| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 04:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome! I can't wait to find out what comes next...I bet Koga will sense her marks. Huh?
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: October 05, 2007 00:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This just keeps getting better and better. I really wanted Kagome to stay, but I know she has duties. I still wonder what happened to Shippo since he ran out the hut. I hope they notice sometime soon that he is gone. Anyways this story is the best. I come on here all the time to see if you have written a new chapter yet. I hope you keep it up cause so far your the only author I know on here that writes at least one or two chapters a day and that's a plus in my book. Well hope you keep writing this story and never stop. I just can't wait for the next chapter. Soooo much waiting.LOL. Hope to see one soon cause I don't think I can wait any longer for another chapter. Its getting to good and Kouga is going crazy if he thinks he is going to get Kagome.LOL
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Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 22:21 EDT
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you are truely my hero for updating so much....i am so excited for your story and how well it is progressing.....i feel kinda bad for koga that boy needs to find himself another girl....
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 12:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazingly awesome so far! I was waiting for you to put up some more chapters, and now that you have, I can't wait for the next one! Good job!
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 08:37 EDT
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holy crap!!! awesome story! i wonder what the second gift is???
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 03, 2007 20:34 EDT
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I want the puppy!! oh i'd be cuddling it so much. And i really wish i had a camera for kagomes little arm rubbing of fluffy and then finding out it wasn't a dream! perfect moments. I can't wait till i find out what happens next! So much suspense of what will occur or if things will go this way or so..ah! i need to stop thinking so much. Alrighty well till next time!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 01:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have come to the conclusion that you are just too good of a writer! You write your updates faster than anyone else that I know of and each and every time I am left with the feeling that an update the next day would not be soon enough! I just loved how Sesshoumaru was FLIRTING!!! I don't think that I could have taken it myself and I am no prude. When he flirts he leaves no room for misinterpretation by his target. Somehow I think this is totally in character for him. Somehow I get the feeling that the other six pups will be getting their fair share of cuddles. ...while I am all for Jaken getting kicked clean across the dinning hall and scraping a bloody scuff on his nose on the celling at the zenith of his flight just for opening that beak and issuing forth his horrid skwaks, I am glad that he shut up the gossipers... I do hate gossip... lol but who wouldn't be shocked at Sesshoumaru's behavior... yes... I know... Rin. So is Kagome going home in hte next chapter? Do we get to see the supprise? Does she meat up with the rest of her origional group? ..... Oh I am getting all anxious over the next chapter again!
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Title: great
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: October 03, 2007 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you are the best to be able to write two or more chapters in one day and then write another chapter the next day. Keep up the work. Your story just keeps getting better and better. The pups are getting jealous of there own brother. Hope they can work out the whole being with Kagome thing. I think that she would make a great mother to them. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: ladydot On: October 02, 2007 23:04 EDT
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oh simply brilliant! i just love this story. You have my full undivided attention. Its a master piece and i can't wait to find out what will occur next. You have me leading by a piece of string like a starving dog! Excellent job.
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 02:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!! MORE! MORE! MORE!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 01:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you have proved you excellence as a writer. I had the feeling that the pups would be smart and articulate and adorable in person and you did a great job of proving that. I wonder if Shippo already has some sort of mark on Kagome, perhaps a kitsune variety preformed differently than the one the pups made... but I will have to wait... and then you had to go and make the wait all that more difficult with that cliffhanger! **pouts**
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Title: great
Reviewed By: Monk-MIko On: October 01, 2007 22:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh, this story is just getting to good. I thought one of Sesshomaru's sons would say something like that. I hope Shippo doesn't get into any trouble while he is out there alone. He must have a strong connection with Kagome. I can't wait for the next chapter. I will continue to read this story until the very end. I hope to see an update soon cause I just can't wait anymore.
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 01, 2007 18:14 EDT
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Oh! i'm loving it. Its amazing. And now what had kagome in such a state of shock? can't wait to find out what will happen next
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Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 18:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwwww..... i love it i love it.....it really is hard to find a good s/k fic that is really good......kudos to you....im sooo excited for this fic your don=ing and excellent job......have fun writing and update soon
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: September 30, 2007 14:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is absolutely amazing! The plot is extremely creative. Its hard to find a good s/k fic without the same cross or borderline of same ideas and all. Your fanfic is wonderful and i hope you update soon so i can find out what will happen next!
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