| "Suffer The Fray" Reviews/Comments [ 210 ] |
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Title: Chapter 18
Reviewed By: LavenderRose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 03:47 EDT
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Very nice fic...glad to see Kagura resurrected for this one. Definitely enjoying the concept of five years passing to put things into perspective for everyone. Just one question...how could Naraku manipulate Kagome 500 years into the future? Because she was still in the same physical vicinity as his domain, or through Kikyo's link to her? Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Fanfics2007 On: October 02, 2007 15:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this Fic. Very original, creative, and wonderful use of vocabulary! Keep on going, I love it!!!
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 08:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yikes! I knew something had to be wrong for Kagome to tell InuYasha to swing his sword at her. I hate Naraku but he's so in character. 10/10! As always. :)
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: blackrose(logged off) On: October 02, 2007 00:01 EDT
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NARAKU? OOh I hope he dies soon...lol wonderful chapter! As always really good descriptions and anyone who DIDNT like this chapter would be CRAZY! Lol update whenever you can!!! ^^
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: blackrose(logged off) On: October 02, 2007 00:00 EDT
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NARAKU? OOh I hope he dies soon...lol wonderful chapter! As always really good descriptions and anyone who DIDNT like this chapter would be CRAZY! Lol update whenever you can!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: October 01, 2007 23:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ravenreux, you knocked me for a loop with that Naraku evil aura overpowering Kagome and causing InuYasha to try to fry his love. (I wasn't expecting it,again, but I really liked the concern he showed afterward.) I always wondered if Kagome's miko power could withstand InuYasha's sword power. And then, Sango telling Miroku that she liked his wandering hands more than he thought. Your imagination was breaking way more rules than mine! Hey, but to borrow your words, it seems to fit the "essence of the conflict," (I really liked that phrase.) The Kagura/Kohaku scene carried alot of feeling I thought. I am glad to be reading you, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 22:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is wonderfully done. The realism you bring to your characters is amazing. I'm looking forward until your next update. Chanda
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Reviewed By: smich16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 18:45 EDT
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hey there, im a super obsessed rin/sesh fan, so i was just wondering... when do they meet again?! im a really impatient person so...yeah. but great its one of the best that i have read, and this may be a long shot, but does shippo end up with a love interest, cause ive never read a fic where he even plays a vital role let alone a have a romantic life. but that would be kinda unnatural, maybe when i do see it ill like it. and what about miroku and sango, is there going to be more romance between them, cause right now they seem to be one of those couples that makes a schedule for sex. i domnt know that could just be me. anyway im done rambling. SUPER AWESOME FIC!! i will enjoy it to the end. then be sad that its over. well, bye~~smich16
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 18:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that naraku is giving kagome a hard time... hope kagome will be able to fight whatever control naraku has over her... and inuyasha & kagome's relationship still not clear eventhough they talked... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 12:52 EDT
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Well crap, I've been remiss in reviewing, and look what you've done! Nice bit of plot twist with the shards, and it's really great how you keep interest up with this. The insight into All the involved characters is wonderful, and you've made one of the things I was wondering about a bit more clear (Kagome's attitude/conflicting thoughts). All this and you still kept some info hidden in the Inu/Kag dynamic, sneakily and well done! Great to see the update and Thanks! Cheers!
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Reviewed By: Spiffilicious On: October 01, 2007 08:47 EDT
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Not much i say that probably hasnt been said already... you're a great writer and I really hope you write more soon!
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Reviewed By: future author On: September 26, 2007 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I'm glad they got it over with even though there are still things they need to talk about. I liked this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.Until the next update, good luck!!
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 20:50 EDT
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PLEASE UPDATE
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: vkp23 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 11:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story! I'm hoping Kagome didn't "give herself" to Hojo. If that's the big "hush hush" thing I'm gonna faint!! What I'm really wondering about is, what was it exactly that she asked of Inuyasha before she had left?????
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: September 24, 2007 01:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! Be still my beating heart! That kiss scene was so tender, delicate, and surprising. Well done, R! Now, my curosity is killing my cat on what the Kagome/Hojo thing is. I hope you don't leave me hanging too long, if you leave it to my imagination, I will have them dying or pregnant. (My imagination is always way over the top.) I figure that Kagome did not forget her horse, she just had to go and take care of an emergency. I quite enjoyed all of it as usual. Love your talents and your faithful sharing. Cynbad146
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