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| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] | | Pages (33): [ « ‹ 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 › » ] | Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 00:10 EST
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p.s. I hope your Mom recovers quickly. Been there, done that & it's no fun. You guys will be on my mind.
| Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 00:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woohoo! shower scene! can't wait...=) anyway, im super happy Sesshoumaru has his arm back. i love the way you did it too. also, i know it will probably be in the distant future, but im glad that you mention them having their own children together. there are so many Sess/Kag fics where this never happens. I also cant wait to see what's up the kids sleeves when it comes to pranking the wolves. teehee. Just to let you know, i havent forgotten about those links im suppossed to send you, been so busy with the holiday hoo-ha & stuff. take care!
| Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 00:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG he is too nervous to ask? He has his arm back now, shouldn't Sesshoumaru be feeling more self assured?
| Title: ohhh
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: December 15, 2007 00:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read chapter 60 and I must say that you out did yourself. That was a great way how you made Kagome have dreams about the well. She found another box and this time had Sesshoumaru's arm. I know that he is happy about that one. Kagome's mom maybe right about Kagome having Sesshoumaru wrapped around her finger. Ohh this keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to see what happens when Kagome goes to school for her test. Ohh and when she takes Sesshoumaru out with her to get things from the store. That right there may just start something already. I'm just happy that Sesshoumaru got his arm back and is not going to be said again. I can't wait to see what the next chapter is about cause this is getting to good. They both can't get enough of each other as well at least Sesshoumaru can't get enough of her. Well I hope that you have another chapter up soon cause this is getting way to good to just stop her and wait a while. Though if you have to I'll wait but I may just die from waiting to long. Hope everything goes well with the next chapter. Good luck.
| Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 23:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Houjo is delusional! Kagome was very good at reassuring Sesshoumaru and comforting him during his moment of insecurity.
| Reviewed By: BluEyedTigress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 16:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*mimicks Johnny Depp as Cap'n Jack Sparrow* It's wha' I'm 'ere for, luv! Another awesome chapter, as per usual! I usually only run out of "voices" when I can't think of any or am pinched for time. XD Otherwise, I'm like the foun'n o' accents, real-E. It's quate inner-estin' when I get on da ball and spin out some luvly lil' turns a voice. Nat-ur-all habit, real-e. Glad ya findin' 'em entertain'n is all. Love how real Sesshomaru's attitude, outlook-on-things, ad general behavior is!! You really hit it spot-on with the inu/dog-habitual behaviors and then the overlay of nervous-fiance-to-be-if-only-he'd-ask-the-parents type of thing. :D Must pip off, ag'in! Till next time!
| Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai On: December 14, 2007 15:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, he got his arm back! A very unique way of restoration. I love the way they complement each other. I hope the panther demons get warned in time to especially save the young female. I don't want Naraku to get his sick hands on her. Maybe she's for Inuyasha? I'm eager to see what the pups have planned for the wolves. Poor Sesshoumaru, too bad he paniced and did't ask to court Kagome. I'm just dying for them to complete their lovemaking. I hope that's what happens in the shower. Can't forget sick, delusional Hojo. He'd best keep his distance from them. He's as bad as Kouga. I just discovered this site a few days ago. Since ASS has gone whatever, I've been looking everywhere else for the ASS stories on my fav list. Other than a pledge drive, what is wrong with ASS? I'm elderly, not real knowledgeable about the internet and this has left me feeling frustrated concerming my favorite stories. Thank the Good Lord I was able to find one of my most fav's (this one) on this site.
