| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 26, 2007 17:48 EDT
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haha Brilliant! The last part had me in a fit of giggles. To perfect!!
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Reviewed By: gratefulreader On: October 26, 2007 00:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: October 24, 2007 23:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry for the late update have more exams. BLUH. Anyways I just read chapters 37 and 38 and I must say that you out done yourself on these also. I did wonder why Kagome could not sense the jewel shard. I wonder if it has anything to do with bonding with demons. It was cute how Sesshoumaru would not let Kagome down after she was attacked. Slept in a tree and everything with her. I jus thought it was very kawaii because he would not let her go for nothing. I wonder when Inuyasha would come back so he can really see what Sesshoumaru is really about. I thought that Sesshoumaru's father was very mean. He didn't treat him very good. No wonder he turned out the way he did. I bet that you have this memory has significance in sometime later in the story because you probably would not have written it if it did. I just think it so cool that they can share memories with each other. That can give them a better understanding of each other. I wonder what Sesshoumaru will get Kagome for her birthday since she is spending it in the feudal era. Ohh it just can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I also read your note about not being able to get chapters update during Halloween. That's ok cause you want to spend time with your daughter and that's a good enough reason not to write chapters as fast. Well hope you get those treats done and have a good Halloween.
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 21:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I have missed a lot of chapters!! while gone , the story is unfolding wonderfully btw !!! why has yasha stayed gone for so long , he isnt going to stay gone is he?
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 24, 2007 17:10 EDT
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I was so close to crying at the memories of chibi fluffy. Wow poor thing and yet he still remained semi normal ^^ love it
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 05:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**sigh** I had my review all written up and ready to go and I lost it in a cut and paste accident. I am sorry as this will deprive you of my first impressions and has worn on my patience, which I am beginning to wonder may not be as near-limitless as I once knew it to be. I really loved this chapter. I wish I could have had the privilege to see the procession that Kaede, Sango, and Miroku were treated to. I wouldn't be surprised if the whole village had erupted into a fit of laughter once the demons were a safe distance away. I could see them coming to be known as the city of giggles after this. I was also wondering if Kirara will have a visible mark from Sango from the bonding or if is is just a miko thing... Sango does seem to have some sort of spiritual power seeing as she can detect demonic auras whereas some people cannot (the exorcist with the salt) lol.... one thing I thought during the slaying of the stupid demon with the shard is: "Hey, Sessh, you've got something stuck in your hair... let me get it for you." Who wouldn't want to fondle Sesshoumaru's hair. A good 30 seconds could be worth the possibility of it ending in death... I would never allow him to take a shower unless I had a hair trap on the drain... I had hair to the bottom of my ass at one time, and I can only imagine what knee length, youkai hair could do to plumbing... um... I think I went off on a tangent again... Well as always, I will look forward to the next chapter. I may be late in my reviews most of the time now, but I will still try to review each chapter. A great writer such as yourself deserves no less... especially as much as you spoil us, your faithful fans. See you next time!
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Reviewed By: CrystalMaiden87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 01:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im really hooked on to this fanfic, sessho and kagome really make me laugh.Its just so funny how they flirt with each other, really makes me feel like im right there observing whats happening,very rare to get that from a fanfic. I still cant believe i read all the chapters up until this one in 2 days ahhh my eyes, but its worth it. I cant wait for the lemons and i do agree with you, that its better to get the plot first before rushing in.Really love this fanfic it makes me laugh alot.
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 23:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was cute the way Sess treed Kagome because he had been so worried.
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 23, 2007 18:43 EDT
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Incredibly kawaii. And man i wish i had a fluffy dog demon to sleep and cuddle with! If only i did...i guess its just me and my golden for the time being though. Or well until i have giant fluffy dog demon...oh yes maybe i will hehe
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Reviewed By: Little Rini On: October 23, 2007 01:22 EDT
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"Damnit, put me down!" sounds like a great chapter. I'm amazed that you have the time to write what you've written so far. Are you a stay at home mom? I'd much rather wait for something great than read something poor, so I'll gladly wait for your posts. You write very well, so if you ever decide to write a book, please make a note at the end of this story - I'd buy it. I enjoy a well written story, even if it's outside of my normal genres. (>'.')> Kirby wants to go trick or treating with you. :P
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 16:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy that Kirara is going to be able to speak with Sango now. I was hopping this chapter would include the conversation and bonding... but now I have something to look forward to along with the whatever your ext chapter's name meant. I am really curious about that! I loved the kiss so much! It was perfect! Now the pups know what a perfect kiss should look like! Wow! Sesshoumaru has never been kissed until now? lol that's sweet! I didn't think he would have kissed those unfeeling bitches anyway. Kind of an old guy to be getting his first kiss. I certainly hope he enjoys whatever will come of the subjugation beads. I know I am looking forward to seeing what happens. I felt so bad for Inuyasha sitting in his cave... I bet that whatever is in Izayoi's box has some significance to the prophecy. I'm also glad that Kohaku has entered the picture even though it can bring a lot of angst into the picture. I have seen him occasionally cut out just to get around that, but he is an important character. He has an enormous strength of will and is willing to sacrifice himself to put an and to the evil of Naraku. This, allong with his intelligence and determination combined with his gentle nature make him a character that I feel is often mistreated by fanfiction writers when they want to milk or avoid his tragic presence. I have the feeling that whatever you do with him will surprise me in some ways and maybe not in others, but which ways remains to be seen... Well I am sure i am forgetting somethign that I wanted to comment on, but I think I will have to save trying to use up the 4000 character limit for these comments for some other day. I'm sure you have some chapters to come that will call for it! See you next time!
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 22, 2007 15:18 EDT
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Finally sango is going to have a connection as well! so excited for that. brilliant chapter once again.
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Reviewed By: starfury On: October 22, 2007 12:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* love your fic :) keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: soo goood
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: October 21, 2007 22:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh I just read the chapters that you written today and I must say that they were great. I was surprised that you written 2 chapters in 1 day and made both of them long. That must have taken alot of work but it turned out great in the end. I was surprised that Jaken didn't get killed in the end when he told all that to Sesshoumaru. Sesshoumaru is starting to be open with his feelings, which is good in his case. At least Sango told Kagome what she thought and she and Miroku are very perceptive of the situation. At least Kagome got it in the end and told Sesshoumaru about it. It just keeps getting better and better. Sesshoumaru finally told Kagome and I was on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next. I was surprised that Inuyasha finally figured out his feelings for Kagome. At least now he won't be in the way of those two. Then the kiss was just like wow. I liked the part where you made them kiss to transfer energy but then you made them kiss again just for the heck of it. Ohhh this story is just getting to good to stop reading. I can't wait to see what happens next chapter. I wonder when they will find Kagome's dad and is she still mad about the whole not telling the truth thing. But you probably won't tell me cause that would defeat the purpose of seeing what happens next chapter if you tell me. That's ok cause I would still read it even if you told me. That's how good its getting. Well hope you continue to write cause this is getting to good to stop. You did a great job on these chapters as well. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: l,adydot On: October 21, 2007 20:51 EDT
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adorable! what a cute mental picture of that last ending scene.
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