| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 14:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, sorry I seem to blab on and on about Resident Evil. The games are part of the horror, action & shooting genre. Have you seen the movies? The movies are kinda based on the games but... You know I should just do the whole asking to be your friend on myspace thing instead of talking about video games here. Sorry once again. Gee, I wonder what Sesshoumaru is going to say to Hojo. Hojo is just plain creepy! You know he kinda reminds me of Kouga. They both are hell bent on trying to convince themselves and others that Kagome secretly wants them huh. Poor Sesshy he has Hojo to deal with in Kagome's time and Kouga to deal with in the feudal era. But hopefully the pups and Yasha will deal with Kouga soon, right? I'm anxiously awaiting the fun! Until next time ^_^
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Title: ch 60
Reviewed By: mysesshou (not logged in) On: December 19, 2007 10:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My mom was rear-ended back in April. Her neck still hurts and makes work difficult. She hasn't settled on the insurance dollar amount yet because who knows how much money she will need before it stops hurting. Hope your mother will be okay soon. What a great fic! I'm so glad they don't instantly fall in love and the fic is over in five chapters. I can't believe how you authors do it. I had to write a 60 page paper on a circuit board process and it was sooo hard to do. I applaud all writers for their skill and effort! ~MySesshou
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Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai On: December 19, 2007 05:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The pups, Shippo, and Rin were absolutely adorable in their planning and scheming. Hilarious. Can't wait to read as their plans are put into action. I feel so sorry for Sesshoumaru. The poor guy is having sex with no completion. Since Kagome is still "technically" a virgin, she doesn't know what she's missing. The shower scene was awsome EXCEPT for one thing. I don't think I need explain further. Even I'm beginning to feel sexually frustrated! Could someone please tell me what is a wifebeater besides a jerk beating on his wife? I keep coming across that word for an ZKUXitem of clothing in several stories. I just know it's some kind of "shirt". I think that is such a sick name to give to a piece of clothing. Evidently the fashion designer who came up with that terminology must have a few screws loose. Sorry, I digressed from the story but oh how I hate that word. Anyway, I'm on pins and needles for the next update to read his reactions to his first visit to a mall and the childrens revenge (that includes Inuyasha).hehe
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 22:38 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel much better now that Sesshoumaru has received some well deserved relief. I don't know why I was fussing over that, keeping score I suppose. I felt Sessy was being slighted.
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 22:16 EST
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fabulous shower scene!!!! merry christmas!
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Title: review for you
Reviewed By: Arry On: December 18, 2007 21:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehe twas another great chappie and whoo was this lime freakin hott might have to take up your suggestion and invest in some plastic lol Hope she looks down next time hmm. And I shall be sending out destiny's gift and card this week sometime look for it hehe. update soon can't wait tll the shopping scene wonder how kags is going to control her Beast and if she'll realze she actually has one now and the tricks of the kids too cute can't wait but must lol see you soon Loves Arry
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: December 18, 2007 11:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what will happen now. After their little bathing session. The children and Inuyasha are getting along just fine. I wonder will they also trick Kouga's friends as well since they didn't really want to be there in the beginning. I just wonder how the plan will go after they set it. Ohh, this is just getting to good. Now Sesshoumaru and Kagome are going out shopping. I wonder how that will turn out. When I got to the end of the chapter I was like it can't be over with yet. It was just getting to the good part. That ending just left me hanging, but I liked it. Now I have to keep reading to see if you update because this is getting to good. Can't wait for the next chapter. I know that it will be good.
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 10:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A really nice chapter! Can't wait for the next chapter where we see Sesshoumaru do Tokyo! :D
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Reviewed By: BluEyedTigress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 01:34 EST
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Happens to me all the time. Especially when I read a book or story that has different accents or lots of emotion in it. Quite interesting, indeed, mi laddie. Not much in the way of acc-scents tonigh', but I jus' couldn' help meself, now then coul' I? Yet anoddir gr-ate read, mi darlin'. Must be off, ner'... I kin almos' say, Top of Da Mornin' ta yas!
