| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 16:17 EST
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^-^ Thanks! I almost cried when Kags died. Great job!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: November 07, 2007 20:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, what will happen now? Kagome can't just die after getting so close to Sesshoumaru and trying to find her father. Then Inuyasha is still out there and the new moon is approaching. I wonder what Sesshoumaru is going to do now. I noticed that he hasn't taken his wrist from her neck so maybe there is still a chance. This is getting to good for Kagome to just die right here. No way, I know that you have something up your sleeve for this. Then the children must be so afraid right now. Since they can feel that she has died. They must be going crazy. Ohh, I hope Kagome doesn't die because that would be the end of the story and this is getting to good to stop. Ohh, I can't wait to see what happens next. Sorry late review more test.
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 17:18 EST
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Aww, thanks! You're so amazing! Don't feel bad if you can't, though!
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 16:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn cliffhangers! You better update soon or go into hiding......GRRRRRRRR!
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Reviewed By: J-Lou On: November 07, 2007 01:44 EST
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I absolutely love your story its so good i can hardly wait till you get the next chapter out keep up the absolutely amazing work
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2007 16:55 EST
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My birthday is this Saturday. You don't have to do a double post, just put up one chapter (if you can) and that'll be the best! :D
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 18:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter left me feeling all warm and fuzzy inside! It seems that Kagura has a really good heart to be able to be happy for Kagome. I hope that she is freed and that she finds love. Hmm... I have suspicions on who she could find love with, but I think I will keep my crazy musings to myself for a while. I haven't ever heard of that pairing. By the way, I loved the chapter before this one, but I didn't get time to review it because my laptop died! I am now using my mom's computer and it is in the same room as the cat's litter box... so... I must get my laptop revived as soon as possible... I wish I could just have Sesshy slash Tenseiga over it rather than ship it off somewhere, but alas, I don't think it would work anyway. It is good to see that the toad is finally being agreeable. Perhaps all it took was the fear of Sesshoumaru's wrath to open his eyes to the kindness that humans can possess towards even one such as he. I'm so worried about Inuyasha... I hope you tell us about how he is doing soon. I got a lot of ideas from Souta's musings... I get the feeling that his father will be returning once it is all over, if he survives... so it seems that things will have to be explained to him at some point. I hope he doesn't go into a teenaged fit of anger and rebellion once he discovers that he has been deprived of his father for some weird saving the world scheme. Hopefully his father had some practice with modern razors before he went back. It also seems that Souta is a lot more preceptive than it seemed and that he is just as sneaky as his sister... I look forward to the next chapter. i hope you can go back to daily posts, but I understand that you might not feel up to it with that thumb and the foot bothering you. I hope they heal soon. It looks like you did in fact have a nice Halloween and I hope that the pain didn't put too much of a damper on it.
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Reviewed By: little rini On: November 03, 2007 18:10 EDT
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LOL. There was a great start to this chapter. LOL. If it makes you feel better, I was left alone like those kids at the halloween party and it turned out for the best because I'm not like my family. :P
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: November 02, 2007 21:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is wow. You really out done yourself with this lemon. It was great. I wouldn't have thought that you would put her montly bleading in there. That just made it even better. I knew that you said that a lemon was coming up and I had thought that it was going to be a short lemon or something. I must say that I am surprised but you always surprise me with every chapter that comes up. That was cute how you had Kagome get mad at Sesshoumaru. Just like every other girl when there montly comes on, at least I am. Excuse me getting off track. Anyways I wouldn't have thought that Sesshoumaru would have helped her like that. I thought that he had some type of spell to make her pain go away but this is even better. Ohhh, this lemon was in so much detail that I must say that I loved it. Some authors just write a short lemon with out that much detail in it. But you put enough detail in it to make it a very sweet and great lemon. I congraduate you on that. I loved it and I can't say anything else. Just that I hope the rest of the story just keep getting better and better cause this was good. I do wonder though what it is that Kirara is keeping a secret about. At least Sango knows that Miroku loves her. Ohh and I can't forget the little ones. That was so cute that they are worried about Kagome so much that they want to stop her pain and who better to do it then there father. You out done yourself and I hope that every chapter after is as good as each one that you have written. Good job.
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 18:13 EDT
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OMG. I love this story. You definitely have to upload some pictures of the pumpkins. Mine was really cute. It was a bat, but I can't get any pictures now because it's all... yucky...lol. Guess what? My birthday is in 8 days!! Woohoo!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 02:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry to have neglected you, my favorite author with my favorite story. I have been suffering from a communication blockage like Mercury in retrograde times ten. I recently had a change in my life and it took some getting used to. Anyway, about the story. I'm not sad about Inu no Taishou being an abusive parent. Judging from the memories, he was probably abused himself and though he was doing the right thing or some other messed up thing that causes psychologists to go crazy. I also liked the bath scene in chapter 39... I feel like maybe I should make a list and draw and color the boys so I can keep them straight in my mind. I I had time and skill I probably would. I am pretty sure that I was giggling my was through chapter 40. I think that guy had all of the combined stupidity of all of the guys that had ever liked Kagome. I think Sesshoumaru has a think for Kagome's ass... I also think that even if he didn't already want his arm back he would quickly find the ability to grasp one cheek in each hand reason enough to want that arm. ... now I am thinking about sexy stripes in sexy places for some reason... I wonder if he has them on his ankles... anyway... It seems that someone is going to have to come to Inuyasha's rescue... and I be that Kagome will be quite worried... didn't I already say this? I think it is wonderful that Sesshy likes to show off. Such a beautiful and perfect creature should not withhold his grace power from those lucky enough to wittiness it. I'm so so so so so happy that everyone gets to call Kagome "Mama". I was smiling through the whole part of that chapter. It looks like the kitty, doggie and dragon like to gossip. Cool. Well... I'm done rambling for now. Have a wonderful holiday!
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Reviewed By: MertMidnightAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 14:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't normally read stuff over 30 chapters, but this is awesome!!! I especially love Sesshou-kun's line at the end of the latest chappie. Update soon, onegai!!!! My friends and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 19:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i love this story!!! please up date as son as you can!! ja ne!
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Title: sooo goood
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: October 27, 2007 15:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh, this is getting so good. I just read the chapter from yesterday and I must say, WOW. Those were some good chapters. I liked the message thing about Sesshoumaru's mother. I wonder what she is trying to tell him. I wonder what is in that scroll. It must be something important for her to contact Sesshoumaru after death and through Kagome. Then Sesshoumaru's son tells him about the aura and them mixing. I would have thought that he would have kept it a secret from his father, but you surprised me on that one. Sesshoumaru seems so shocked about it. Then he gets all happy. Never would have thought to see Sesshoumaru happy. He's in his own little world until Kagome brings him out of it. His beast tried to tell him all along. Then that villager came, he must not be to smart. I thought that was funny how you made that villager. Ohh I also liked the part where Sesshoumaru grabs Kagome's butt. Never would have seen that coming. You really surprised me though when you made Kagome start to hear things at a demons level. I would have never thought of that. I wonder what that could be about though. I think it probably has more to it then just Sesshoumaru's youki. I know that you would probably bring up something about that later. Though even I am getting worried about Inuyasha. I wonder what you are going to do about him. He should know that Kagome will always be there for him. I hope that next chapters are as good as the rest of the chapters you have written. Hope to see one soon.
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Two chapters today! I actually went into withdrawl yesterday.
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