| Title: YATA!!! the arm is here
Reviewed By: Arry On: December 14, 2007 14:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY and freakin AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it it was so funny and the arm restoring was so detailed and amazingly well written you didn't just say and poff it back you went through bone to muscke to skin everything twas sooo cool. So happy you did it now the limes will be easier to write probably and hotter you can do much more with two hands lol. and I'm wondering when sesshy going to ask about her beast and when kags is going to find out she has one hmmm reactions galore. and more limes to come in 61? Yes nice soo happy you make me have sooo many ficgasms hehe well say get well to your mum for me and cards are coming soon from me I'm picky must be perfect lol update when you can Loves Arry Font Color
| Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 13:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh jeez, is your mother okay? I hope she feels better. So what is Psychonauts about? What console can you play it on? I play the Resident Evil games. Sorry I should be reviewing the chapter instead of discussing video games. So, Sesshoumaru got his arm back *grins while doing a happy dance*. Can't wait to see the reactions of all the kids when they get back and see their pops newly restored arm. I'm curious to see how Kagura will warn the panther demons of Naraku's plans. And lets not forget the kids, just what are they planning? Something along the lines of Shippou taking on Kagome's form maybe? Would be very funny whatever your planning. Have a great weekend *waves* ceira
| Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 12:19 EST
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So, Sesshoumaru finally got his arm back. This is a whole new dimension on the "You complete me" idea. You caught me by surprise with the green crystal heart, but when you brought it up, I literally smacked myself for not seeing that development a mile away. I wonder who the remaining two jewels are going to heal and where they're hiding. Oops... did I say too much? Maybe I'm guessing wrong, but it seems to stand reason that there's going to be two more. One will probably get Kagome's mom and dad back together somehow but the other... Hum... gotta give that one some thought. There are so many "broken" people in this story! Again, don't tell me! One thing I did see was that our favorite demon lord and miko will somehow save the youkai race. Or maybe the human one. I'll love to see that develop, just as much as I patiently await for Sesshy to get his prize. I think it's an especially nice touch to have the kiddos back home plan on "playing" with Kouga. I know before reading it that I'm going to enjoy that chapter. Inuyasha won't have to figure out a way to entertain the kids. . . they've figured that out for themselves! Bravo to the author who made me want to smack Sesshoumaru again. Gramps said it all... what the blue hell is making this almost god figure afraid of some words. Little Sauta, wonder what he's going to say. Harumph. Anyway, this is going to be a LONG story, and I'm so happy to have the privilege of seeing it develop as it's written. The power of the internet. Amazing. I'm glad your Mom's okay. Have a great weekend!
| Reviewed By: Little Rini On: December 14, 2007 11:55 EST
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Souta FTW! :P Sorry.... I've been playing too many online games. Have you ever tried maplestory? Visit Nexon.net if you want more information. I'm on the Bera server. My IGN (in game name)? Rinichan.
| Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 06:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, the flashback with Miyouga was cool, but Kaguras flashback was basically exactly what happened in the anime. I don't mind flashbacks in general, I just didn't like the Kagura flashback as much. This chapter was really nice. Finally his arm is back! It's so annoying that I forgot all about that box. Of course that was how he was gonna get his arm back! *slaps forehead* I giggled when Sesshoumaru chickened out on asking her mom and grandpa about courting. I can imagine him with a school boy blush. XD Oh, so you're gonna do a shower scene? Sounds yummy!
| Reviewed By: S. Mingan On: December 14, 2007 03:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way Hojo rationalized everything. ^^ And the way Sesshomaru got his arm back was a stroke of genius. p.s. I hope your mom feels better soon.
| Reviewed By: sugar0o [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 02:38 EST
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like it? i love it, its additive. i giggle more reading this then i do many fanfics, i'm usually excited to see that you've updated a chapter. I've started reading it on FF just because i know that site better, but i read the more lemony scenes here. i don't think i could ever flatter you enough when it comes to this story. its entirely grand to write something you want to see b/c you don't see it anywhere else, and i have to give you much credit, most people would have fallen into a massive plot hole by now, but from what i can tell, after reading from chapter 1 to the current you have not. i'm amazed. thats just as far as it goes, and though honestly i don't think i could read it again, ONLY b/c its already at a massive 200k and you've stated you know its going to take a while longer if it were printed i'd buy it, simply bc i'd have it always. i have a feelings your going to take 5-600k before this is done, I'm honestly awed. I'm wondering how on earth your going to get the naraku fight going, and i can't help but hop kags and sess have pups of their own, as well as when its time for Hitomi to meet back up after the 500 years... i was wonder about the idea that if they get a happy ended then they are all already in the modern era meaning that their pups, and themselves [the modern them] know they are at the shrine RIGHT NOW. i dunno i'm just in love with it, like i said i don't think i could ever write enough abotu how much i adore this story. I'm so glad i found it. - sugar0o, 'r0o'
| Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 02:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I am impressed with how seamlessly you integrated the unplanned arm return into the story. I liked the writing stile a lot in this chapter. Not that it is any different, it's just that it really shines here. I loved the whole boob thing and the pancake thing... and the dazed/lost in happy thoughts thing. It also looks like the next chapters are going to be really interesting with some wolves being used as target practice and Kagura having resolved to do the right thing. Also it seems a lot of Sesshoumaru's walls have come down and now he has a paradox of decreased confidence in being out of his element and increased confidence in receiving his gift. I am also interested to see how Sesshoumaru handles asking the question now that it sort of came up and he backed down. I'm sure that he will eventually realize that considering that Japanese culture is as it is, he should just go about it as he would with a family from his time... maybe minus any inu traditions, if they exist, that would be lost on her human family... or maybe not... I'll leave Sesshoumaru to worry about it, it's giving me a headache. I want to see the reactions to the return of the arm... the kids mainly, but especially Inuyasha. I can't wait for whatever chapter that is in.
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