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Reviewed By: TreetopScout [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 23:46 EST
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Finally! Geez, I was beginning to wonder what a girl had to do around this place to get some Sesshoumaru shower action! You did not disappoint me. The only disappointing thing was getting an email alert right when I had to leave for work today. It's really hard trying to answer questions when you're imagining Sesshoumaru in the shower. Naked. Wet. Hard. Oh crap, there I go again. Anyway, brilliant work like usual. Can't wait to read about the battle between Kouga and the kids. Always love to see Shippou get some more screen time! (Air time? Word time? Eh, whatever.) Can't wait until the next chapter. ...Seriously, I can't wait. I'm going to go make some dinner and when I come back it better be up!
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 20:42 EST
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"Onward Mush"? Kagome is really changing, isn't she? I laughed out loud reading that one. Aw... Sess called her his mate to her face. Or back. (Grin) I'm pleased to see Inu join the kiddos in their pranks. That's EXACTLY what uncles are supposed to do. So tell me (not really) are Sesshoumaru and Kagome going to run into dearest delusional HoJo in town? I don't know why, but I'd really enjoy seeing him get owned. After all, his Feudal Era counterpart (Kouga) sure is going to get owned at the hands of some pretty clever Inu pups and one helpful uncle Inuyasha. I almost feel sorry for Kouga, key word being *almost*. There's still so many things we've yet to see! Kagome's dad, Sesshomaru's birthday gift to Kagome, Souta approaching Sesshomaru to tell him it's okay to date . . . er... mate his sister. This chapter feels different, though. I can't put my finger on it. Anticipation anticipation, yes, but it's getting comfortable. I guess I shouldn't be feeling too sorry for Sesshomaru. What's a few more teases when he's practically immortal, right? Anyway, we get to see his take on modern era. :) Yeay!
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 19:18 EST
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Ah! I wonder what Kouga's reaction to "his womans" behavior is going to be. Its going to be awesome *giggles*! I can't wait to see an orange Kouga, covered in tree sap, with short hair and wrinkling his nose at the rotten fish smell or other "horrible" prank those adorable pups will put Kouga through. Psychonauts does sound interesting but I don't have an X-Box. I have a PS2 that I seem to play constantly. I just can't get over my Resident Evil games. I love to play those games over and over. Sorry I'm rambling aren't I. Can't wait for the next update! ceira
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Title: syoze
Reviewed By: syoze [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 19:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i'm back on the net. the eco-lodge we r staying at in hokkaido has dsl. im so happy, hell i would have taken dial-up. anyway i really enjoyed chapters 60 & 61. and if you are wonder right mow its 9am tuesday in the small city of otaru. well we ar staying in the forrest part but its still nice. i'll be in toyko around the 22, well it will b the 21 in the states. cant wait to see what the kids have instore 4 koga cant wait til next chapter on love syoze p.s. it is so amazing here. from the fresh air- to stars in the sky at night. im dreading going back to tokyo
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 15:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man cant belive u already got 2 61. keep up the work. oh, and sesshy nervous? thats funny. YAY! SESSHY GETS BACK HIS ARM! TBA.
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: December 16, 2007 12:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know...I probably should have read the chapters that I was behind on before I had my Aha! moment and sent the previous review... hehehe ^^' I love your writing so much...*bows to SunSet Miko* U.U You are the first person That I have read that gave Sess his arm back in a totally unique way! I kinda didn't see that one coming! You have me on the edge of my seat... Again! keep up the good work. I am reading this story and leaving my Laurell Hamilton books alone. (hich is a miracle mind you...)you have an amazing touch for story telling. You should definately do some original writings and get a publisher.. You are really good. Oh, and before I forget... *digs through purse* Here are some cookies! *Hurls handfulls of death-by chocolate cookies at SunsetMiko* These are for you... Because you seem to keep Kags in character throughout all of these changes that are happening to her... This is no easy task. A lot of people have a hard time keeping Kags from going OOC. You do it flawlessly. I am so happy ^.~ It is nice to see. Keep up the good work and I will read you later... hehehe *laughs at own lame joke*.. InuPriestess
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