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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 22:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the nuts in the peanut gallery here! Very nice chap:lottsa action. Cant wait to see what happens next, but update when ya can! ;)
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Title: In LOVE with your story!
Reviewed By: caitypeach22 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 20:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Reux! Love your word styling and development of characters. I found myself drowning in the intricate plots and intriguing personalities-- wanting to read more and more! I especially love how you are able to create a illustration with your story-- using excellent words to describe each characters' feelings. Kudos! Can't wait for Chapter 21.
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Reviewed By: smich16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 20:41 EDT
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koga is so cool, even though he is meant for ayumi and not kagome. but nooo he is deranged, how horrible. oh well, kikyo with lust for naraku, that one was just whoah!! or was it just cause he looks like that castle lord, but anyways its wierd thinking the claypot has human feelings. and shippo should always have kagome on his side, its kinda unfamilier to see her scold him. and inuyasha should have caressed kagomes butt, i thnk its time they got eXXXtra physical. okay bye,~smich16
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: October 14, 2007 13:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here' . . .s Johnny! I,m back from vacation with no access to computers, and it seems to be just in time. This chapter is packed with all kinds of intense action. The Kikyo and Naraku/Onigumo attraction was really dark and intersting. The InuYasha/Kagome chaos and closeness was very revealing, I thought. My favorite part. You have continously surprised me with these last chapters. It is hard for me to predict or outguess this storyline. I am really enjoying every minute of it. I am impressed that you do not seem to slow down on this story. Thank you, Cynbad146
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Title: great
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 06:20 EDT
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i liked this chapter....especially the bit of inu/kag fluff lol...update when u can
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 22:29 EDT
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This story is so great! I can't wait to see how the fight with Koga will turn out! :D
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Reviewed By: Alaskan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 20:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I am seriously in love with his story. The characters are pretty in character to me! I can't wait until the next chapter...the suspense is killing me! xD Keep up the awesome work!
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Title: Fantastic!
Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 16:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I've been waiting days for this chapter to come out but it was well worth it :) Thank you for writing such an enthralling bit. I really really enjoyed the scenes with Kagome and Inu. Their banter is really sweet and the imagery was very vivid. I could picture exactly what was happening which is great :) I think they need a kiss hahaha But I have to say I also love how your story is never predictable. I mean Kouga? I never would've thought he'd go crazy but that's what makes your story great. You have so many twists and turns that keep readers like me coming back for more. Good luck with writing the next chapter. I look forward to reading it. Hopefully it doesn't end with Kouga dying...I really like the guy as dense as he is hahaha Cheers!
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 12:57 EDT
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Ooh, that gave me the shivers! Congrats to Kagome for finally coming into her own--I don't really understand yet everything that's happened in the five years since she's been gone, but she's definitely showing off a side of herself that we don't see often. This is an interesting read, and I hope you continue it soon!
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 09:18 EDT
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OMG KEEP GOING THIS SO ROCKS
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 08:05 EDT
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kikyo being motivated by constant pain is the perfect explanation of her personality and actions. i've always had a mental picture of someone walking on broken glass. her baiting of naraku was entirely in character. the sensuality you gave each of them was very well done. shippo's personality had grown and mellowed in earlier chapters, but seems to have reverted since kagome's return. was this intentional? it is natural to display more childlike tendencies when a mother figure is present. the flashback brought up an important insight into inuyasha's character; that he would remain by kagome's side no matter how much of herself she was willing to share, or what the relationship between the two of them was. it's the reflective image of what the manga and anime have always projected. one problem i had was the paragraph that started "that way my fight...". it should have been was, not way. i know you alluded to possible changes in koga, earlier, but i was not prepared for the extent to which you went. i do wonder if rin was in the village when koga attacked. the synchronicity required to have them all in the same place at the same time is far beyond coincidence. now that i have caught up with your story, i will, unfortunately, have to wait for updates. but i want to thank you for a wonderful story, and the enjoyment it has given me so far.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 05:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... at least inuyasha & kagome are talking now... hope they get together and stay together... what ever comes there way they should be able to overcome it... what will happen to kouga... what is kikyo up to... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 23:11 EDT
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Well that was a fun adventure! Do you take Karate by any chance? I only ask because your description of the fight reminded me so much of my Karate class...arm pains and all yeeesh! Well anyhoo that was fun to read. I look forward to whatever comes next :) Thanks and Happy Thanksgiving weekend (if you're Canadian...if not celebrate anyways with a piece of pie!)
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Reviewed By: smich16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 18:28 EDT
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good chap, i liked the twist, the whole time i was thinking kikyo, ahhh i hate kikyo!! but yeah it was cool. i really hoped ah-un wasnt dead, i feel sorta bad for not remembering tenseiga. maybe shippo can have a first kiss or hold hands, is that creepy? im creepy, but seriously miroku is one fine mofo, if i were sango id be all over that no matter the situation. but once again....AWESOME FIC!!!! bye~smich16
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 05:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... at least kagome is finally figuring things out... she's not as clueless anymore... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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