| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 12:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I never had a problem with FF.Net either but *sighs* whatever. On a happier note I really enjoyed this chapter but I'm wondering why Sesshoumaru won't tell Kagome about her beasty side coming out and him having to put her in check. I mean I'm sure she would understand and want to seek out some answers to why her inner inu would all of a sudden decide to pop up (at least I hope I'm on the right track about Kags having an inner inu). Sorry but I chanced a guess. Am I right? *crosses fingers*. But in all fairness I can understand why he is afraid of Kags reaction to the whole making her submit. So, what video game was Souta teaching Sesshoumaru? LOL. Has anyone asked you that question yet? Sorry I'm rambling. Thanks for the update. ceira
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 09:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, somehow I was so sure you'd restore his arm in this chapter. Before any of Kagome's friends discover that he has only one arm. If his arm is gonna be restored, it'd better be before the girls get back, or they might later question where on earth that arm came from. XD It almost sounded like the beginning of a lemon at the end of the chapter? Is it time yet? Or are they gonna continue teasing each other until they burst from all the sexual tension. Man, I bet it's gonna be mind-blowing! :D Thanks for updating so often, it makes me so happy! :D
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Reviewed By: rosymouse [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 06:33 EST
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I will be blunt here,and in all probability wrong, does Kagomes demon heritage come from Inu Yasha and Rin? and since being descended from a hanyou(who are graced with some cuter body parts, eg ears and tails)will Kagome scare up a tail???? and thankyou for giving Sesshy back his arm, can't wait to see him in action with two!
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Reviewed By: TreetopScout [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 05:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't reviewed your story before (and for that I apologize), but I finally had to post my thoughts. There have been very few stories that I've found online that have made me check my email constantly waiting for my update notification. This is definitely one of those! You've done a great job creating your new characters and expanding upon those that already existed. It can be especially hard writing for characters like Sesshomaru when all we've seen/read of him has mostly been him doing one thing: killing. Okay, okay, and glaring. So, just wanted to say that I love it. Keep going. If you have to write a whole chapter focusing on teaching Sesshomaru how to parallel park, go for it! I want to especially thank you for posting this chapter when you did. I'm facing a serious ice storm in my neck of the woods (Iowa) right now and it probably is only a matter of time before my power quits and my laptop battery runs out. I think this will help hold me over until I can read the next one. Maybe. Probably not. Thanks again though!
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Title: yeay
Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 02:18 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im totally diggin kagome's transformation into something else....im guessin a demon....since she has a voice that talks to her much like sesshoumaru....but thats just my guess....well any ways i am waaayyyy excited at how well thins is commin along keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: janomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 02:16 EST
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no problem everyone needs an ego boost at some time or another helps keep the writers block away... i think
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 00:15 EST
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YEA! that was awsome! i loved how she got rid of hojo. keep it up. i cant wait to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Broken Tainted Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 18:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I first found this fic on a single spark then found it here. Have to say that I love the way you write.
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Title: sorry
Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 14:51 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry that I haven't reviewed the last 3 chapters. For some reason ASS & FF.Net just won't load for me so here I am on MM.org. GRRR, so frustrating! Anyways I really enjoyed the last 3 chapters. I wonder what Inuyasha will do to help keep the kids entertained? I doubt tag, simons says or red rover is out of the question for "Uncle Inuyasha"? LOL. That would be pretty funny. Oh and the whole Kagome's beast popping up out of now where was so awesome. I was wondering when her beast would pop up *grins*. Anyways thanks for the update! Laters ceira
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Title: syoze
Reviewed By: syoze [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 12:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter. im missing all of the the group left back in the past. can the kids pull some practical jokes on the wovles koga inparticular? anyway cant wait for the next chapter one love syoze
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Reviewed By: Little Rini On: December 10, 2007 10:28 EST
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I'd come see your myspace page, but I'm a little strange in that area. You see, I love computers and high tech electronics, but..... There are some things I hold out on until I have no choice. For instance - I waited until 2 years ago to get a cellphone. Until I actually needed one badly. I don't have a myspace page. I'm holding out until it'a an absolute requirement. :P I hope you get to put up more story soon. :) I like the torture of Kouga. It's just too much fun.
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Reviewed By: tixylix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 06:51 EST
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now thats one smug demon lord
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 03:11 EST
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*grins* The 'voices in my head'-part made me think of this: http://tallydragon.deviantart.com/art/Her-Inner-Beast-SK-comic-64773506 XD Ooh, next we get to see Sesshoumaru exploring modern Tokyo, right? :D I really hope you'll get back to updating every or every other day. I know it'll be hard during the holidays, but I have faith in that you'll make it. ;) It's a shame I didn't see you asking for christmas cards earlier, since I don't think it will get there on time if I sent one today... :( Oh well, maybe next year. :)
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Reviewed By: janomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 02:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to tell u that this story couldn't be better even if it was written paid novelist like wow it is incredible i have found my self looking forward to your updates (i've been checking my email like 30 times a day for the past few days) so kudos to you and keep it up i would really hate it if this story died like the one i was trying to write and ended up deleting because i hit a major block (p.s. you've already hit my all time favorite fic spot so don't let me down).... just thought you needed an ego boost
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Title: Chapter 57! YES!
Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 01:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch.57 was great! Now Kagome's developing her own 'beast' i see. I'm guessing that has to do with her 'transformation'? Also, i applaud your limes so far, you make them meaningful & beautiful, yet very erotic, but not at all dirty. It says alot about your writing. I hate reading a good 'fic that makes the intimate scenes seem more like a cheap porn. ew. And I also love how your building everyone up to that moment between Sess/Kag! I have a feeling a LOT of people will be having a cigarrette afterwards! LOL! Anyway, keep up the amazing work!! Hope to see more chapters soon! ^_^ P.S. i sent you a friends request on myspace. SEE YA!
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