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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 17:20 EDT
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You do have a point there. I didn't think of the mental connection. I'm hooked. Thanks for the well-wishing on my... crush... >
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Reviewed By: Chas On: October 17, 2007 23:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad I found your story. I absolutely love your plot and your characters are oh so lovely. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: Lil Rini On: October 17, 2007 19:41 EDT
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Wow. A chapter a day on one of the better stories. That's rare. :) Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 17, 2007 18:12 EDT
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that is soooo cute!! she licked his hand. wow she sounded incredibly like me at that moment. I love to do that to a male who decided to "shut" me up by putting his hand over my mouth. Its cute and gets there attention extremely quick. Thank goodness the fight is tomorrow i can't wait for it!
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Reviewed By: Monk-MIko On: October 17, 2007 16:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting really good. I had read chapters 29 and 30 and I must say. WOW. Those chapters were great. I should of guessed that Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru would fight for alpha. That was a cute scene with the pups and Kagome. Kagome is starting to act like a real mother to the pups and Rin. This is just getting really good. Sesshoumaru was sure surprised about the pen. I think that it was a good gift for him because he is a lord and everything. I wonder what would happen if or when Sesshoumaru can go to Kagome's time. Chapter 30 was a surprise. I liked it though. You did really good. Ohhh Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha are going to fight. I can't wait for that part. I know that you will make it really good. I still can't believe that sweet little Kagome would do something like that. But it still was good how Sesshoumaru acted from that. When Inuyasha said all those things I was like ohh that is so sweet, but I was also thinking that is he still in love with her or is he just possessive of her cause he doesn't want her to leave him. Now they are going to fight and I can't wait to see that. I know that it will be good, really good. Ohh and I see that you put this chapter up early, can't wait to see if you will do it again. I hope to have another chapter soon cause I just can't wait for it again. Ohhhh just getting to good.LOL
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Reviewed By: starfury On: October 17, 2007 14:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awe oh yes I do feel special :) I love it when you post :)
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 14:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, the dentist wasn't that bad, but I really stressed over it because I didn't know what to expect. This chapter was definitely good enough to excuse the cliffie! I feel like the intensity of the emotions really came though in this chapter. It was a necessary step before the actual battle. I should have thought of that too, but that's why your the author and I am the fan! I almost cried after Inuyasha's speech. I am glad that the brother's can speak to each other as they did even without the explanation of he past to heal wounds. It is a really good thing that Kagome and Kazue had their talk. I know if I was Kagome, I would have felt exactly the same way. I would also have licked Sesshoumaru's hand! :D And... shielded him from further... explanation. Somehow, you have not only turned Kagome into yourself, but into me as well! Well, frankly I don't think you changed her that much(from cannon), except made her a little more mature, but such events are bound to mature someone! Actually... Cannon Kagome would NEVER lick anyone's hand and then tease them too... but like I said, I think it was a natural enough progression. At first I was wondering how Sesshoumaru could get his hand on Kagome's mouth and make it unmovable without the added leverage of pulling her against his chest, but then I remembered that he has a big hand and super demon strength. I think anyone who could toss a Samurai fifty feet through the air into a river without so much as shifting their body weight around in the slightest is kind of beyond things such a s leverage... Wow Inuyasha... is definitely the embodiment of courage when you remember that little tidbit! It is obvious that Inuyasha knows he is going to loose otherwise the brotherly talk would have been a lot different. It seems like this battle is serving the purpose to not only save face(Inuyahsa's), but also to test Inuyasha's worth as a beta. Sesshoumaru isn't unwise enough to let Inuyasha's worth be wasted. He sort of has already proved his worth as beta, but he has never served as such and let's not forget the all important saving of face... We wouldn't want Sess to seem sentamental! I can see that Jaken would never intentionally betray his master, but he is just getting so extra disgruntled... I suppose he would be to cowardly to do something like that even if he thought it in his master's best interest. I have noticed that the pups each have their own personality. Yoshi's is coming out more lately, because he is getting more face time in the story, but not so much that he seems to be played as favorite. It would be weird to develop each one right away, so that is why I havn't bothered to try to memorize which name goes with which personality and where in the birth order they are. I figured they will all be developed a little here and there and I will eventually learn their names. During their introduction, you laid a foundation for each of their personalities anyway, which is perfect. Oh, I love the title of the chapter! lol so perfect! Well, I look forward to tomorrow as always!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 01:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chapter! I loved how Sesshoumaru reacted to the gifts. I also love how Kagome chewed out Inuyasha and sat him in front of everyone! I'm glad that she didn't sit him a billion times. I hate it when she does that. One is good enough especially in front of so many people. **sigh** I hate sit abuse... Jaken abuse is much more satisfying! It almost looks like Jaken is hating this wole thing with Kagome enough to betray Sesshoumaru... I hope not, that will just end up with one very permanantly squished Jaken. I see Kagome didn't get a chance to see if Kirara and Kazue liked their treats because someone had to open his big mouth and start something, which I hope to see finished in the next chapter since some evil author chose to leave us hanging. **tapps fingers loudly on the counter** I would be really iritated if I didn't know that I can count on a new chaper tomorrow.... ok, no I wouldn't this chapter is to good for a little cliffhanger to cause an upest over, Really I am suprer excited about this and the next chapter, my mood has more to do with my dentist apointment I had today... Where are those Jaken squeezies!?!?!?! AHHHHH! OH, one thing I just remembered, I am starting to love Yoshi so much! He's too cute and smart! He seems to have all of adult male's good features with an extra dolip of mini-Sessh cuteness on top! I thnk it is so awesome that Kagome and all the kids slept in a huge puppy pile! Someone should have taken a picture... Hmmm.... pictures... Ok, I am goign to go even further off topic if I keep this up. I look forward to tomorrow!
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Reviewed By: starfury On: October 16, 2007 22:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooooooooooo dun dun duhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh what is going to happen next... hahahaha you have to wait and see :*( *sniff sniff* plase hurry :)
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 20:07 EDT
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love the new chapters...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 16:37 EDT
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As always, amazing chapters. I like how they come in two's. It's like a package deal, you expect one, and what have you got? You get a bonus! Sorry. Hyperrrr. I only got the internet last year. I appreciate the wonders of the web VERY much. It's one of the only ways I can keep in touch with my friends in Indianna. They moved a couple weeks ago. I happen to have the hugest crush on one of them, and he's promised to come up in the summer. Rambling, sorry. You know how Naraku tricked Kikyou and InuYasha? I think you could use something like that with Sesshy and Kags. It's cruel, but if you are at a loss for what to do, there's an idea. =)
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 16, 2007 15:42 EDT
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Oh I just can't wait for the big fight between the two dogs! Poor Kagome I wonder how she will take it with them fighting for dominance. And i'm still incredibly curious about this *transformation* kagome is suppose to make. There's so many things that occur or happen. I just love this story so much. Your plot is amazing. Till next time ^^
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Reviewed By: Inu-babs_sexy_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 01:03 EDT
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OH MY GOD!!!! When is she gonna find her dad, this sis so great, UGH i want things to progress faster, omg, i cant wait till tomarrow, thank you for being such a great writer
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 00:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh well. Can't blame me for tryin'. Eh? Good chapter!
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: October 15, 2007 22:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story keeps getting better with every chapter you post. I love the humor you put into it. But at the same time, I can feel the tension building. Some drama is coming in soon, and I can't wait to read it.
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