| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tomoe Ichirou On: February 15, 2010 05:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm can't really say what make your work so good because I don't really figure what makes a story fascinating and addictive; I just know that your definitely does. But I can't help but notice insignificants cultural errors, so I'll niptick about it. Maybe it'll help make your next work even more flawless, maybe I'm just being an annoyance... Here it is: You make Sesshoumaru write with a quill and a bottle of ink. That's a western writing implement. They used (and still use for artistic calligraphy and painting) brush of warous width depending on the size of caracters to be writen, and solid ink that's rubbed over a special smoothly polished black stone with a little water to abrase the solid ink into fine particles that get suspended ino the water. Preparing enough ink to write actually takes up more time than writing does. But a brush will make much more beautiful writing than a pointball pen... It's all about the variation of width of the lines drawn. So the modern implement for a traditional looking writing is a sort of pen with a reserve of liquid ink in it's entire body and a brush at the tip. The body of the pen is a little supple so you can press to get more ink down to the brush if it dries up, and it can be opened to refill out of a large bottle of liquid black ink. Kagome would have bought a few of those in various width and some large bottles of ink to refill.
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Reviewed By: Greengrl32 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2009 16:33 EST
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I absolutely love this story!!! I can't wait until you write more... if you write more. I noticed that you haven't written in a while and I understand that if you don't continue the story but I really hope that you do continue it!!!
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Title: Curious
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2009 21:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I suppose, like all the others, I'm just curious to see if you are planning to finish this - it has been one hell of an entertaining read. I totally adore the pranks on Kouga, he always did annoy me, and the whole Hojo thing as well - he was just as annoying as Kouga. Please, let me know if you do inted to finish... definitely worthy of being favorited! Amber
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Reviewed By: yashkags4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2009 17:26 EDT
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I love this story! It is without a doubt one of my ultimate favorites. I've read it through many times, patiently waiting for the next update. i'm sure you're getting tired of these, but it has been more then a year since you've update...are you continuing the story? and anytime soon? try not to keep your fans waiting much longer!!
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedFury On: August 28, 2009 00:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A-MAZE-ING one of the best sesskags I have ever read. if you would please email me when you post the next chapter that would be wonderful. my email address is kaleigh_macinnis@hotmail.com thank you.
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Reviewed By: aislin94 On: June 09, 2009 05:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue this story, it's really good, and I want to know how it continues!
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Title: NaturesPhoenix
Reviewed By: NaturesPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2009 22:59 EDT
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I love this story! This is the fourth time I've read it through. I'm curious though, after more than a year, are you going to be updating anytime soon or are you discontinuing it? I know many people who are just waiting for the next update. So if you could let us know it would be very much appreciated.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2009 14:30 EDT
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CMK2CMM......why I know that you said it would be awhile until you would update again but its been over a year....I had a hard time remembering what the title of the story was so I could leave a comment and ask....ya I understand its not easy but you did say you would continue....It's just so sad this story is like aways on my mind even when I'm reading other one's....I really really really really want you to continue, I want to see this through please, I feel like something is just left unsaid in my head...sigh* probably don't make sence but still....please update.....................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Natures_Phoenix On: February 21, 2009 17:49 EST
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I love this story. I read all 79 chapters in 5 days! Please continue soon. I really want to know why souta's eyes turned blue, is Kagome turning into a dog demon miko? Why did kagome's mom act like she knew what the ring was? What is Rin in all this? AAAAAAARRRRRRHHHHHH! I NEED TO KNOW! Love this fic by the way!
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Title: Congratulations! You've been rec'd!
Reviewed By: The Readers Have Chosen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2009 13:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations! You've been rec'd! The Reader's Have Chosen is a new fanfiction recommendation community dedicated to finding the best of the best in fandoms across the boards, and sharing them with other authors and avid readers. Your story, She Who the Prophecy Foretold, has been rec'd and is now being voted on in the Weekly Poll (Inuyasha section). Fellow fandom-aficionados will vote for their favorites of all the recommendations, and the stories with the most votes will be posted on the front page. You can find our website at (without spaces): http : // thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com You can find the Inuyasha Weekly Poll at (without spaces): http : // thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com / forum / index. php ? topic = 408.0 Thank you for sharing your work with us!
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Title: You have been nominated!
Reviewed By: Auraki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 14:48 EST
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You have been nominated at The Readers Have Chosen! Each week readers and authors alike select their favorite fanfiction to recommend for the Weekly Recommendation Poll, and your story has been added to our Poll! The voting will end on Saturday at midnight (PST), and the results will be published on the main website on Sunday. Thank you for sharing with us and good luck! Visit our forum to make your own recommendations or to just to read good fiction. Site (without spaces): thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com / index . html Poll (without spaces): thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com / forum / index . php ? board = 6.0
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Reviewed By: yaoiramenfreak On: December 27, 2008 02:23 EST
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u rock i have read almost all of your stories
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Title: frekin awesome
Reviewed By: yaoiramenfreak On: December 27, 2008 02:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love sess/kag i have read almost all of your stories.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 07:21 EDT
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i love this story so much that i decided to read the entire thing from start to finish again...now if only there were more chapters.
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Title: youkailover1-Amy
Reviewed By: youkailover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 03:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely loved this story! Please continue writing it! I'm anxious to see its completion and not only see kagome's full transformation and mating with Sess but also the defeat of Naraku. I love how you made Inuyasha part of a family again and showed the love between him and Kagome was too immature to be mate/married love. Its great and its taken me DAYS!! to read all these chapters and I couldn't put the laptop down, much to my husband's annoyance! :) My daughter has also been curious as to why I'm spending so much time on the computer! ha ha. This story is great and I'm sure you have it all in your head ready to come out. I can't wait to read more, I have throughly enjoyed what you've written so far. Thanks!!
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