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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 08, 2007 17:52 EDT
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Thanks for clearing that up! I wasn't sure if it went both ways or just one. I'm now extremely curious to find out about kagome's father and what he is like! and who he might be..hehe! Oh i just love this story. Its incredible creative and inventive. Keep up the wonderful work my lady!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 16:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It really is a wonderful thing for you to post every day! I love it! Shorter chapters aren't so bad when you know you can have another tomorrow. In fact, it is almost better! Miroku had always been a favorite of mine. I love him because he is so smart and joyful. **stops gushing about Miroku before it turns into a lovefest** Anyway, I knew he would figure it out. Oh, one thing I forgot to mention about an earlier chapter was... shouldn't the sent from Kazue and Shippo tell that they were around Sesshoumaru? Oh well... I guess Inuyasha's sulking could have kept him far enough away to not notice or maybe there is something they can do naturally to mask their scents.... short of rolling in somethign dead... ew... So, it looks like Kagome will have quite a welcome party. That should be fun! I feel so bad for Kagome's mom for having to keep this a secret and having to make such a sacrifice to help save the world. I hope she gets to have her husband back somehow. I wonder what Souta will think of all of this. Oh, and one more thing. I am so mad at you for making me laugh when Inuyasha got hurt! Poor puppy... (I'm not really mad) I can't wait until tomorrow! Really, writing these reviews is almost as fun as reading the updates... It's almost like reading the chapter again without suffering the redundancy. Don't give me too many hints about getting through the well... I figure things out too easily. I already have a suspicion about the nature of said plot device, so lets not narrow that suspicion. I like suspense to a certain extent, but not so much that I wish would sprout some claws and fangs in order to scratch up some answers. OK, I am going off topic. I should stop typing before I get too carried away.
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Reviewed By: starfury3000 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 02:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH oh my gosh! you have to hurry with the next part of the fic!!!!!!!!!!! I'm DIEING here! *looks down at self* yep dying to read the next part!!!!!!!!! so PLEASE HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...thank you :)
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so glad to see the mail notification for your update. I am glad that Shippo got around to marking Kagome and I bet that he look extra cute with his teardrop. I get the feeling that Kagome might have a bit more trouble getting through that well from now on since her resistance may have increased by about ten demons not wanting to suffer again along with the usual half demon. I also wonder if their bond would allow them to go through the well with Kagome, but it looks like there would be no purpose for that here. So, I am really excited to see the next chapter especially since you say that it is here that the story will be taking a more definite shape. I think I will have more to say on the it. I'm glad that you like my comments. I'm always hoping I don't get too pushy when I remark on things or criticize. It's nice to know that I am actually helping with my ramblings.
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 22:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...aims simi-automatic weapon at CMK2CMM's head..*shick,shick*... It's soooo sweet! More soon. Okay?
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 07, 2007 20:44 EDT
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oh!! Does kagome feel any pain from the lost connection? -Brilliant
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: October 07, 2007 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is incredible. There are so many good things I could say about this story I don't know where to start. Maybe the ratings I gave will give you some hint of what I think about your story. I eagerly await the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 20:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad that I finally got around to checking my e-mail! I had not read any of your updates since I last commented and I was kind of shocked to see how many times you had updated since. I'm sorry I will not be able to remember all of the hings I would have said about those chapters, but let me say that they were excellent and I find my previous praise of your writing shills lacking. I nearly died of trying to stifle my laughter regarding Sesshoumaru's approval of Kagome's power and the notice his eldest son took of it. Le me just say that the image you project through your writing was perfect. You do not use too many or too little words to describe events, leaving precisely the right amount of time to pass in the reading of the words for the events to play out in my mind. It must be some natural ability of yours because it is throughout your writing. just keep doing what you do and I will be thoroughly entertained. I kind of feel sorry for all demon children who are by their natural abilities made aware of the adult responses of their parents. He seemed to handle it well though, so I guess he wasn't embarrassed. I really like how you handle the thing between Sessh and Inu. It looks like there might be a place for him in this universe you have... altered(it is fanfiction). I do kind of think that he would have at least been able to put something together about the knowledge Sessh gave him regarding Kagome and the fact that his pups were attacked by Kikyo. He was under a lot of stress trying too find her and he sees to do his best thinking under stress going from cannon. If you want to write him as a dumb puppy, then I suppose it is just part of the story and at this point almost any sacrifice of any character's character is worth the continuation of this story. I suppose the loophole in my theory is that he was feeling an intense amount of guilt. We all know what guilt did to him when everyone (except Shippo) nearly died in the hut from poison and smoke. I always find it adorable when he acts like a dog. I CANNOT imagine Sesshoumaru sitting like a dog how Inuyasha does... ok if I tried maybe, but it would have to be in a damned good scene otherwise I can't quite believe it. I hope the pups can get though their jealousy. I feel so bad for them that Kagome allowed Shippo to call her mama and not them, but I of course understand. I am shocked that Kagome didn't think of it. I'm sure she will eventually. Well enough rambling from me. I will be commenting on your next chapter as soon as it is posted and I read it. I WILL be keeping my eye out for it this time instead of neglecting my email.
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 17:20 EDT
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2 updates?????!!!!! you are the most amazing writer i have ever seen!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 06, 2007 16:42 EDT
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No harsh feelings with the dangling of the bacon. It actually keeps the story going and makes you need to read more. I love how the story is going right now and i can't wait to find out what the third thing kagome needs will be. Till next time (which will hopefully be soon ^^)
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Title: sooo goood
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: October 06, 2007 01:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
From me this story is always going to get a 10 overall rating. Its just that good. I'm glad Sesshomaru found Shippo and not someone else. That was a good way for Shippo to be found. You have a very creative mind. Now the long awaited secret is how Sesshomaru is going to stay with Kagome, but I know that you already have an idea for that and I know that it will be good just like the rest of the story is. The funny part was when Kouga got so scared he ran with his tail in between his legs.LOL. Hope to see another great chapter soon cause this is just gettting to good to stop and I hope that you don't. I really wonder now that Shippo is with Kagome will she stay even longer. Anyways hope you continue to make this story really good eventhough its already like that.LOL. Good luck on the next chapter hope to see it soon.
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Reviewed By: phantomphan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 00:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story plz update soon
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Reviewed By: ladydot On: October 05, 2007 22:01 EDT
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aww shippou is finally back with Kagome! I wonder if this will make her stay an extra day or two. I can't wait to see fluffy's pups reactions to the kit. Still as brilliant as ever in these chapters. Its beautifully written couldn't find any errors. So keep up the magnificent work and as always you end the chapter with bacon on the string...^^
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 21:04 EDT
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wow, this is the first story i have read that doesn't stop updating when i read it!
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 15:46 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! When are you going to put up more? I really liked how Kouga was dreaming about Kagome. I laughed. This is an awesome fanfic, and I think you should definitely continue with it.
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