed my interest. Can't wait to read more. Please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: PeachesandCream On: June 26, 2007 19:18 EDT
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Ooh, nice set-up! It seems really well thought out, doesn't give away to much information, and really in character! Not to mention reallllllllyyyyy cute! Can't wait to see more!
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