| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 00:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much. Sessh is OOC but in a good way. I love the inimate scenes they have together. I also love the way you don't debase Inuyasha. He is a great character and I hate it when people who write S/K fics make him out to be a complete idoit. The story line is very original and I can't help but be sucked in. I usually don't like when the story makes Kagome have new abilities because it usually sound cheesy. Your story is different in the way that it does this so I very much approve. Please feel better and I hope that your mother does as well.
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 15:53 EST
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I'm sorry that you all are feeling yucky. I hope your mom gets better, (you too, of course) and I think it would be prudent to get her to the doctor's. It doesn't sound normal to get sick every couple of weeks for long periods of time. I waste WAY too much of my time watching the Discovery Health Channel. *smacks self in forehead* I haven't been feeling 100% lately, I guess it's getting around. I totally love these past few chapters! I can't wait for the next one. I just might die. lol. Feel better!
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 09:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. I'm sorry to hear that you're sick. I, too, am susceptable to the horrible upper respiratory problems associated with asthma (especially when sick). Do you have a nebulizer? If so, try to talk your doctor into giving you some samples of Xopenex. That shit is UNBELIEVABLE! So much better than Albuterol. It will clear you up right away, and make you feel kinda fuzzy (not in an intoxicated sort of way, or anything), and much better for a couple hours. Feel better and write soon!
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Reviewed By: little rini On: November 15, 2007 09:08 EST
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I hope you feel better soon. I feel really bad for your mom, but (I'm just saying this to disturb you. :P ) are you sure she's not pregnant? Take care of yourselves. We can wait a little while if it means you're health.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 00:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was hot! **fans self** you kind of made me forget all of the nice things I was going to say about the first part of the chapter... That's really cool that Rin is a miko and that Kagome can do little demon things... I think Kouga is in for a huge surprise when he sees Inuyasha... I hope that you and your family get better soon. I used to get sick this time of year all of the time too. It turns out that I had a mold problem. Once I distanced myself from the mold I didn't get sick ad much and not that I live in a new and totally un-moldy house I hardly get sick at all... well, at least not like that. When I moved out of my old place I found that any place where the wall had a piece of furniture against it and condensation collected was covered in mold. Of course, my bed was against the wall. My new house doesn't get condensation on the walls, but the nature of my former dwelling was such that it was almost a constant. ok... I'm rambling... I'll be looking forward to your next chapter as always and may it come soon due to good health.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 00:00 EST
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AHH!!! Hi! This is Kavfh from Fanfiction.net! I love this story! I really do! I don't know what I'll do if you don't update soon! Thanks again for the names of the other good Sess.kag stories!
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Reviewed By: little rini On: November 13, 2007 11:46 EST
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Now that I think about it, she would probably use another language to keep from saying it frequently. Since she's japanese, she would use English, but since we speak english, you may want to use japanese. Results for 'heel' English Japanese heel hi-ru, hiretsukan
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Reviewed By: little rini On: November 13, 2007 11:41 EST
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Heel would be funny. I can just imagine Sesshy jerked around to kneel at her heel.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 21:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
from scanning through your responses to the reviews, I can see most people are voting for "heel" as the subjugation word. I think that is as good a word as any and she will not likely say it is every day speech. I don't think that Sesshoumaru would want to go shoe shopping with her anyway. The only think I would wonder about is would the homonym of heel have the same effect? A miko who cannot say heal? Perhaps the fact that they are supposedly speaking Japanese and we are reading a "translation" of what they would be saying would take care of that. I really enjoyed this chapter. It is nice to once in a while not have to think about how all of the new events changes everything or how the story has deepened and just see how everyone reacts to everything. Miroku is so funny. I could just imagine him sitting in the flowers trying to occupy Rin. I am going to cut my review short today, I have to go do some things. I look forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 14:26 EST
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Thank you so much for the new chapter! I seriously have to say this: Kagome is kick-ass when it comes to being a mom! I had an idea for the word for the necklace for Sesshy, but I lost it... It has to be something though that wouldn't hurt (like 'sit' for InuYasha), but something that will get him to stop or something in any situation . I was thinking about it last night. I am in desperate need of a thesaurus. lol. Thanks again for the update! =D
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Reviewed By: syoze On: November 11, 2007 15:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry about the ants but when i moved into my new house we had mold in the basement cause neighbors pipe burst & it destroed everthing that was made of paper, wood, cardboard, foam, well plastic was easy to clean. we had about $1000. we had about 40 boxes of books that caint be replaced & 10 of those boxes were encyolpedia sets, so i feel your pain. about this chapter, really good & i have no ideas about the name for sessy's beads. caint wait for the next chapter, syoze
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 11:57 EST
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Whew! I finally caught up! I started reading this fic when it was first put up, but I am a teacher, and only have a few minutes a day. this weekend, i did a marathon read! Fabulous story!!! I absolutely love it! Thanks for updating each day, or nearly that. i wiat eagerly for stories to update once every 3 months sometimes! Your story is so well thought out! I love the prophecy. wonderful grammar, by the way. really makes the story more ejoyable!! Thanks again!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 03:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been beyond impressed with the last few chapters. I am happy about how you changed, or completed Inuyasha and I had always hoped that Kagome and Inuyasha would mark each other. I have always been curious about how Kagome's mark would manifest it's protection and I am pleased with the barrier. I also liked the Miko justice that Kagome dished out.I was wondering if any of those perfect little children were ever going to misbehave and I am kind of relieved that at least some of them did, but I hope that the next time any of them does something they shouldn't that they do not put themselves in danger again.... but, that is in all likely hood too much to ask. I don't know how you managed it, but somehow, you have increased my interest in this story with the developments of these chapters. I am sure that it will only get better. ok... I was thinking on a subjugation word for Sesshoumaru while lavishing attention upon my feline companion which she is currently demanding it occurred to me that "fluffy" would be a rather humorous word to use, but probably a very bad idea... but still... the scenarios that come to mind over that word make me giggle. I just thought you might want to giggle too.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: November 10, 2007 23:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always did wonder why Sesshoumaru doesn't have a mark, but everyone else does. I wonder what you will write about that later. That was so cute with the discription of Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha laying with Kagome and getting a good night sleep. The twins got into so much trouble. It was cute how they just wanted to see their mom. I had really thought that, that miko would kill the twins. Lucky for them Kagome, Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha came. Though I do wonder what their punishment would be cause I don't think Kagome is the type to do something harsh to them. They tired their little bodies out looking for Kagome. I do wonder where Kagome got the power to take other miko's powers away from them or change them. Another thing that I can't wait to find out. I hope that you have another chapter up soon cause this is getting really good. I think that you did a wonderful job on this chapter.
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Reviewed By: little rini On: November 09, 2007 09:21 EST
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Wow.... I'm Jealous. You have such a cool family. The only people I consider family now I'm not blood related to.
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